my rap

Hahaha was just replying to his reply, but don't read it if you don't want to? Not that hard. I'm probably coming off as an *******, but that's how things work on the internet. Things get misinterpreted.

Aaah come on now Zachre, be a good boy and post one of ur lyrics alright ...

Hahah I can tell if that's being condescending, but I will when I don't have so much work to do.

Originally Posted by Molotova

How come you get to swear without the shxt gettin' censored ?

Its all in the capitals but lol the censoring is funny

Originally Posted by VivaPalestina

Its all in the capitals but lol the censoring is funny

Hahaa, I like the censoring shxt too So it's all in the capitals huhhh ?

Originally Posted by Zachre

Hahah I can tell if that's being condescending, but I will when I don't have so much work to do.

Uh ... I've got a job too, plus I've got a household to run. It's just that I write a rhyme in like 15 or 30 minutes. How much time do u need ?

I was saying for lyrics, like something I actually take time on

If I just wanted to rhyme for fun,
I would have already been done.
I just thought you wanted something real
Something that had an emotional appeal.

:P

My heart begins to beat
I start to feel the heat
It was dead for so long
And I was so wrong

I don't deserve to feel this way
I loved her, and I ran from it til today.
I left her without even saying a word,
I lied to myself into thinking my message was heard.

I locked my chest in itself, and hid the key
How was I to know the key would find me
I'm an ******* for what I did
I'm a fool for what I didn't

I told myself it was better like this
I believed that bullshit, ignorance is bliss
But the denial soon ended
I no longer pretended

I might be a day late and a dollar short
But at least I can say fate took the court
My heart is breaking out of its cage
This is sure to cause rage

But happy birthday Dorkface
I miss you, but my heart races
Because I don't deserve you
But I hope that's something you see through.

I love you, I know I'm a ****up
Even if my luck's up
I'm right here waiting, praying for things to be alright....

This isn't anything..... I just needed to try to put some feelings into words. Its know a rap or lyric... but yeah.

To swear without censors, look up cyrillic lettering.

Oh zach, you would make a good poet one day

Yeah, I could edit that into a song, but I just wanted to put my emotion into words haha. But thanks Viva

A poet is not a rapper though ... But nice try.

Originally Posted by Molotova

A poet is not a rapper though ... But nice try.

Agreed, and the best thing about poetry is that it doesnt have to rhyme

Hahaha you don't realize how similar poems and songs/raps are. The only difference is the rhythm and the background music.

Originally Posted by Zachre

Hahaha you don't realize how similar poems and songs/raps are. The only difference is the rhythm and the background music.

No, I have no problem writing poetry, but I cant rap to save my life

Originally Posted by Molotova

Only nuclear ish Up in here is The Bomb I drop
I call it HipHop non Stop 'til I'm on Top
'Cuz I just never get enough
Of that good old tough Stuff
Now this Ain't no bluff
I'm always off the cuff
Kickin' it straight Oldskool
A Bxtch gotta keep her cool
Flippin' it with my sick rules
Spittin' Shxt 'til it is in Istanbul
Ya say ya made of steel
But that, I'mma need to see
I bet I can make ya kneel
Now what's the deal ?
In the end we all appear to be
The kind we ain't and will never be
U rhyme from the heart
And that's a start
But we are who we are
Recognize a Star
When you see one bro
I rhyme from the soul
And U feel it, yo
So let's control our parole
And roll in peace
Rap shouldn't be deceased
With our grease
So let's be the ones to release
Non Violent music
'Cuz I don't spit abusive ...

Hallo Mol! Now I got ye.
Ain't no bad the words you said
splitiing head is what you get
thinkin'bout them drivin'us mad
with all their rules man
got their tools man
but get up and on ye go
babbling away coz you wanted so
bad to rap, thought you saw a gap
just a mishap , in yer face a slap
and swaying around
till ye hit the ground
staring ahead
doing this and that
it's what ye get
cool, man, cool
it's me the fool

Lol?

Originally Posted by amaryn

Hallo Mol! Now I got ye.
Ain't no bad the words you said
splitiing head is what you get
thinkin'bout them drivin'us mad
with all their rules man
got their tools man
but get up and on ye go
babbling away coz you wanted so
bad to rap, thought you saw a gap
just a mishap , in yer face a slap
and swaying around
till ye hit the ground
staring ahead
doing this and that
it's what ye get
cool, man, cool
it's me the fool

Phahaa ! I told you to read my lyrics, not to diss me ! Oooh Amaryn, you're in trouble !

feed those raps to zombies girl
see, they're here, they fill our world
smart their ipods, cool their curls
staring ahead, dull man, dull,
msg and jpg,
all them mobiles, an endless sea
waves after waves just rolling on
where've the quiet corners gone
gimme peace for a while, close down
all them zombielooking clowns
kick them high and kick them low
open up their eyes and go
cannot phone me ma, me friend
had your head deep in the sand
blinking helpless useless wrecks
put htem into litter bags
with their laptops , keyboards, gee
what a stinkin world it'll be

You must've missed it, come in here dissin' the Misses
Your flow sounds twisted, now sit & listen to the Mistress
I'm not going to diss you like you tried to diss me
Oh no, instead I let ur mind spin until you dizzy

Let me lead this one, because I know how it's done
I score lyrical home runs for fun, run after run
So you wanna have a talk about generation X-box ?
Fxck it, they're lost, but I'm like Molotova on the rocks

Sip me, and I might relight your lines & redefine ya style
Give you insight in the mind of mankind in this time
It's ironic how electronics fxck up their mnemonics
It's psychotic how their wishes are platonic, histrionic

But who are we to judge ? Epoch 'unplugged'
Rockin' iPods, slugs, drugs & thug love, uhuh
No communication, the creation of gyration
Rotatin' in vicious circles, ain't no salvation ...