I wIll Save you if you let me

Verse 1

I will aid you
I will help you
I will save you
I will protect you
I will love you
I will respect you
You’ll be my completer
And I don’t need credit
You’re my Visa
Card, you got me later
I got you for my dinner
I’ll handle the patience
You’ll be the winner
No second love, Gwen Stacy
And if you fall over a bridge
I’ll out my heart out and oblige

Chorus

Verse 2

What I got, I got soul, What I got
I got pride, What I got I got love
That’s the Mos Def, Tupac stuff
I got it, we can got it like IMX
Gotta trust Batman
The signal is passing
Stop the crime of happening, me not being with you
I have this guilty conscience to lose
Call me The Lil Wayne of rap
All I need is the suit, the gadgets, the boots
I got the agility, skills, and prowess to keep you alive
I’ll be there, Jackson 5
I want to take you higher, make you laugh, Richard Pryor
However, I need your permission
How much your love cost, I’ll pay our tuition
I hope you’re not thrown off by a laid-back individual

Chorus

Verse 3

Chivalry is dead
And I’m here to resurrect it
You want real men
But It seems like there all pretenders
They want you to be easy
Because you’re tests are difficult
I will save you, have confidence
I promise I will man up
I will be honest with you
Even if I can’t much, it’s true
You just a Sand Serif
You’re the Spirit to my comics
You too much of a stiff, I can tell
But I can make you tolerant
And just give a signal, I’ll be your man
I’m be napkins, I’ll be your tissues
I’ll never break you’re heart
I’m a frightened criminal

I quite like the verses. Nice metaphors. I think you got a good flow going on in some areas and i can't grasp it in the others so i can't offer much to comment

Dare to rate it out of 10 or by letters

well, if i had to on 10 being really good i'mma have to say good for the metaphors 8-9/10. That's compared to my work which has few metaphors. The flow i gotta rate down a bit cos' i can't get it but it has some parts i like:
"You’re my Visa
Card, you got me later
I got you for my dinner
I’ll handle the patience
You’ll be the winner"
So i'll give that a 7/10
Overall 7-8/10 cos' i think flow is quite important and cos' i don't know it, i don't feel i can give any higher