Life aint fair... rate it:)

the governments of the worlds say they look after the people,
USA, every street you can buy a desert eagle ,
UK, cuts to the health but keep what they dont need to,
they tell us life fair, but naah i dont believe you ,

all i know is that life aint fair,
government cheat the system without no cares,
men cant support the family hes loosing hair,
while his boy crys to his mum im so scared ,
she says son......life ain't fair,

chorus

Life aint fair, they dont care
The worlds ok from up there
too much power,they dont care,
they forget,who puts them there?

They think that were to rapped up in violence and alcoholism,
that we are oblivous to this imperialism,
im not being negative this is just clear realism,
just like the wiki leaks founder you might just get locked up in prision,

there like the blind leading the blind
and they expect us to act like we dont mind
and if you oppose you might just get done in
but they have been warned the revolution is coming

chorus

Now most mc escalate the problem
dont talk real but bullets and tryin to dodge em
and most mc escalate the problem
dont talk real but bullets and tryin to dodge em

chorus x2

Life aint fair......

I like the message, and some parts are really good, but some parts are not good at all.

I think you need to try 'nd use more wordplay to make it flow better and to make it more interesting.

This is an example of what I think needs improvement :
"They think that were to rapped up in violence and alcoholism,
that we are oblivous to this imperialism,
im not being negative this is just clear realism,
just like the wiki leaks founder you might just get locked up in prision"

This is an example of what I do like :
"there like the blind leading the blind
and they expect us to act like we dont mind
and if you oppose you might just get done in
but they have been warned the revolution is coming"
Though I think this needs improvement too, but I like it.

Voila, my opinion.