This is my song....please read and comment!!

please comment


Come on to my country,
i'll ride along your side,
get up on that gorgeous horse,
or be lefft behind.

(chorus)
You know all the pretty horses
and all the crazy men
they range from bucking broncos
to old western friends
they work as old ranch hands
or run in a chute
......
but in the end their still my best friend

oh- when i was a young girl
i had a trusty steed,
he bucked me off and i got up,
man hes pretty!

(chorus)
You know all the pretty horses
and all the crazy men
they range from bucking broncos
to old western friends
they work as old ranch hands
or run in a chute
......
but in the end their still my best friend


Oh- theres blacks and theres bays
Oh- theres dapples and greys
dont forget appalossas
there big and there beautiful
but dont you forget
there still my best friend

(chorus)
You know all the pretty horses
and all the crazy men
they range from bucking broncos
to old western friends
they work as old ranch hands
or run in a chute
......
but in the end their still my best friend



COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Whatever you were looking for in this, the feeling you wanted to capture....you succeeded. It sounds just like a song I would hear on the radio, if I were to listen to country. I must admit, it is lively and very well written. What do you personally think of it?

I like it.....it took me forever to write it!!

That is good! I can tell in what you have. You did an amazing job!

Thanks!!!

This is a song i started writing but i can think of more lines!

you were quite the little girl,
deep blue eyes and long brown hair,
five feet tall with none to spare,
yes baby girl you were tough.

You had boots up to your knees,
purple shirt and dark blue jeans,
hair tied in a ponytail,
yes baby girl, a true country gal
.....


And thats it!!! i cant think of anymore!

It will come to you. Give it some more time. It is wonderful as it is and can only get better, yes?