Rate My Song - The Proclamation

BEFORE YOU READ THIS IS MY FIRST SONG AND IS MEANT TO BE SUNG LIKE RAP



This is the proclamation,
Of a nation,
Destroyed by mitigations,
By the nations,
From up above,
Looking at you love now my babaaaaay.

Sometimes when you look at it.
Just riii-iii-ii-iiiight
You can make out whats happening,
To our nation.

This is the proclamation,
Oooof a nation,
Destroyed by mitigations,
By the nation,
From up above,
Looking at your world now my bay-aaay-ay-aaay-baaaaay.

It may look like its geddin worse
But its just geddin better
You just ain’t lookin right
My babay giii-iii-iiiiii—iiiiirl

This is the proclamation,
Of a nation,
Destroyed by mitigations,
By the nations,
From up above,
Looking at your life now my baaay-ay-aaay-baaaaay

It's true to the point. But I’m still trying to get your notion. Are you referring to the way people make thing to be allot worse than they are? It diffidently make you think about the lyrics. It can be misinterpreted for a multitude of things. I'm open mind and I appreciate something different like this. Good job in my book.

by the way is this a punk, or alternative or metal song?

please feel free to rate some of mine. I right rap songs but not your adverage my rims, my money, my *****es, crap. I put heart into mine.
thanks for sharing your interesting tallent.

First let me get this clear, this is my FIRST song. Also it is as you said about people making things worse and this is meant to be read more like rap.

cool. I rap may self. Sorry it seemed be missing some lines here and there for me to identify it as a rap song. pretty good for your first song. over time you will discover more styles. good job.