Peaceful Tsunami

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  1. roses4ria's Avatar

    roses4ria said:

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    As I see your face in my head
    I can feel my heart palpate
    It beats hards against my chest
    And the world creates an earthquake

    The trees fall from the lightening crack
    The powerlines are blown
    But these images still won't retract
    While the thunder beings to drone

    Nothing can penetrate the barrier
    Of my disrupted mind
    Search my brain for the source
    And it's your face they'll find

    No operations, No surgery
    No natural defense
    Can stop these thoughts from running through
    And remembering your existance

    The strom keeps brewing
    The winds prevail
    Everytime I think of you
    But the roaring thunder
    The raging hail
    Just do not seem to do

    I need a tsunami, a meteor
    So my troubled head will ease
    Something drastic to destroy the world
    And then I might sleep in peace
     
  2. OneSongWayne's Avatar

    OneSongWayne said:

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    You created some good mental visual effects. Well done!
     
  3. JC said:

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    Very intense, I agree with Wayne... A lot of visual effects and shows a lot feeling. Nice Job!
    JC
     
  4. MoonRide*r*'s Avatar

    MoonRide*r* said:

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    This is just fantastic, the imagery and turns of phrase are really really good. Not just this, but I love this the best:

    Nothing can penetrate the barrier
    Of my disrupted mind
    Search my brain for the source
    And it's your face they'll find

    This also goes to show that a "story" or theme in music doesn't need a lot of verses or fancy twists to be great. Keep it coming my friend.
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