
Untitled Love Song
Thread: Untitled Love Song
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Dekadin said:
08-31-2011 12:37 AM
Untitled Love Song
When I look in your eyes I get a lovely surprise
A passionate smile and a love that mirrors mine
It's enough to stop time as I sit at your side
Our whole future in mind with your hand in mine
And Jenna, I hope you know that I love you so
I hope you understand that I'm your man
And you're my girl and I wouldn't give you up for the world
And when you're in my arms you will never come to harm
I'll reach into my heart I'll show you all the stars
And I love when we kiss, when you're biting my lip
You don't need to insist 'cause I just can't resist
And Jenna, I hope you see what you mean to me
I hope you realize that you're my life
And without you I wouldn't have a clue as to what to do
I thought what I'd do was, I'd pretend I was one of those deaf-mutes
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Inskeepruler said:
08-31-2011 01:03 PM
I like it. Generally, I wouldn't put a name in a love song, unless it's her. This way it is universal, but since it is for someone, I'm assuming, it works.
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