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#LehhGo
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Ladies and gentlemen.. MarvelousG..
AYO Zarex before I begin, you should know my Benjamins is my regimen
as long as I got em there ain't no sentiment, you're a dickweed, fly but impotent
I'm Golden Globe, I'm Woody Strode
you flowin with yo' rookie dope
alright maybe not, I can see you're a professional
so lemme tell you something, I'm feelin a bit confessional
I'm a sexual intellectual, I reproduce the unexpectable
**** word play, my rhymes is impeccable
****in punk *****, I'm endin this raw, so duck fast, I slam dunk last
I stuff hash under your mom's pads, bash glass on your head, blood drips off your eyelash
King uncaged, no mercy to inflict, to impinge, to instill, to infill
just a stoked flow ready to blow and spill on this dill hole's golden mill
***** please, I'm a platinum bill, a diamond trill, with a rhymin will, &I got another bar left so freeze
my flow breeze is a tease, I know, I'm cold grease, slicker, sicker than Ron G's rappin beats
I'll play mad libs on your musical script, have you singin like Libby Larsen if you ****in with this
Atheist, Fascist, Narcissist, Agnostic or a Masochist, I don't give a **** what you are, talkative prick
Last edited by MarvelousG; 09-06-2011 at 11:41 PM.
EXPLANATION
2: weed = fly, ****= his is impotent (you shouldve got this already lol)
3. Woody Strode was an actor who won a Golden Globe so yeah
10. In his verse against Sk'n, Zarex said He'll "start this off raw" so I'm endin it raw.. You get it lol
12. king uncaged was supposed to be the name of T.I.'s album No Mercy, (notice more importantly how all the words after start in T then I. EX: To Instill, To Infill....)
13. Dill hole is a term for pxssy. In case y'all didn't know.
Everything I've explained was obvious enough either way lol. The last line was a reference to Zarex's agnosticism or whatever.
EXPLANATION
2: weed = fly, ****= his is impotent (you shouldve got this already lol)
3. Woody Strode was an actor who won a Golden Globe so yeah
10. In his verse against Sk'n, Zarex said He'll "start this off raw" so I'm endin it raw.. You get it lol
12. king uncaged was supposed to be the name of T.I.'s album No Mercy, (notice more importantly how all the words after start in T then I. EX: To Instill, To Infill....)
13. Dill hole is a term for pxssy. In case y'all didn't know.
Everything I've explained was obvious enough either way lol. The last line was a reference to Zarex's agnosticism or whatever.
Okay, just to be completely honest, this is barely even a diss, the last line and a couple other lines, like 2 were dissin him, this was more of a "Let me brag about me" type of verse, not really even a diss, so if he comes even somewhat hard he's gonna take this..
But this was dope though, i liked it, you should take out the couple lines that were disses and whatnot, and make this a nice braggin' track, cause it flows well, you have some inner multi's, not really any outer's, some decent punchlines about yourself, wordplay's really not there, but yeah..
I KNEW people would say that. lol. It's all good though we'll see what arsenal Zarex brings to the table. And like I said.. **** word play, my rhymes is impeccable. If I get dropped Imma come back stronger. And I wish the best of luck to the guy. Cause when it comes down to it, he's a great rapper, I'm a great rapper and it's just a matter of who's style comes on stronger in my opinion.
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Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
imma rape u no homo
Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
this gon be fun
Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
lol so bring it
Z? when are you gonna Drop? are are you going to let Marcus take your spot? I'm ready to vote. lol J/k
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Sk'nDeep
One hit to Gs spot'll have him screaming NO STOP
Chop ya limbs, arms n skin, no backin/back end from the slot
Now he raw, start the coin toss, smash his jaw, floss
Toss the fag: lost in the woods where the wild things gloss
He think he godsent, i dont give a **** im atheist
Chaff his wrists, flow check, his neck messed, his *** sends
Best regards, no cigar, blunt ashes in his casket
Bag it, nuff with the foreplay, open up the fag casket
*pause*
Look i SNAP BACK ya WHACK HAT, no sticker kid, ya CAT BLACK
My FAT SACK like BLACKJACK, bust yo hand, red CRACKJACK
A NAPSACK, like BAGHDAD, he sleepin. Find his house, RAT
No BACKTRACK, I BAG THAT, relapse, Im ****in All THAT
*pause*
CAVE IN his chest, face to PAVEMENT, repress
Past ENGAGEMENTS, unless this fag PAY RENT, depress
*pause*
Fuxkin with june, rue the day i fuxkin harvest
Pause this, the pulp rioe, swipe the source of all this
Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
Took you long enough. Alrigght so let's vote!
He needs to post his explanations haha. But are we voting off lyrical content or disses?
Im posting explanations tomorrow no time, lyrical and content are both criteria
Lots of punches and wordplay
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Hahaha I'll assume you meant lyrical content and disses. But I'll give it to Zarex due to such factors as he actually insulted or 'battled' and just better overall to me.
Idk if Dense is the word to describe the explanations
1. Wordplay/Name Flip on his name. If you don't get the G spot then smh
2. Chop his limbs arms and skin off, can't back out of this cuz ur dead. Also cuz I cut your back and back end.
3. No skin = raw. Coin tosses are done to decide who goes first, LIKE IN THE SUPER BOWL, so basically you can start the big match now since it'll be even. "Smash his jaw, floss" I smash his jaw and teeth specifically, floss means show off/brag and also just a play on the whole jaw thing.
4. Toss his in the woods. Where The Wild Things Are, an old *** cartoon/book so basically a reference to taht. Gloss just opens up a double meaning where I'm saying he's in the woods where wild things are dead (gloss = dead, eyes gloss over), cuz if you kill something its in the woods.
5. Self explanatory
6. Chaff his wrists = get em sore and eventually cut up. Cut to the wrists flows alot, only time he'll flow. His neck messed = snapped it. "His ***** sends" is a run-off rhyme, continues in next line
7. She sends best regards, hoping he's doing fine in the battle. No cigar is basically a phrase to say Nice try but nopee, u say it when some one comes close of it's a nice try. Then it goes with some wordplay: Since there's no cigiar, im puttin blunt ashes in his casket
8. Bag his ***, I'm done warming up with foreplay/wordplay. Time to open up his casket and see the damage.
9. Whole line is a play on snap backs. SNAP BACK yo WHACK HAT is a double, u can just take that surface line which means im snapping back his whack hat with a punch. The second meaning is that his head = WHACK HAT, so im snappin his neck. "No sticker kid, yo cat black" When the hat doesn't have a sticker then its basically ****. Yo Cat Black = This ***** is dead, when you die various parts of your body may turn black since blood flow is cut off.
10. Whole line is a play on black jack. Fat Sack = fat sack of cash and nuts. "Bust yo hand, red CRACKJACK" means that like blackjack, my fat sack of cash gonna bust yo hand (as in, you will lose it and not be able to hold on) and then the second meaning where i bust yo hand (break it) like I bust nuts. Red Crackjack = red cracker, dead.
11. Saddam was hiding in a hole near baghdad, i think. So a NAP SACK = sack/hole where you nap. He's sleeping thinking he's safe and also he's sleepin on my lines, doesn't understand I will **** his **** up.
12. No BACKTRACK, no going back from this. Also play on Track which are what you call an addict's arm if they use needles. BAG THAT, relapse plays in with the drug meaning of the verse. I'm ****ing ALL THAT = I'm the **** but also a reference to the show on Nick back in the ol days with Kenan and a bunch of other nonimportant actors.
13. Cave in his chest with punches. His face meets the pavement when I smash his face on it. Repress is a part of a run off rhyme
14. I'll be shush on this little encounter where I bagged yo *** if I get cash/rent for being in my domain/tourney lol
15. Double. **** with me, wait till I come to get payback. Also, you don't plant crops/fruits in June so if you do, i will reap your ***. Plow that **** relentlessly
16. I stop now that I realize this whole thing was OVERKILL, take my rightful spot as contendor for ATL Champ. SWAG
R.I.P
Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
I agree with Space on this one. G's was well written but Z dissed harder.
But I am going to be perfectly honest about this and I feel that the rest of those who took part in this battle should agree. They both were not the caliber I expected for a simi finals battle.
G... no disrespect to you but. You did not earn your spot in the semifinals.
What should have happen is once the battle started all new comers should have be told Buy Z to enter into the next tourney. And the Champ should have been waiting on his or her throne chilling out while the rest battle to become the top contender. My point is , We battled our way to the top. And you just walked in. My other concern as that this tourney had done nothing but waste precious time for everyone, Caused an enormous uproar, and caused allot of once earned respect to falter.
Both of you should not be battling as we speak. Correct me if I'm wrong but, Z lost to me by a KO
I guess he took a Mulligan on this one. Lol. @ nothing funny. In fact this is not funny at all.
I don't mean to be blunt or mean, about this but this tourney has been the worst I have ever taking part of.
For this I apologize on behave of ATL for the way this was ran. Not disrespect to anyone----Just keeping it real. Sorry I had to get that out of my system.
Now back to my Vote.
I have to Say I vote for Z on this one. G, if you would have focused on punches instead of your self, you would have killed him. Even though Z should not be battling due to our previous battle, and Molo dropping out for reasons I understand. I give him this one to him. Molo I don't blame you girl. You knew in your heart something was wrong as I did. And for that, I can't be upset with you.
Matter of a fact I respect you tremendously for your courage to Quit.
So to make a long story Short.
My vote goes to Z
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