fianlly Back! 1st song i wrote in months! 10mins!

Wrote this to J cole In the Morning instrumental

Girl i got you now, thats what im talking bout, now ur mine.... thats without a doubt/
youre just that one girl that amazes me, cus all those other girls erase from me/
but not you, you stuck around, diamond in the rough that i found/
but you deserve more then diamonds, girl i ll buy you the whole damn island/
and i try to figure you out looking thru haze, your confusing just like a maze, even when ur stressed that s*** dont phase, keep moving forward never stay in the same place/
that why i want you and i want to be about you, im ur one and only now thats the truth, they dont compare, i ll take you over a few, happiness is a picture that me and you drew/
i love the way you move, i try to be cool, spitting game i gotta keep it smooth, but now im frozen and i cant move/
girl.....lets do it tonight, just tell those dudes your my future wife, you got it all plus your just my type, damn you fine girl, you outta sight/
close my eyes and u see you its gotta be a dream, i can see our love playing on the big screen, we can have it all likes its in HD/
High definition and now im in submission, submission to your love girl, lets just let our love unfurl/
just like when you let your hair down and it turns me on, damn i love when you put it on, i dont know what to say so i put it in song, damn just let me that thong, our love is right and its never wrong/
i ll do it all for you just one more chance, i love your stance, one more time for me to romance, this is the last song heres our chance, lets do it big may i have this dance/
afterwards lets go somewhere private to do some exploring, damn you were never boring, i ll wake you up when you start snoring, and i ll say.....Can i Hit it in the morning??

Copywright 09/08/2011


Let me know what you think! im kinda rusty, first writing i done since like may, but i felt this flow just come out. it took me 10mins so i know it may need work, just let me know i'd appreciate it!

man if this is rusty, then the stuff u write when your not must be pretty dope lol. for real, this is good, and i've listened to the song in the morning a lot, so i can kinda picture these lyrics going with the flow of the song. so its definitely good man, and props for using a j. cole beat!

hahaha yeaa for reals. i was writing alot last spring but all summer i havent wrote anything so i think i was itching for a song, and i had the In the morning instrumental n i couldnt help but pull out a piece of paper n i just started writing! quick too but yeaa it was easy with a j cole song. i love his stuff. but thanks i appreciate it! when i see one of urs posted i ll take a look definately

i have another rap stuck in my head! Time to write