Karma Vs??

battle any body?
check in if you would like to battle with me
HOUSE RULES
no flipping 24 hour dead line after check in
first one to check in battles me and if there's
a list or a variety of people wanting to battle then
i'll get at you as well keep it short and simple
8 bars and for those who don't know what eight bars are
-_- there basically 8 LINES ONE LINE IS CONSIDERED ONE BAR
THERE FORTH 8 BARS,8 LINES keep it short and simple just to get things heated up
so basically four bars eight lines i guess in "text form" i guess but 24 hour dead line after check in
just say CHECK write your verse i'll get to it NO FLIPPIN good luck to anybody battling peace

btw votes must be explained and broken down i'll give you guys a quick example like

"have karma's heart in pain when sparkin lames in harshest ways put em in a casket and march away/
you carcass shaved,and no way KARMA can HAND a TEXT(TECHS) when he can't even "ARM A K"/(KARMA NAME FLIP)

okay see how the TWO LINES IS THERE? well you basically do that COPY PASTE THE LINES BREAK THEM DOWN EACH LIKE

"have karma's heart in pain when sparkin lames in harshest ways put em in a casket and march away/
you carcass shaved,and no way KARMA can HAND a TEXT(TECHS) when he can't even "ARM A K"/(KARMA NAME FLIP)

well your first line was pretty good i liked the inner multies with heart in pain sparkin lames harshest was and march away i thought
that brought in some really good flow in it and kept the rhyming consistent altho it is a bit predictable due to the "march"
rhymes but pretty good openiner and your second line again following along with the multi with carcass layed and the wordplay
is really good with the KARMA and HAND TEXT and the name flip was ****en BEAST but it' was good on to the next line

and then you break down each single bar and give feedback/critism i know it may seem like it's alot
BUT IT'S HONESTLY THE ONLY WAY PEOPLE CAN VOTE PROPERLY WITH OUT HAVING BIAS VOTES/**** RIDING VOTERZ
and on top of that if there's a mistake they can use your critism and feedback in order to improve for incoming
and future battlese i hope this helps your voting more i keep battles short on bbe wich is www.bodybagsent.net #JS
lesgeddit tho

24 hours to write 8 bars? Thats a little to much time.

24 hours just to play it safe if i was to say 30 mins after check in
most people wouldn't be online at the moment and on top of that it's almost
12 my time cali time that is but 24 hours that's the dead line bruh

yeah but alot of people will just read this not comment an work on a perfect verse. i bet if we got people to just hop on here an say what comes to mind they wouldnt stand a chance hah.

Karma's back at it again. who's dropping on who first? Karma's good kid. best bring heat.

i just want to battle i wawnt a list of people ;( lets up the battling peepz
don't sleep on thiss

Ay, Karma. Yeah I'm down for a lil' friendly non-tournament battle. Let's do this.

Edit: I'll make a seperate post for it.