i'm thou (with you)

You ready cuz I am lets go huh yeah huh yeah some (girls are beautiful) tell me me to take it slow? h** hit the road cuz I **** a *** I don’t give a **** in my flow I ain't one to hit women But I'll hit a b**** with a flow
People say Ima d**k when I flow Ima let that one go you ain’t my bro I know I’m ice cold on my flow damn it quit tellin’ me sh*t that isn’t true I’ve been hit and accused I’m tryna control my actions respect me is all I’m askin’ got Eminem’s music blastin’ cuz I don’t give a f**k I’m comin’ at you so duck!
I’m so tired of theses cocky pricks cuz you can’t drop me b*** yes I know Ima b***, d***, prick at least I’m lookin’ for a f***in’ relationship you hate me save it b**** I got no time to waste so I’ll f**k you up in my rhyme that you can’t hate, take! I got so much pain it’s so insane the stupid sh*t that goes in my brain f**k you if you think I’m lame bro Ima jump in front of a train b***h you hate me don’t see my name cuz I’m not in the mood get a f***in’ clue playin’ me isn’t cute my lyrics are so hot dat Rowlett High doesn’t have a roof R.I.P Proof don’t ever push me f***in’ p***y Ima pro not a damn rookie you f****rs can’t shush me! Sometimes I wish I could just DIE suicide isn’t an option b**** I got this look at all these hot chick don’t care if you got kids I’m the f***in’ illest all this pain inside of me you can’t feel this I’m goin’ in watch me, watch me kill this I’m ready to conceal a b****
I’m real with a b****! Just leave me alone no shots of proton I’m ready to break your bone I’m in the f***in’ you up zone it’s Yung T-bone how bout you leave me alone cuz Ima rip you in two don’t make me spit on you I liked a girl and I told her I wasn’t tryna hit on you no I’m wasn’t a b*** to you!
My flow is so sick yeah I’m cold as sh** you can say I’m over this b**** yeah I’m the rapper who wrote this sh** in my heart has no LOVE it’s been pushed and shoved my love is empty don’t tempt me cuz all you b****es do is agitate me, aggravate me your waitin’ to assassinate me or deactivate me why do you wanna f***in’ obliterate me! Ugh yeah Ima bulldog without you I feel like I’m bein’ pulled apart when you left you pulled my heart now I’m back in the dark now you hit my love outta da park why the f*** did I met you sorry if I upset you it’s just who I am I’m gettin’ money like Uncle Sam when I come though Rowlett High School make’em girls say damn he’s the man! This is my flow, my flow Ima beast a damn dog you a h*e n**** you cold you’re lyrics are old don’t give a f*** if you call me, call me ugly b**** a** n**** don’t judge me cuz Ima rapper diss me shut, shut ya yapper got no time haters see you later cuz I’m gone I gotta stay strong Ima stand tall I might be small but I got balls to say f*** you in front on y’all don’t bully me no girl is holdin’ me matter a fact they are chokin’ me, provokin’ me I don’t know why theses’ girls are so damn fly lets go!

not bad man...flows pretty well...it's just so jumbled togeather but if you seperate your bars line for line you can read it better you know.
plus it makes it easier to rhyme better....

Example...this is just and idea not me changing your lyrics.
it has potential...
You ready cuz I am lets go, huh yeah some (girls are beautiful)
(Ryhme same syllables) (ryhme somthing right here with lets go)
tell me me to take it slow? h** hit the road.
I ain't one to hit women But I'll hit a b**** with a flow
pierod end of sentence....I taking menstral so on and so on..........