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  1. _Nostik_Go_Hard's Avatar

    _Nostik_Go_Hard said:

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    Haven't been on for a while. . . Been busy, But Ill make time
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jordan Mccauley J-bud View Post
    damn i had a nice *** flow
    ****ed up n i lost it bro
    so u win dis round but
    ill be back tho
    im comin wit my ***** n yo ***
    my ***** give me head
    yo *** give me mo
    sbu aint **** molo got a betta flow
    she probly ugly tho now im done
    im still da best tho illest ***** u kno
    got da crown n the throne facts yall already kno

    Ay.. J-Bud you fake-f*ck, wait-up.. I ain't-done..
    I'll rap cold, coz you rap like your brain's-numb.
    you w/rap like elfs do, coz you're gettin sleigh'ed bruv.
    your brother's more Able. you hype like you 'Cained up.

    Jordan-Mccauley's.. performance-was-faulty.
    Jordan -Mccauley.. bores-an-appalls-me.

    ****.. *****ing on your ***** ****'s no problem.
    your rap's so common. that won't conquer.
    I brought these raps to smack prone fodder.
    you'll "be back"?.. fam.. don't bother!
    please construct a decent punch.. ?
    nah.. you've reached your peak; it's weak as f*ck.
    you need to front. your wit's less capable.
    Jor/Dan 'splits' when sh*t gets Dan/Jor'ous.

    "my flow"? -sublime. you ain't coming close to my potent rhymes.
    your claims remain as oversight.. it's overkill.. I'm going into overdrive.
    your trite bars are proof you should try-harder-dude.
    I "aint ****".. coz I'm '5-star'-reviewed.
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    for real, everyone's bringing some dope lyrics with equally valid styles though. heh.
    props, everyone.
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    Quote Originally Posted by _Nostik_Go_Hard View Post
    @ RobbMack

    Im prayin' for you n*gga, I put that on myself you see,-
    Better get improvin', before you makin' rhymes of 'me'. . .
    I got the 'guns' loaded -'Don't think you want a "clip"
    Don't read my words with focus, or you'll bust your lip. .
    You a'ready know, there ai-n't stoppin' me,
    Don't think that your' lil raps will put me in defeat'. . .
    So hopefully that this has helped thee',
    Comeback with a better script and Ill dealt with 'he'
    aiming your forced sh*t "@ robbmack"?
    your punches off target and you lack contacts.
    'Nostik_Go_Hard' ain't 'go hard' so far.. try-an-go-harder.
    I 'browsed'.. but aint 'herd' you, like I'm a goat-farmer.
    .."thee"?? please.. you gettin medieval? you ain't very lethal..
    your generic lyrics 'speyed' but ain't down to bury people.
    try to get inventive kid.. you're askin for a "better script"?
    I doubt you'll ever bloom and I aint even a pessimist.
    -I "defeat"- with my dope-rapping;
    -I.D feet- ..so I'll toetag-him
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    Ya'll are makin me laugh, talkin bout scripts, hollywood is down the street, go try writing a screenplay or leave this site and look at some naked pics.
    I really have to give all you kids props though, cuz you all are bringin the lyrics through and through and this is true.
    Some sick rappers on this thread, let's get together and defeat young money, they're gonna need to dread we're gonna have their head.
    Cept lets keep Drake and lil wayne cuz they're the best of the rest.


    (this was ****in wack.)
    Later guys, I'll be back soon.
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    smoothtung said:

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    Ill come at what in the mournin. DIBBS
    btw Drake an Lil wayne aré weeeak.
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    smoothtung said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by rumorofwar1 View Post
    Ya'll are makin me laugh, talkin bout scripts, hollywood is down the street, go try writing a screenplay or leave this site and look at some naked pics.
    I really have to give all you kids props though, cuz you all are bringin the lyrics through and through and this is true.
    Some sick rappers on this thread, let's get together and defeat young money, they're gonna need to dread we're gonna have their head.
    Cept lets keep Drake and lil wayne cuz they're the best of the rest.


    (this was ****in wack.)
    Later guys, I'll be back soon.

    Really now 'rumor' hah, have you written a screenplay?
    How could you compare it to here, and sayin what we say...

    Your ignorant ways a waste, its distasteful to let this continue.
    Your oblivious cuz your unscathed to date, but its time I end you.

    You wana rap like drake...? Fake? Changed by mainstream?
    First off, why are you jumping from this page to 'main-screen'...

    'Fame an gleam's a daydream an I'm damn happy it is..
    Cuz its pains me heinously 'sad-acts' have changed what rap is.

    So I'll 'blap' lavishly and ravage thee, under acheivers...
    'Rumors's you ain't half as clean - so back out the scene sir.

    I'm mastering what rap is fastly crashing cuz of cash an' wallets,
    So forgive me for being brash but get far, fast. Do me a solid.
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    Quote Originally Posted by smoothtung View Post
    Really now 'rumor' hah, have you written a screenplay?
    How could you compare it to here, and sayin what we say...

    Your ignorant ways a waste, its distasteful to let this continue.
    Your oblivious cuz your unscathed to date, but its time I end you.

    You wana rap like drake...? Fake? Changed by mainstream?
    First off, why are you jumping from this page to 'main-screen'...

    'Fame an gleam's a daydream an I'm damn happy it is..
    Cuz its pains me heinously 'sad-acts' have changed what rap is.

    So I'll 'blap' lavishly and ravage thee, under acheivers...
    'Rumors's you ain't half as clean - so back out the scene sir.

    I'm mastering what rap is fastly crashing cuz of cash an' wallets,
    So forgive me for being brash but get far, fast. Do me a solid.
    you aimed that at 'Rumor' but it's skewed. I'll intercept it;
    kleptomaniac courier; you didn't bring a message.
    that's not 'hard-rapping'.. please. it's 'hardly-rapping'.
    .."screenplay"? -please stay silent, like charlie-chaplain.
    you ain't bringing syntax, sick flips or wit back. we're mismatched. quit, fam.
    you try to be "main 'stream'"; ..just 'ditch' rap.
    I'm known-as-your-idol....
    you try to avoid cloning-the-style,
    -so you just suck-instead....
    my styles widespread if you sidestep it nothing's-left.
    you're not even a decent-rhymer.. a brief-assignment: please-retire.
    "Mastering" rap? -loser no you'll never bring an 'EQualiser'.
    you ain't bringing deep music.
    you're shallow. I see through it.
    bland rapper. you'll "crash" like that bank-balance.
    yes you're "solid", but you're transparent.
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    Quote Originally Posted by rumorofwar1 View Post
    Ya'll are makin me laugh, talkin bout scripts, hollywood is down the street, go try writing a screenplay or leave this site and look at some naked pics.
    I really have to give all you kids props though, cuz you all are bringin the lyrics through and through and this is true.
    Some sick rappers on this thread, let's get together and defeat young money, they're gonna need to dread we're gonna have their head.
    Cept lets keep Drake and lil wayne cuz they're the best of the rest.


    (this was ****in wack.)
    Later guys, I'll be back soon.
    bro.. those are some minor talents.
    you can "keep Drake"; I'm a 'dragon'.
    it's passionate-writing.. devouring hollow w/rappers, appetite-rising.
    spitting fire like a dragon but I'mma smash-'em-like-Skyrim.
    I don't give a sh*t about Rumor's-approval.
    but he still gives me "props" like a movie-producer.
    for real though.. I'd appreciate-it..
    but you're pissing on walls I'm graffiti-painting.
    Last edited by _SBU; 12-03-2011 at 07:53 PM.
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    smoothtung said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by _SBU View Post
    you aimed that at 'Rumor' but it's skewed. I'll intercept it;
    kleptomaniac courier; you didn't bring a message.
    that's not 'hard-rapping'.. please. it's 'hardly-rapping'.
    .."screenplay"? -please stay silent, like charlie-chaplain.
    you ain't bringing syntax, sick flips or wit back. we're mismatched. quit, fam.
    you try to be "main 'stream'"; ..just 'ditch' rap.
    I'm known-as-your-idol....
    you try to avoid cloning-the-style,
    -so you just suck-instead....
    my styles widespread if you sidestep it nothing's-left.
    you're not even a decent-rhymer.. a brief-assignment: please-retire.
    "Mastering" rap? -loser no you'll never bring an 'EQualiser'.
    you ain't bringing deep music.
    you're shallow. I see through it.
    bland rapper. you'll "crash" like that bank-balance.
    yes you're "solid", but you're transparent.

    'Transparent'? I'm colorfuly arant.... man that's apparent.
    Your 'aim' is 'wide'ly errant - you're no accurate declarent.

    Your rationed rap turned stagnant, so ''mismatch'' I ain't 'havin it'
    I'll 'bag this' like its 'half @ss'd writ, bad-script' season an I got tags for it.

    Why would I clone your style, its wildly unappreciated.
    I'm into spitting for miles, not writing inebriated

    n yea ill b droppin jaws the day my fight's faded
    Unlike this 'S'tandard 'B'ased guy 'U'naware his 'bright''s tainted
    Last edited by smoothtung; 12-04-2011 at 06:41 PM.
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    Youre right sbu vending machines spit bars too
    Last edited by ROBBMACK; 12-03-2011 at 10:14 PM.
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    smoothtung said:

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    Mack, welcome back....? I'm really at a lack of words...
    Your sad raps like glasswork - so ill smash where it hurts.

    Your punctured script structure lacks skill to support.
    of(f) course
    Contorted words 'land' nil ill bars to disport.

    Distort your image from 'can't rap, no' - to rap standard.
    The 'Macks' slander gets shot like a gander. Bring grander

    I spit 'points' like commanders - an shine like camera flashes.
    My style might be brashest but its lethal banter I ravish.
    Last edited by smoothtung; 12-04-2011 at 07:34 AM.
  13. rumorofwar1 said:

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    Hahaha, good battle, i'm out
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    Drake an Lil Wayne are SICKKK
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    Quote Originally Posted by smoothtung View Post
    Mack, welcome back....? I'm really at a lack of words...
    Your sad raps like glasswork - so ill smash where it hurts.

    Your punctured script structure lacks skill to support.
    of(f) course
    Contorted words 'land' nil ill bars to disport.

    Distort your image from 'can't rap, no' - to rap standard.
    The 'Macks' slander gets shot like a gander. Bring grander

    I spit 'points' like commanders - an shine like camera flashes.
    My style might be brashest but its lethal banter I ravish.
    err.. seems Mack's gone?? so leave off.
    we've been 'Robb'ed.. if 'Mac's gone like Steve Jobs.
    your drop's out the 'Window' if you can't battle 'Mac'.
    my words making "points" like a scrabble rack's..
    -you've too few tiles- ..too futile.
    I use new styles- like Jimi did in Voodoo Chile.
    Last edited by _SBU; 12-08-2011 at 11:00 AM.
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    It's Deleterious
    Compared to you *****s I'm imperious
    Sbu raps like he's delirious
    I'm going old school no metaphors
    This guy is like a little *****
    Rhymes worth **** can't score
    Go home to your mom and do chores
    Sbu if you flip it it means unfeelingly by sexual
    Like a fag you're homosexual
    You better read this perusal
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    Deleterious
    Coming on point like a vast pyramid
    Your engine's roaring but you're not fast or furious
    SBU a homo? Takes one to know one, pull back your furry ****
    Brain is athletic, I let it run
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    Your name is who because people don't know you
    This chance you just blew
    This storm I'm about to brew
    You're rhymes are like all the sh*t in a zoo
    You're just a loose screw
    I'm not fast I'm steady
    You get dropped in 10 seconds already
    My rhymes come deadly
    You better get ready
    It's on face to face who
    Let's take a review
    Let's see if you got this hitherto
    You rhymes will leave you ending up at a revue
    You fly off like flue
    I think it's time you withdrew
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    Quote Originally Posted by Who View Post
    Deleterious
    Coming on point like a vast pyramid
    Your engine's roaring but you're not fast or furious
    SBU a homo? Takes one to know one, pull back your furry ****
    ....Confucius'd ..confuse ya.
    ....manoeuvres of Sun Tzu'd ..crush you.
    and sorry if that's undue,
    b ut.. f*ck 'Who'.
    it's carnage; my sharp wit leaves more than a flesh-wound.
    I'm taking heads ..and ain't playing 'Guess Who'.

    witness this, I spit sickest and hold it down like quarantine.
    on concious themes not comedy..
    stop the beef and ponder these philosophies.
    No I'm not "a homo" but it's really not wrong to be.
    your rhyme styles aren't rich, and I war on poverty.
    you seek to be 'sheep' whilst I've sought autonomy;

    please, the steez needs soul. I'm a wolf, they feed me foals.
    I've "furry sh!t".. ~I eat beasts whole.

    I'm potent and skillful, you're hopeless and skill-less and don't know the difference.
    I'd flip "-WHO" to "OHM-" ....but you show no 'resistance'.
    Last edited by _SBU; 12-09-2011 at 01:25 PM.
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    On who, It's easy to rip the battle
    He rhymes unsteady and rattles
    Him going against me was a prattle
    My rhymes are pure furry
    Leaves you running in a hurry
    This is no time to scurry
    All you are is worried
    Starting to see blurry
    That's how you rip it
    All i see you rip is sh*t
    Is that all you can submit?
    I'm disapointed a bit
    soon they will make you're obit
    You should just quit
    Get a brain, grow some wits
    Last edited by Deleterious; 12-13-2011 at 11:54 AM.