Gets me through (rap)

Baby, my life, my dreams revolve around you
You're the only one who can get me through
Your spirit, your heart were real from the start
this is why I feel how I feel
The feelings that I have are forever unreal
Because the love I have for you is completely ideal
My feelings for you were never outgrew
These thoughts i have are genuine and true
But can you tell me why you don't see me like this too
You're so concentrated on yourself and not me*
Your acting like a **** *** wannabe*
But baby trust me you are better than that
Don't listen to them don't be where they're at
Because what you are is *exactly what I need
My love for you will be forever decreed*
don't listen to any diss that comes from anyone
Cause our two loves are better than *my one
but you're hate for me burns like the powerful sun
But really we could have something great
Except for the fact we've never been on a date
I'm not the kind man who is willing to wait*
What you say to me is completely unclear
*So don't let any of your friends interfere*
Because I have no intention to disappear*
these thoughts in my head are starting to change
Things are beginning to get really strange
Stop telling me things I don't want to hear
There's no reason for you to live life in fear
the truth is I love you, I'll always be near

can i use this plz.

Originally Posted by philieboy1234

can i use this plz.

Why the f*ck would you wanna copy anyones rap??? Make up your own!!! What do you need it for anyways???

Originally Posted by philieboy1234

can i use this plz.

lol...

it had a nice flow about it. Decent. Some of the points you made were a bit strange lol kinda sounds like maby your stalking whatever girl your talking about...

"But really we could have something great
Except for the fact we've never been on a date"

.....???

calm down mate.