Battle Me

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  1. DuceDaMicRipper said:

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    charles reese is defined defeat like 'charles lee'
    as he seeks oppression, competes for possesion
    on this 'doll quest' he get beat without question
    only mark remaing at the end of this sentance...
    will he or will he not choose to accept it
    a true student of the game is always open for lessons
    so step your game-up or end-up in lock-up because you cut-up
    both wrist scared with articulate designed marks...
    anyway lil nia' dont start sht you cant finish
    as the old saying goes a dog who barks wont bite...

    while....

    battle rappin a habbit of mine to get it crackin at all times
    sittin back laughin at myself for this poorly designed rhyme
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    Tre_fly said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by DuceDaMicRipper View Post
    charles reese is defined defeat like 'charles lee'
    as he seeks oppression, competes for possesion
    on this 'doll quest' he get beat without question
    only mark remaing at the end of this sentance...
    will he or will he not choose to accept it
    a true student of the game is always open for lessons
    so step your game-up or end-up in lock-up because you cut-up
    both wrist scared with articulate designed marks...
    anyway lil nia' dont start sht you cant finish
    as the old saying goes a dog who barks wont bite...

    while....

    battle rappin a habbit of mine to get it crackin at all times
    sittin back laughin at myself for this poorly designed rhyme
    your 'open for lessons'?, well listen, i'll get ya in for free, no cost of admission
    but quit 'barking' up these rhymes or check ya tree and leave, cause ya barking up mine
    ya green with envy and jealousy, even 'jelly see' the spread
    you said 'step ya game up', instead you just 'sit on stairs/stares'
    with 'slit wrists' and 'sh1t you can't finish'- so I christen this, "boy who don't listen"
    "What we think, we become." Buddha
  3. DuceDaMicRipper said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tre_fly View Post
    your 'open for lessons'?, well listen, i'll get ya in for free, no cost of admission
    but quit 'barking' up these rhymes or check ya tree and leave, cause ya barking up mine
    ya green with envy and jealousy, even 'jelly see' the spread
    you said 'step ya game up', instead you just 'sit on stairs/stares'
    with 'slit wrists' and 'sh1t you can't finish'- so I christen this, "boy who don't listen"
    look kid, you need to stop provokin us grown folk
    as if we aint never loc'ed up on old folks my skills are no hoax
    game Cold enough to freeze the balls off a brass monkey
    an' leave a dumb ash glass junky like yourself without hope; u r not dope
    so peep the scrip...
    no flaw or rook to my name holdin' a rich reputation thats well
    known for killin ****
  4. charles reese said:

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    dudes dissin me while im on vacation
    but im not gettin mad
    its a celebration
    to the fact that
    in this rap game im one of the hottest
    im not bein cocky
    im tryna be modest
    while stayin tryna honest
    sbu, im glad you replied
    i needed some competition
    i had smooth bagged, gagged, and tied
    Mystereese
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    smoothtung said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by charles reese View Post
    dudes dissin me while im on vacation
    but im not gettin mad
    its a celebration
    to the fact that
    in this rap game im one of the hottest
    im not bein cocky
    im tryna be modest
    while stayin tryna honest
    sbu, im glad you replied
    i needed some competition
    i had smooth bagged, gagged, and tied


    Just, sub-par rough-bars from sir Charles;...
    Smug,parse ~ rough start...a cursed carpal.
    Girls marvel to partial encounter my sparkle...
    Enough starve, in part, - to garble my marbles...

    I re-define the meaning of reaching top speeds,
    You've fought 'g', but fall feet behind a speeding 'saaki'

    You're cocky -
    but for what?
    You didn't land a punch line...
    I'm 'Rocky' to you...yeut -
    a different man in crunch time.
    I'll pop you in the gut,
    with a distant plan to stunt crimes.
    I'm sublime -
    you drop aimlessly heinous
    dumb rhymes..
    It's fun time - ....
    my rude lucrative lyrical's imperial.
    You refusing to hear them don't disprove midas miracles...
  6. _SBU said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by charles reese View Post
    dudes dissin me while im on vacation
    but im not gettin mad
    its a celebration
    to the fact that
    in this rap game im one of the hottest
    im not bein cocky
    im tryna be modest
    while stayin tryna honest
    sbu, im glad you replied
    i needed some competition
    i had smooth bagged, gagged, and tied
    If you don't know.. 'C-Star's his rap name, and that's straight.
    he passed, but 'C*'s his english exam grade.

    burn your rhymepads, you ain't bringing the heat.
    Dawg- "Star"? ..can't be Sirius, B.
    I'm higher calibre, your lines are amateur. you can't inspire passion or rhyme elaborate.
    you're obsolete as mayan calendars.
    I drop this and own it.
    I'm "honest" and hone it.
    it's due. this skill's true.
    you "needed some competition".. I still do.
    why try to brag dude? -that was a bad move.
    you never "bagged Smooth", he trashed you.
    you said you "tied" but lied.. texts need better effort.
    it's only a 'draw' in your sketchy recollection.
    your bars are skewed, I can't approve.
    he wasn't "gagged", he laughed at you.

    my bars are sharp and venom tipped, fast to mark regrets of his.
    ****. I'd rather see stars than' C-Star's so censor him.