Shattered Skulls, Spattered Brains- please rate my lyrics!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

guys i'm just looking for a little constructive criticism on some lyrics i wrote. i seek brutal honesty. many thanks.

One Weakness
Bullet in the face
Blow a cursed brain all over the place
Final Solution
To the plague
It all ends with bloody spray

the Horde they come
Tryin' to eat me
the Horde they come
Comin' to feast HELP!

Raise the rifle to shoulder, aim at the head
BANG one more mother-****er is dead

SHATTERED SKULLS, SPATTERED BRAINS

Quick Death
Granted to the cursed
How swiftly the end appears to be reversed
Dozens Come
And millions die
Helped on their way with a Bullseye

the Horde they come
Comin' to get me
the Horde they come
Runnin' so fast
the Horde they come
Comin' to get me
the Horde they come
OH God I'm the last

raise the rifle to shoulder, aim at the eye
I'll take another ****er before I die
SHATTERED SKULLS, SPATTERED BRAINS

hardcore bro