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This **** is twisted
No its knot
Ain't ignorance when you don't no a lot
Replace the human race with robots
I'll kill a ****in hypocrit but before that
tell him that murderin' is wrong hope u learned
They got a special place in hell for you to burn

Let these kids no they generation of entertainment is bullshit
Music is cycle and they got flat tires
Drained the energy out its some type of vampire
No spark in the words disconnected wire
Who pulled the plug?
Or was it a black out
Go back to Actin we just Actout
I should be crowned you should be clowned
I look down from the clouds

This ignorance is a sweet innocence
This plan is insufficient
I had a premonition
That the next addition of music that u listen to
Might just be the answer to the question
To be or not to be
To stay and fight or to flee
Cancer is about as common as the common cold
And the price to treat it is full of commas and Os

Its a fight to stay alive
We've been deprived of that right
We don't seem to notice the strife
Put 2 and 2 together and get 65
Wait let me recalculate
Human stupidity is infinite
But human knowlege can be limitless
We are engulfed in ignorance
And the truth becomes insignifigant

We rely on our tech
Instead of what lies in our head
We believe in the internet
The world wide web virtual supplies
Should be called the world wide web of lies
Although there the truth can be found
And knowledge can be given
We need ambition brain nutrition who will listen

Who will read
Who will venture
Who will censor
Color is the lords gift
So why is it bad to be a *****tive

Well, you make some notable points but your structure and format is off balance and all over the place. If you feel strongly about this piece I reccomend you reevaluate and build on a more solid foundation.

Touchè ^