Bragging Right

Thread: Bragging Right

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  1. misscb said:

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    See when I'm on the mic I can make the whole continental divide move aside,
    Verbal homicide I provide,
    Like a planets and stars when the two collide,
    Feel the devastation,
    Nationwide,
    Everyone else falls,
    Fire and flame foolish pride,
    Like an invasion to your main frame worldwide,
    Flood the world like a nation tied,
    With the destruction I imply,
    Look at the upside,
    Join my crew follow my stride,
    Genies of dope scripture production,
    Look at the bigger picture,
    Scope conduction,
    Battle me?
    No hope no function,
    Beating me?
    Its a fictional deduction,
    Like a nurse you suck,
    Now add suction,
    Can't cope?
    Mope around there's my instruction,
    Don't mess around,
    Confess you foolish clowns,
    Your impressed we are renown,
    Stress the fact I deserve the crown,
    Express the impact when I knock you down,
    My group is stacked,
    Sit down,
    Don't overreact,
    Verbal smack,
    To the ground,
    Extract the game,
    Don't make a sound,
    Distract my flames,
    My crew got my back,
    Eat the game mental snack,
    Grab an ak,
    Take aim,
    Like a wolf pack I react,
    Dope scriptures on every track,
    Spread blame that I overcame,
    I now attack,
    Just look at the name MISSCB I exclaim what other rappers straight lack,
    Intelligent straight facts,
    Hype and destruction like cocaine mixed with acid rain straight crack.
  2. CheesyBacon said:

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    Real nice flow and rhymes, only negative about the whole thing is that it doesn't make sense, but that only happens in one or two lines, then you pull it back on track. Impressive.
    Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart.
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    tackpic_47 said:

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    the shxt was dope...i like the nurse line...but it doesn't flow / no main topic..sooo bxtch hit me up with the beef cause i'm ready !
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    For Realz said:

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    Your meaning is there... Digging the "egotistical" (as some would say) style as to what you are to rapping. Your flow is there. Your word play could be tapped a little, have it make a little more sense outright. I don't know if it's just me but having lines as sentences helps the reader, as long as each sentence sets up the next. Format is only like 5% of the effort though, but at least you separate and don't just have a run-on paragraph.

    Keep going man!
    Take it beazy.