What I read in your rhymes
is Science, the bible and war
Toeing the line too many times
It's hard to endure
And I can't step lightly Enough
Not knowing if I blaspheme
Or a land mine's Beneath us
I don't want to cause no explosion
Watching legs get blown off... emotionally speak-en
I don't know what almost killed you, Laz
Or who revived your sorry azz,
But savior or no, you still speak like a ghost
Brought back, among the living to rattle chains ‘n moan
It is a lonely feeling when nobody knows
You’ve seen how quickly life really goes
And That’s your story and yours alone
To tell it is to risk everything you own
The experience sets you apart, albeit alone
It distinguishes you from the other drones,
But the truth isn’t a secret
So you don't have to keep it.
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Paradise...
Is a pair-a-dice,
rollin' a pair-a-fives.
After hittin' 6-4 on my very first try..
The pot is vouve and t, a "bi" pair-a-dikes
Two for one, that's a fairer price.
Even if they are just pair-a-guys.
I hit it from the back anyway, G!
What u think, I wanna see their glaring eyes?
I know you like my §hit but please,
that's my **** dont stare there guys.
They're like the care bear tribe.
I pee on t, now vouve wants to be pist on..
That's two pees from ROBB,
like two peas in a pod.
Well there's two Bs in ROBB.
But only one piece of meat hangin off,
gotta watch their teeth as they share their blow job.....
....vouve said she could groove with no R
With no R there's no Rap just this ap, and no stars.
And from the staRt your stat says u ARE not haRd,
u been had if you can't scRew,
Youd be skewed, end up as shishka-bob
Your mouth full of head,
I never heaRd when u said
"oh my god!".....
....I send dis script like a pack 'o jizz
You're used to receiving non-descript packages
due to all the male order a§§ u get
D@mn! Did I just say that? I had that sh|t flipped.
What I meant was, due to all the head u give,
you're the one that's packed with jizz......
......and Trina Marie tryn to make it seem like I'm a crack addict,
stupid bit(h, can't even spell at least take a crack at it.
What she meant was, I watch her dress thru a fukn crack in her attic.
Next time u post make sure u have some fukn craft added.
You're a pot of water before the Krafts added.
Get the hint trick? Understand what the fuk the wit meant?
You're no milf, just boiling hot, with no cheese and no muthafukn MACK u bit(h!...
.......but don't dwell girl,
if u were mine I'd keep u in da cellar,
and stand at the corner with a sign "hey fellers!"
"i got Marie and I'll sell her, by the hour or i'll mail'er.
Tell your friends for a fee they can nail her"
Might as well, hell I R.Kell'd her.
They say," we know we can muthafukn smell her"...Last edited by ROBBMACK; 01-28-2014 at 01:17 AM.
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Atta boy you're bringing it
Originally Posted by Venomonology
'One final score'? - what are we finishing for..
Horizons survive at heart in the brilliance of war.
Inauspicious force turn the stage into lava rock.
We'll make this religious but we'll pray to the battle gods.
Ain't that what you had in thought? Or hadn't thought through.
Acting novice asking props it's, you'd rather not prove.
I'm as driven as your rice burners first gear third as well.
Life's a b***h; you her and your worst fears burn in hell.
If apple's but of evil well then lend me a bin full.
But the fruit in Adams eye doesn't represent 'sinful'.
The golden feast takes a sightless form of temptation.
Now the garden fields fight its hemp nation replacement.
I'm sorry if you expected my best and I half @ss'd it.
Im not a rap addict.
I don't place eggs in cracked baskets..
Life's only but a fraction of a second at a time you'll find.
And I've decided I'd rather invest into livening mine.
F***k your euro cartoon world; clap infected Madeline.
Displace your diaphragm and dissect your last battle cry.
And anything 'black' inside; serve it in my favorite brew.
Venoms a good kill though il sadly have to savor you.Last edited by smoothtung; 10-09-2012 at 09:21 AM.
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While we're on that; where's my dawg at Robbmack.
Don't rip on vicks pups; i'm positive THEY fought back..
And you know where my walls at; but, quit attackin it.
I've brought you back, Robb Mack; you've been a pacifist.
You've asked me in-fact in the past how to rap a bit.
I half *ssed my adequate mask and I'm glad of it.
If I don't get at ven what makes you think il hit you up?
We share the same state but dont bare the same roots bruv.
Who's tough? Who f***s with smoothtung in rude fun.
Proved once he knew not what truth was, was soon done.
Robb Mack you cost rap scoffs, laughs, and false facts.
And it seems only that when you mock my words yours don't fall flat.Last edited by smoothtung; 10-09-2012 at 09:22 AM.
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horizons survive if we don't shoot 'em up; it's bright son.. Originally Posted by smoothtung
the future's fire, but present kids play shoot-'em-up with hydrants.
guidance lacked so riots hatched.. there's your "eggs in cracked baskets";
instead of vital raps it's ninety-grams.. final path.. casket.
'battle gods?' had it; I've prayed to every known saviour..
til I became my own & since then I've grown saner.
my wrists've owned razors (my twisted soul craved them)..
now, the skin shows a pink code of old failures.
& from this I've grown greater, like mass in the hadron collider.
from rough carbon to diamond; just alter the atom alignment.
then shatter, divide them into lyrics to rationalize;
passion derived from the fractions of past I survived.
If we’re “making this religious”, I’ll ‘examine scripture’.. ‘convert believers’..
Smooth’s likely to 'smash his own silver tongue’ to ‘give Judas the 30 pieces’
‘Betray the guy that teaches’ when he initially agreed to ‘confer the meaning’;
It’s almost ‘tragic’, he thinks the ‘myth of Bacchus’ portrays a ‘worthy being’
When it comes to action, he’s early leaving; in battle the first retreating
The kind of guy that if you ever raised your voice, he’d curse beneath it
I’m surely heated; hence “Euro cartoon world’s” evacuation
Forced on the inhabitants due to lack of vaccination
(cuz Venom’s coming, get it?) ..abandoned battle stations..
The whole thing’s on hold like suspended animation
F*ck it. I don’t like that metaphor, I won’t exacerbate it
Anyway, smooth, most of your points are wack, exaggerated
I’m a “novice asking props”? seems like you’re the one that’s masquerading
Taking your passion and contaminating - my compassion’s fading
cuz what was once an opinion of a top man's rapidly evaporating
from what you told me, it seemed like rap helped you emancipate
Now it seems like what you say & what you do never concatenate
you're from America, I thought that was a gallant nation
I'm from UK - we've collaborated in past engagements
you claim you saved the day at Pearl Harbor's dilapidation
but I don't remember us ever NOT being involved in battles they've won
& now you're thinking I'm finishing up, but this is stage one
you enter rap in passing phases; invent some crap, invalidate much
then get mad, stab backs like your whole act is to betray trust
& because of this, he thinks he's caused damage; but it ain't much
smoothtung's just a lame f*ck; & what lies he doth bequeath
but hey, at least tackpic's back.. 'already buried him'... 'what lies beneath'
(literally, it's right under this)Last edited by Venomonology; 10-11-2012 at 02:44 PM.
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I know it's hard to anticipate
the ending of your fate
but why would you f with me
Alexander the great
Greek mythology
ruler of Macedonia
we coming by the number
you
you looking kinda lonely brah
-you might be the truth-
thinking you're "dark vader"
----underclass fighter----
thinking you're "gladiator"
Step in my arena you'll get annihilated
with that two edeged sword that'll leave you castrated
And thats real talk boy
"300" comming at your whole flock boy
and I don't like threats
so I-Beg-You-Partan
I just kick off the cliff
screaming "This Is Sparta"
Fxxk an oracle
I know when its time for war
I just show up with your momma head at the door
Excuse my manners
overlook the grammar
BUT TRUE TALENT
is something that you can't ignore
you an animated cat
looking like nickelodeon
simple minded brat
fxxking with NAPOLEON
-and Im comming from the 1700s-
____tell me which is bitter_____
----------1930s-----------
________Adolf Hitler__________
And imma leave it with a stamp
----Venom legacy died hard---
____Concentrated Camp_____Rhymes-fade....Only the fans bring them back to life! -
Originally Posted by tackpic_47
Wow. I’ve had it, bro. That’s classic, bro. You really are the master, bro.
It’s just such a shame that text can’t represent sarcastic tones...
So, those references... were they supposed to prove to me you’re clever?
Does citing movies through and through a rap display you’re better?
Never. See, for that to work you’d have to do your research properly;
And if you did, you would’ve known that Alexander’s HISTORY... not mythology.
Honestly... but yo, he wants to do movies.. that’s all this male utters
So I’ll just ‘milk the genre’ – (get it? Cuz that’s all this male ‘udders’)
This battle’s like that film where the protagonist’s dating Summer
His days’re numbered.. & he plays the role like the gayest f*cker
(^ you’re him.)
Chalk him up – cuz while I’m high-rising, you’ll remain guttered
To beat me, you’d have to re-write the entire rap matrix domain’s structure
I thought you “don’t like big threats”, then it’s “momma’s head” – he’s kidding me...
This is Venom. Yeah? & all you’ve got to drop are inconsistencies?
It’s either hopes blown by thrown stones in glass houses
Or exposed bloke hopes loads for @ss pounding
You’re dope? No. You’re wacker than bit lines, for sure.
I mean, you ‘broke code’ so bad.. you might’ve done the challenge from 6 lines before!Last edited by Venomonology; 10-12-2012 at 09:54 AM.
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You hope I might write something nice?
Ummm.. nope, I'm ight, ight? n some'd think twice..
True dope! Lime light? Try it! Assume things, why?
New rope fu(k a thread! Lie lifeless as your meth hi dies..
Few quote what I said, hindsight can't assist ur methodless tries.
Crude jokes, what's the head like? Can I stretch those lips up wide?
You did scream "ROBBMACK" at the top of your lungs.
All caps in a battle rap? And then props from the tung?
Y'all craft a raffle that gave ROBB ops to who won?
Fall flat alley cat, behave and nod to the tru ONE..
Or have that weak trash used by smooth when you're gone.
U chose this.
Do note this..
I give due notice
to hopeless
Foes with No focus..
So bit(h
Grow wit
go get
A scope trick
You're no threat
This whole thread Knows it
A cougar? ho€ quit..
Cougars don't boast§hit T
hey show it. -
Who's that at^
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I give opinions like you ask me
All your raps are raspy
Livin' what the past brings
Let bygones be bygones but you just can't get past things
Your style sounds cramped plus your flow is un-entrapping
Hate to bring up bad things but your flow is somewhat ashy
Somethin' like a sad scene, man it's so unclassy
Un-polished, styles demolished
I call it played out but what would you call it
You need to drop the ego cuz your writing's just lethargic
And you say that you're the greatest, gimmie ****in' break kid
Cuz all I see from you's post-dated what the fakes did
So don't battle me or you'll be cryin' for a break ***** -
quickill quickill little star Originally Posted by quickill
how his raps aren't very dark
thinks he's dope and thinks he's fly
drugged up birdy in the sky
quickill quickill little star
his lack of skill won't get him far... -
Excuse my apology but listen venomonology
Your lines are too dull, you're better at anesthesiology
ZZZ you have a knack of puttin me to sleep
Let the curtains fall but your talent I exceed. -
Sorry for the dub post, but this right here was an ill *** drop. Originally Posted by smoothtung
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I'll add on later as well Originally Posted by Venomonology
You'd fail converting readers if your work dismantled earth beneath us.
. Planted herb where regions had been trampled since the birth of Jesus.
. Spanned the surfs to reaches seen immersed in depths with worms and leaches.
. Or landed first on beaches which to see we now must purchase visas.
Burst to pieces replicating the smash-out of the 'glass house'.
The worst deceit was thinking you could rap now. I have doubts.
Im mad about; scoff - kid, 'top man'? you're not him.
And as long as your riots 'don't fly' when dropping; you've lost wind.
Venomonology bending the policy testing his honest;
yes it's appalling me.
Top spin on a snowball dissolving in monotony.
Your own name keeps you from accomplishing the next feat.
Mentality poisoned - Venomonology obviously is less deep.
The sovereign opponent's cobol plenum 'over-flow's venom..
I spit so sloped I'm known to soak heaven.
As you 'quote' whole sections, only hopes greatly lessen.
I'm focused on v like a closely scoped NAVY weapon.
Posted in the mates direction.
Shot's will lay vapor resin.
Any hotter and scathe the gun stock's maker emblem.
What I mean to say is step off bruv I'm fire as hell.
Please respond a fighter; Why cypher by myself?
There's too much 'whittling', ven; get to the 'point'.
And you're a 'crystal', friend; if you misused the joint.
If I don't give a f**k about you don't take it personally .
I found you and vouched too but doubt grew a permanency.
Trounce through in certainty, the serpent sees-not he's caught.
Please stop. Seams seems popped when you're scheme flopped.
Cream of the crop. This s**ts on the real dawg.
I'll eat you up but if i dont cut you down the deals off.
To be continued..Last edited by smoothtung; 10-12-2012 at 10:47 AM.
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Why is you replying Originally Posted by Venomonology
as if you got a say so
rolly polly rapper
might as well stay low
but real talk
I like your dedication
you think your venoms lethal
but I have the medication
lame rhymes-so called revelations
that will flip the whole truth and corrupt the whole nation
so let be the saviour
step in like jesus
unite the real artist cause the whole world need us
get your phonics up if you really want to read us
and put the buddies down
convert to adidas
we are grown up
you are just a fetus
test tube baby no glove on the cemen
I can get low
like a snake or a demon
but i'll rather stay godly no banished from EDEN!
Real Artist Unite!
Calling for SMOOTHTUNG
his rhymes need nutrition
throw away his food-junk
I am the log
venom is the lump
he got me talking backwards like im smoking on a blunt
LOL
And real talk
I know my fxxking history
fxck an ending punch line
cause I don't take you seriously -
Text's^farce. yes, 'star' lets spar.
Why Adidas; like you can afford less bars..
Neck guards won't keep me from ringing you senseless.
And "id rather stay godly" ..than thinking you meant this.
Due vengeance; is why tacky pick's badly hit.
And sadly if had left wouldn't actually be missed.
Back off a bit. This ain't your class of bout bruv.
If you don't bump my s**t your @ss has renounced love.Last edited by smoothtung; 10-12-2012 at 11:39 AM.
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First, Smooth Originally Posted by smoothtung
that was a compliment...not a diss
But for you imma redirect
cause I don't take shxt lightly when you say
you gone ring my neck
And VENGEANCE!
I know you not trying to redeem your pride
cause thats been gone
Old Skool stop stealing
give it back to the FlinStones
Star "what"
please come back to earth
you aint doing shxt big
you're a laughing smurf
better get your money right
better ask the clerk
cause you gone have to pay the studio twice
for them hear your work
you WORTH-LESS
Stupid Bxtch
and Im sorry that I had to go LUDA-CHRIS
you a white boy so you kind of new to this
but im here to tell you that you took a stupid risk
So shut up, and leave it to the Majors
you are just a Minor
uninvited neighbor
looking for a tip
under paid waiter
Define your skills
corrupted
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monotony huh? aha... iight, let's switch this up... Originally Posted by smoothtung
I've "spanned the surfs" with perserverance just to land a burst of genius;
burned up "herbal treatments" while my strength discerned it's certain weakness;
"Purchased visas", been to work in lands where Gods desert the foetus;
returned ideas at first convenience rejected back when searching secrets.
I've excercised external freedom, earned respect, deserve the deepest;
Fought against internal lesions caused by people .. venal treasons.
I've rose from ash to ether regions, soaring over trees of Eden;
"Venom's plenum" - evil feelings seized & given Phoenix features.
our "friendship's" ending if your deepest grievance is I can't spit rap..
cuz the kinetics of my speech'll leave your mental aspects whiplashed.
this man thinks he's really a "sovereign opponent"
but the position's tainted: violent peacekeeper, Somalia's spokesman.
I'll turn "snowball" to avalanche; momentum sent through 'shaadow'land
to handicap inhabitants that haven't scratched this battle plan.
I've allographs you can't surpass all planned and mapped on granite pillars;
I'm leaving smoothtung cracked & blistered - butterfly versus caterpillar..
I'll "whittle sticks" to simply puncture holes into your chrysalis ^;
stunt your growth 'fore somethin rose ..-.. halt the birth of hypocrites.
I give "NAVY weapons" lucid trips, invade & send ship's crews adrift;
your past was bright, your future's dim; old horizon, new eclipse.
You "found" & "vouched" before the battles, how about when darkness passes?
And you "don't give a f*ck" because you know I'd snap the olive branches.Last edited by Venomonology; 10-13-2012 at 11:07 AM.
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Originally Posted by tackpic_47
Let me stereo-type this phrase out.
Racial life heirs his folk rights to play stout.
Say scout; the 'greyhounds' came out, you're prey now.
I've got a train mount on the grounds if we break down.
Shape your frames round - you aren't straight with me.
You've got balls but.. - there's space enough for three..
You've worded everything how I've constantly seen it.
'Smurf'? - how does that cross as comedic.
Ill ring your neck twice for the attitude..
You might not take it lightly but the line wasn't asking you.
Mentally attacking you cuz your mind's frail as the rap.
Drunk I'd be off this if the ale wasn't flat.
I'd say I'm mentally consumed; but still spit.
Tack pick is densefully screwed like drill bits.
I will hit, and for you - straight in the chops bro.
I'll f**k up your siesta like I tainted the tacos.
You've not proes. In fact you've more cons than your race.
And if you're tough Waldo's been caught lifting weights.
You're novice and fake and I just don't have time tack.
And long as the drop's wasting space take your rhymes back.Last edited by smoothtung; 10-12-2012 at 06:02 PM.
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Ring it? Originally Posted by smoothtung
I'll break it
Just for the sake a it
Just face it
your neck needs breakin, kid
ain't worth the effort, but I did
And you'll thank me for it, in da end
Cause the world will finally applaud
Just like you always imagined they would
Not cause you got talent to laud
But cause Your neck's broken, you'll be silent now
With whatever it was You called rappin
More like incessant yapping
A little dog that needs to be kicked
A little 8itch that needs to be sticked
You like a backed up septic tank
Producing all this sh:t that stanks
And I can't seem to stop the flow
It just keeps comin' out of you
That's why I had to turn your head
All the way round to break yo neck
It was civil disobedience
But someone had to protest,
Your lyrical remedialness
