There were times when I had enough.
to feel happy, was really tough.
I was falling, thinking no one will catch me.
but I was wrong, oh yeah.

you didn't see what I had for you.
it was painful, but I cant blame you.
the loneliness crept in my veins.
it helped me to break those strains

its time, to let it go,
to laugh and smile,
to breathe the the beautiful life
its not over yet,its not over yet

I cant forget those times.
dont ever think that
its just that I buried them alive
beneath the ones of them,who helped me up.

its time, to let it go,
to be crazy and to love it
to look ahead and move on.
it aint over. It has just begun.

Not bad!Only ask you to take "it"out of the first line.When I had enough,is the line you're looking for.Love the the refrain and the little change you made at the end.

Agreed with Doug.

Thanks man. Your suggestion taken. Will remove 'it'

Originally Posted by Malay_razor

Thanks man. Your suggestion taken. Will remove 'it'

When?I'm waiting....................

Did it bro

Originally Posted by Malay_razor

Did it bro

You see,I care about you and your art.

Thanks man. Really appreciate it.