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sbu you're really good could u tell me how i could get better?

Originally Posted by DuceDaMicRipper

Yo, I'mma let it be known, I'm here to plant a seed wit my flow
and aint goin no where till i know its been sown
takin full responsibility 4 "rasin tha bar" and Doin it all on my own
just like a father care for his child untill he iz grown

I'm uh' spit it how I spit, fluent and sick wit it
**** a maggician, no need for uh' trick wit it
in pursuit of deez lame *****es that be searchin
for fame in the wrong places, with game
thats more pathetic than your average day rascist
crowds full of long faces, waitin for you
to pull the shrowd off of your fake "basis"
destructable foundation built on financial consolations
so jus face it, your sharon stone, basic
instinct tells me you wont make it but Duce is goin place

so imma tell ya like this...

I drop prop's to all da m.c.'ez bustin in this spot
beef aint my goal, my goal is comin off top and fine tuning my control
but in uh' battle, you get rolled, verbal confrontation, you get told
That Duce is lyrically fit to the rip the mic right
bustin raps is what he like and motha****az say the sick *** **** i spit is tight
so why should i stop now? I wont ever put down the mic
as long as i live, shittin on the hype along with your kids
Duce be the type to make lightning strike twice in tha same night, as you...
get up to check what it iz, may be a prowler up inside of your crib
lookin to dismember your body and keep one its ribs
wit a family full of cannibles at home placing thier bids, and the highest one wins
taking thier dibs, making it big, is what i want to see for all of my nigs
which iz why i continue to spit. This mother****ing Jerry lewis misfit retarted wheel chair type uh' ****' *****....

You hangin in baby cribs
Playin with baby bibs
Bids? one cent is you're only bid
You no nig
You're some wanna be kid
You're tight
Losing a big loss of sight
You're not sick
just another prick
You're a wanna be d1ck
You say you're doing props
Let's have everything drop
you only got a 1 inch shop
You are a average day racist
You also lose on an average day basis
You be talkin like you got flow
There are no lights at this show
See you in hell homo
Half your lines don't even rhyme face me and I'll break you're spine

Originally Posted by Deleterious

sbu you're really good could u tell me how i could get better?

Thanks. What type of advice do you want?
Generally.. Just take some time to decide what is important to your style and even more time to develop those elements.

Develop the ways you look at/interact with battlerap as well as developing the techniques themselves.
As one personal example of that:
I think 'focus' is an important element of a drop.. to give each drop it's own individual character, defined by which techniques ( and vocab /themes /angles etc) are not used as well as which ones are. a 'balanced' drop using a bit of each of your techniques can be effective at times but I don't think it should be the default way to do it.

Flow can be developed in any number of different ways, depending on preference.
I'd certainly recommend practising 'chaining' and 'stacking' polysyllabic rhymes. (longer 'chains' of syllables in each rhyming repetition, and more rhyming repetitions of your chains 'stacked' in subsequent lines or within lines as internals) (..or fractured as partial internals, or juggling seperate chains/partials at the same time) (..etc)

I think 'flips' are great for a lot of reasons. (quoting or referring to something your opponent said, or their name, etc.)

~flipping can make for Much faster writing, as concepts will occur to you when scanning through their text.
~and it can be effective in disarming their drop or directly 'bettering' it.. drops can be most effective/believeable/satisfying when in some way responding.
~and it gives 'Relevance', which I think is very important for several reasons. I really like densely referent drops which prove authenticity by only fitting that specific situation.

ermm. hope that helps in some way.
mostly just put time in though, and analyse as you practise.

umm alot of people say i need double syllable
i wanna be able to flip but idk what part to flip and how

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Ok. 'roll the dice', ill show this guy my time - I'll even give sly another vile try.
I bet that far cry lies shy of your best...
Let me guess, you were fresh dry of fly text?
nonetheless,
You claim to be above the rest,
one that none can contest...
So I will inspect your mettling without expecting much less.
You depress - and invest in lies, not spine to impress.
I confess, that homie; I do not much respect.
You think your lines are erect,
you cut them short...
intellect's what you'll never perfect,
Im sure.
I'm built like a 'lex' and - you've wrecked, off course...
You seem a full blown 'nothing spesh"..abort.
You intersect perhaps incest an tone deff.
I confess that is the peak of my interest. Most deff.
A front row seat in the 'press sect.' .....
So I can watch this 'who am I'
Flee with tail between legs.

So you're showing me you're time?
All i see is 50 years that way at the end of the line
I'm the sensei
Cut you up like a demon got a switch blade
Learn the tricks of this trade
You might need some aid
'Lex'?... You couldn't get a wh*re for sex
'Who am I'? You're the tung that's drip-dry
You rap like you're untied
I don't claim to be above the rest in fact I'm a rookie
You're the one who wants the title but you better get ready to bookie
Run away and go play hooky
I'm just feelin the skill of the field
Now that my wound is healed
I can beat you unconcealed
Let's see how far you get peeled

btw sbu i got 3 different styles i only used my outraged one so far

Originally Posted by Deleterious

btw sbu i got 3 different styles i only used my outraged one so far

Originally Posted by Deleterious

So you're showing me you're time?
All i see is 50 years that way at the end of the line
I'm the sensei
Cut you up like a demon got a switch blade
Learn the tricks of this trade
You might need some aid
'Lex'?... You couldn't get a wh*re for sex
'Who am I'? You're the tung that's drip-dry
You rap like you're untied
I don't claim to be above the rest in fact I'm a rookie
You're the one who wants the title but you better get ready to bookie
Run away and go play hooky
I'm just feelin the skill of the field
Now that my wound is healed
I can beat you unconcealed
Let's see how far you get peeled

'Sensei'? / 'i-sense-A' nother weak competitor.
'Demons'? need better..
Amatuer you wreak of 'need an editor'

You've been revealed bro - an your 'feel' is 'not clever'.
I 'feel the field' like Scofield an deal flows unfettered.

'Learn tricks of the trade'? If that's your 'aim', unload.
I'll 'trade' you 'tricks' - in exchange, you safely fold.
It may-be bold but - 'may' you 'be' told you are ghastly.
That your half-as-clean I'm unsold - I'm nasty savvy.

Bow down to your majesty kid, the 'gymnst' of text.
When asked-if-he rips it - he spins 'flips' on the best.
He 'pins' sh*ts like a rich b*tch will 'finger nit' a dress...
An he'll expose you're 'skill' for nil like all of the rest.

I confess you instill 'outrage' if you think you've talents
All your text is 'out of rage' - while mine is quite valiant.
Now you've had it,
Kid..
'Deleterious', you get?
You can't contest with smooth - You're 'delirious' instead..

You cant expose skill
you're weak coming up this hill
I'm not 'out of rage'
I'm ripping out of this cage
I was playing but now the mode all changed
I'll make sure you get booed off stage
Pay you're wage
Way out due to engage
The only thing you did to me was get me enraged
I 'bow down to no man'
I'm the only omen
I split you open
You know no tricks
You're a kid playing with sticks
Time to turn up the anger increase the danger
Straight face, i don't f*ck with g*y S*it
So i guess that means i can't f*ck with you now
Dam right i make go on you're knees to bow
With a weak a*s name you're a weak a*s rapper
I shut you off like a fire snapper
'I-Sense-A' inside fear
It's time to veer this battle in gear
I reappear like you was seeing unclear
Go to to homeless people maybe they will let you volunteer
If I'm nice you might get a souvenir

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smooth i think you might have beat me but I'll go like one more before i give up

Originally Posted by DuceDaMicRipper

loose lips zip quick
stitch tag trae six
faggot suck d*ck *it*h
eat sh*t you punk trick.
I flip scripts, hit mits, dip whips,
and raise em' up like new born pits
movin quicker than a gazzele
_SBU aint slick
more like U B.S. - since SBU's
_rhymes are bullshit
my flows compell
_semi-auttomattic full-clip

yo...

you couldnt pull your own weight even if you imagined your self haulin a crate
so why you even submit a reply dissin me? like Ali...I'm one of the Greats
To ever hold a mic lyrically rippin to shreds any mother****er steppin to me
in a battle get fractured and fixed in the same line like a doctor prescribing you meds

'Punk trick'? the only thing you punk is d1ck
Dissing sbu he's the best on this site to better take it back quick
Once you're flipped doesn't matter who's slick
'Full-clip' You get beaten so many times You're ripped
'Crate'... well crate is better than you're silly debate
'Whips' sbu makes you look like a dipsh1t
Put's you in the league of misfits
Better rethink who you're facing dawg

Originally Posted by Deleterious

You cant expose skill
you're weak coming up this hill
I'm not 'out of rage'
I'm ripping out of this cage
I was playing but now the mode all changed
I'll make sure you get booed off stage
Pay you're wage
Way out due to engage
The only thing you did to me was get me enraged
I 'bow down to no man'
I'm the only omen
I split you open
You know no tricks
You're a kid playing with sticks
Time to turn up the anger increase the danger
Straight face, i don't f*ck with g*y S*it
So i guess that means i can't f*ck with you now
Dam right i make go on you're knees to bow
With a weak a*s name you're a weak a*s rapper
I shut you off like a fire snapper
'I-Sense-A' inside fear
It's time to veer this battle in gear
I reappear like you was seeing unclear
Go to to homeless people maybe they will let you volunteer
If I'm nice you might get a souvenir

'Fire'? Snap! - Err'... you're at best to bring craftier.
Its 'fact',
I've vastly nastier - you lack sense badly sir.

You're a 'drag'. 'Fasten' rapper - or act madly to learn,
If raps 'snap' 'fire' - well mine leave you badly burned.

You 'crashed' your 'turn' - I rap dont 'swerve', and stack perfections.
Your apt to work, adds no reserve an acts as no protection.

That 'act' is coarse and acts as force behind my bad intentions.
I attack your nerves in spectacular form like a vernacular infection.

It's exact to say to stack this win I don't have to add bars.
But no 'bar' is sub par so far so ill 'craft' with active heart.

Originally Posted by Deleterious

'Punk trick'? the only thing you punk is d1ck
Dissing sbu he's the best on this site to better take it back quick
Once you're flipped doesn't matter who's slick
'Full-clip' You get beaten so many times You're ripped
'Crate'... well crate is better than you're silly debate
'Whips' sbu makes you look like a dipsh1t
Put's you in the league of misfits
Better rethink who you're facing dawg

"you to school" is the only "thing I'm taking back"
George boole will agree, your numbers arnt tough to crack
"your a fool", admit it *****, your birth name is really "april"
and since your dumb, and truley no good at rap...I suggest you no longer "bell the cat"
get snapped in half, "deleted" off the f*uc*ing map
I know your gay...and when you die I dont wanna be the one that has to go and tell your momma that

Originally Posted by smoothtung

'Fire'? Snap! - Err'... you're at best to bring craftier.
Its 'fact',
I've vastly nastier - you lack sense badly sir.

You're a 'drag'. 'Fasten' rapper - or act madly to learn,
If raps 'snap' 'fire' - well mine leave you badly burned.

You 'crashed' your 'turn' - I rap dont 'swerve', and stack perfections.
Your apt to work, adds no reserve an acts as no protection.

That 'act' is coarse and acts as force behind my bad intentions.
I attack your nerves in spectacular form like a vernacular infection.

It's exact to say to stack this win I don't have to add bars.
But no 'bar' is sub par so far so ill 'craft' with active heart.

you mixed the rage with wit and grace..
your flips are getting sicker mate;
..I innovate; ..you imitate;
so I flipped your texts- to a different page.
..you've bitten greats ..but you ain't got that same-flavor.
I make all your templates ..and maintain 'em.
so be creative.
and don't re-create this.
your disrespects skipped a step so you're not even basic.
I leave biters muzzled- this dawg needs restraining.
it's no joke.
I just flipped every bar that you wrote- with no quotes..
but your best ever line was "E.T.. phone home".

Originally Posted by DuceDaMicRipper

"you to school" is the only "thing I'm taking back"
George boole will agree, your numbers arnt tough to crack
"your a fool", admit it *****, your birth name is really "april"
and since your dumb, and truley no good at rap...I suggest you no longer "bell the cat"
get snapped in half, "deleted" off the f*uc*ing map
I know your gay...and when you die I dont wanna be the one that has to go and tell your momma that

'April fools' you're in the wrong season fool
You're more like 'Santa' You're yelling I'm a 'H*e H*e'
Get it 'ho ho'
I think that's a no no
I go to 'school' to make sure you get 'schooled'
I'm not 'gay' You're begging sbu for foreplay
He's rapping 'GO THE F*CK AWAY'

smooth you win i know when i'm beaten good match

Originally Posted by _SBU

you mixed the rage with wit and grace..
your flips are getting sicker mate;
..I innovate; ..you imitate;
so I flipped your texts- to a different page.
..you've bitten greats ..but you ain't got that same-flavor.
I make all your templates ..and maintain 'em.
so be creative.
and don't re-create this.
your disrespects skipped a step so you're not even basic.
I leave biters muzzled- this dawg needs restraining.
it's no joke.
I just flipped every bar that you wrote- with no quotes..
but your best ever line was "E.T.. phone home".

What... respectful dues? cool - but... respect 'full'-dues ...
'Intellectualy' I'm bejeweld.
'S' be you? - nah...
Skewed gene pool.

Gee. Cool... -
.. you did your homework -
But.... what, pre-school?
My heightened fight 'bites' like bone spurs in your knee fool...

Pristine tools are authentic - ya condescending menace.
I'm on to something - hot scripts. an only a freshman -

(None can contest-with my impeccable regiment)

I'm a progressively professional vessel with an impediment.
I'll 'k-k-k'kill your obsessively oppressive testaments...

Your best kid?
I'm 'in'charge like the blue team in san Diego
You've a need for a re-'charge' like your 'UBS_' frayed n broke

Round 2?

Originally Posted by smoothtung

What... respectful dues? cool - but... respect 'full'-dues ...
'Intellectualy' I'm bejeweld.
'S' be you? - nah...
Skewed gene pool.

Gee. Cool... -
.. you did your homework -
But.... what, pre-school?
My heightened fight 'bites' like bone spurs in your knee fool...

Pristine tools are authentic - ya condescending menace.
I'm on to something - hot scripts. an only a freshman -

(None can contest-with my impeccable regiment)

I'm a progressively professional vessel with an impediment.
I'll 'k-k-k'kill your obsessively oppressive testaments...

Your best kid?
I'm 'in'charge like the blue team in san Diego
You've a need for a re-'charge' like your 'UBS_' frayed n broke

'I'm bejeweled' You've just been 'de-Jeweled'
'Pre-school' You've just came out of high school and you're flips still get 'schooled'
'Re-charge' You're rhymes are still sh1t 'enlarged'
'K-K-K kill' only black *****s
That's where you turn to you're mom for you're first 'score'
'menace' in this match I'm the 'man'-with-the-'ace'
I pay 'full dues' and you still 'lose'