Official Battle Thread.

I gotcha Sk'n, i got you

First battle, umm, how should I do this
Should i spit it like a nuisance or till you're just clueless
Ima make myself at home don't consider me intrudin
Cause by the time you realize im on you're already losin, uhh
Flip me the bird? Might as well flip me two
Kill em with one stone cause i don't get picky dude
Just kill it like i should then slip away like im teflon
You better hurry and step up to me or else you'll just get stepped on
Takin me into battle well ya better grab ya vest
I got that heat to make ya sweat and come off like a pacifist
While im passin this i'll keep it goin cause im passionate
My **** hurts from you on it so that's why im grabbin it
16 bars, i'll cop that from the candy store
Battle rap, man i'm ready for many more
But i'll leave you with some life though it sounds hypocritical
This sittin duck fired back cause man i'm just despicable

damn Steeze... pretty good man...

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Ha straight elementary. I need **** ta make fun of lol

Pretty good for sesame street rhymes....not bad at all. good drop SmoothThug

Okay Steeze...you started off week, still ending up as a duck.
Shut that *hit up before you end up homeless... Duck sicken for bucks.
make a home? Why? You've already built it out of spare parts...
across the gate in the grave yard, made from those lame Bars....
Passionate about pissing? Yep he's peed on him self.
Steeze...really? That's it Homie..Yo I can see he needed some help.
And uuuh... fake thug you too are generally the same...
I expect you the blast me... Not play whack elementary games!!!
I've got better things to do then spay you two with insect repellant.
This was a test for Sneeze and you excepted and failed it?
Little Gnats feeling sick may be so but not so much lyrically..
Say you smoking sticky icky I'm this with you literally
Rolling stoned take toke of this *hit no need you've already chocked...
Naw.. I'm just blowing smoke you two are OK in my book.
But bring heat next time compare the way yours and mine looks...
Now all we need to make this work is a nice hook...

What do you think fellas....

Originally Posted by SK'nDeep

Okay Steeze...you started off week, still ending up as a duck.
Shut that *hit up before you end up homeless... Duck sicken for bucks.
make a home? Why? You've already built it out of spare parts...
across the gate in the grave yard, made from those lame Bars....
Passionate about pissing? Yep he's peed on him self.
Steeze...really? That's it Homie..Yo I can see he needed some help.
And uuuh... fake thug you too are generally the same...
I expect you the blast me... Not play whack elementary games!!!
I've got better things to do then spay you two with insect repellant.
This was a test for Sneeze and you excepted and failed it?
Little Gnats feeling sick may be so but not so much lyrically..
Say you smoking sticky icky I'm this with you literally
Rolling stoned take toke of this *hit no need you've already chocked...
Naw.. I'm just blowing smoke you two are OK in my book.
But bring heat next time compare the way yours and mine looks...
Now all we need to make this work is a nice hook...

What do you think fellas....

Nice dog. Ha but I think this


Skyn you done sinned, compare our scripts...really?
Just stare at this, I insist, you reconsider fairly.
Sincerely, I'm too lookin, at a graveyard grim
Err headstone has a quote says reminents of skyn.
Its evident ill win, irrelevant what you spit
I'm smoothtung and I'm too young to waste time on trick ****
You wanted me ta blast ya? So here's my ****in nine clip
You're a dime ***** with a fine ich to grind ***** and spike scripts
You're a vicegrip on your game...ha in nostiks terms "your a lame"
Who "needs help" now and who's "generally the same"
My respritory's insane, an insect that can take any spray.
To your dismay...rolling stone fell of in '98 anyway
Your smoking hay, not sticky ****,
Reassemble that image lickity split.
Divorce that wickity *****, but keep them kiddy kids
They'll be your money source when no else gives a ****
I'm a **** and that I ain't afraid to admit,
Got a big mouth too for an "elementary" kid

Nice smooth thug...nice...

Sk'n callin me weak though i know he finna creep
Up on me, i do circles around you, rick bobby
I'll kick in the door but no i ain't johnny
If you're lookin for some realness then just call me
All this week spittin heat at sk'nDeep
He don't even recognize that his ****'s weak
I'm on my call of duty i been goin on a killstreak
Mouthin off ain't nothin to the kid bumpin outta philly
Yeah really may be silly but your spittin straight vanilla
I'm droppin bombs like japan, though you know i mean Godzilla
Typin up these raps on my laptop with windows vista
They sting like a virus that you wished it wouldve missed ya
Im ridin dirty with some blunts, thirty deep im goin nuts
Surely you see wassup that i surely don't give a ****
Sittin duck on attack waitin for ya to strike back
Swagger automatic cause i lay it down like that

You stank like the saliva on my **** tip...
With lipstick. ur ***** straight went ballistic.
I'm lifted and every script I rip it
While you get,
Slapped and cussed out just like a ***** fit.
I'm gifted, take my style this time and twist it
I prestinely fit in rap, this ain't simplistic.
I went hard for the gravy that's on my buiscut
And I stayed on course while them others drifted.
I'm equipted can take my flow you know and shift it
Ur best bet to get rich is take my script and sift it
U missed it, I can take lyrical skill and piss it
I take game and risk it for meaning to each kid

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Nice dog. Ha but I think this


Skyn you done sinned, compare our scripts...really?
Just stare at this, I insist, you reconsider fairly.
Sincerely, I'm too lookin, at a graveyard grim
Err headstone has a quote says reminents of skyn.
Its evident ill win, irrelevant what you spit
I'm smoothtung and I'm too young to waste time on trick ****
You wanted me ta blast ya? So here's my ****in nine clip
You're a dime ***** with a fine ich to grind ***** and spike scripts
You're a vicegrip on your game...ha in nostiks terms "your a lame"
Who "needs help" now and who's "generally the same"
My respritory's insane, an insect that can take any spray.
To your dismay...rolling stone fell of in '98 anyway
Your smoking hay, not sticky ****,
Reassemble that image lickity split.
Divorce that wickity *****, but keep them kiddy kids
They'll be your money source when no else gives a ****
I'm a **** and that I ain't afraid to admit,
Got a big mouth too for an "elementary" kid

I finally got some time to hit you back smooth. Nice drop on me BTW...Steeze, your next.. lol



Keep defecating your words, Keep talking that shi*
Are you finished yet? quick Wipe your potty mouth with your scripts.
Before your *ss suffers a whiff from the stench of your upper lip,
Before it runs off your hips screaming that's it enough of this I quit!!!
HA..HA...
A little slapstick for a impotent *ick like you...
Acting harder than he is true, I think he's is just a bit confused...
Like Steve Burns just another dip *hit missing the clues.
Reminisce of when? ohh you mean “remnants” of Sk'n...oops illiterate too..

Your right.. I remain in this game, to let smooth choose his demise,
Which is it, in noose up high in a tomb alive or crucified for them stupid lines.
Pop in that clip, use that C02 nine on me so you can loose an eye.
I drop 50 cals see that’s the difference between Smooth and I...

And Ummm.. Didn't SBU already use a line about my family man?
I guess in your case it's too late, to cause any damage man...
Sk'n's Cancer Better check your self with a mammogram...what a boob!!
A Perfect fit for a little*itch like you, a spoof of a thug thinking he's smooth...

Damn aight aight ...

Originally Posted by SK'nDeep

I finally got some time to hit you back smooth. Nice drop on me BTW...Steeze, your next.. lol



Keep defecating your words, Keep talking that shi*
Are you finished yet? quick Wipe your potty mouth with your scripts.
Before your *ss suffers a whiff from the stench of your upper lip,
Before it runs off your hips screaming that's it enough of this I quit!!!
HA..HA...
A little slapstick for a impotent *ick like you...
Acting harder than he is true, I think he's is just a bit confused...
Like Steve Burns just another dip *hit missing the clues.
Reminisce of when? ohh you mean “remnants” of Sk'n...oops illiterate too..

Your right.. I remain in this game, to let smooth choose his demise,
Which is it, in noose up high in a tomb alive or crucified for them stupid lines.
Pop in that clip, use that C02 nine on me so you can loose an eye.
I drop 50 cals see that’s the difference between Smooth and I...

And Ummm.. Didn't SBU already use a line about my family man?
I guess in your case it's too late, to cause any damage man...
Sk'n's Cancer Better check your self with a mammogram...what a boob!!
A Perfect fit for a little*itch like you, a spoof of a thug thinking he's smooth...

Aight skn..what? Skn deep as a puddle,
Egging me on... yasee will get you into trouble
You barely break the skn with the nonsense you mumble
You talk about my upper lip, but over it you stumble

You're commiting slander on this page calling me out in a rage,
Open your eyes to your dismise, im Bruce banner ok?
Yea I talk some **** alright but if my hip ever ran away,
I'd send it to you with a poastcard saying "you need some backbone anyway"
Yea ill quote it, "impotent"? I'm zesty and I thought you'd note it
Others know it hell i show it, yea I boast it but so does n-o-s-"d"-i-c-k

I suppose this, you quit it, take your future script and aquit it.
Bump your tunes on high and Imagine you got the skill to rip it.
Get with it... you know you just dont got the **** to win it
I take your rhyme scheme and "whit" and play em like trinkets
Dink its....over for you
RIP'd this,
I did it like a blank disc and ripped it..get it?

I'm giving you advice, keep walking off the peer.
You talk out your rear and I'm about sick and tired you hear?
Loud and clear?? Tell me if I am skn deep,
You're weak, tell ur kids ima skn you in ur sleep

Originally Posted by Steeze

Sk'n callin me weak though i know he finna creep
Up on me, i do circles around you, rick bobby
I'll kick in the door but no i ain't johnny
If you're lookin for some realness then just call me
All this week spittin heat at sk'nDeep
He don't even recognize that his ****'s weak
I'm on my call of duty i been goin on a killstreak
Mouthin off ain't nothin to the kid bumpin outta philly
Yeah really may be silly but your spittin straight vanilla
I'm droppin bombs like japan, though you know i mean Godzilla
Typin up these raps on my laptop with windows vista
They sting like a virus that you wished it wouldve missed ya
Im ridin dirty with some blunts, thirty deep im goin nuts
Surely you see wassup that i surely don't give a ****
Sittin duck on attack waitin for ya to strike back
Swagger automatic cause i lay it down like that

Nice one...Steeze...back at ya...

Call me Vanilla! Crack your white jokes! for what purpose?
I've seen under your dermis, a human being that's worth worthless...
Yeah I called you weak, cause your scripts match the scripture.
I'd rip your *ss out the frame, but I'd rather look at the bigger picture.
You’re not it!! If you remember Johnny was Jack Nicholson as Jack Torrance...
Ended up frozen stiff at the end. just like your last performance..
Your not kicking in *hit. You wanna gang buster!!!
Go ahead and break your leg I do you the honors of breaking the other.
And *uck Godzilla, you can See em running with the Japanese when Deep is coming....
Your from Philly? ..really?? is that suppose to mean something?
Call of duty? Go choke on a Philly cheese Steak..
Ummm..excuse me waiter... I didn't order feces on my plate!!!
You think you've got what it takes for a tournament?
Novices get crushed.. Your better off surfing a tsunami during a bursting wind!!!
Watch what you say Before you end up dissembled friend...
Eyes bones teeth liver and who's on the end of the Blinder? Sk'n!!!

We need another emcee in here lol...I've been going against both of you and believe me this is not easy...even though my battles tell a diffrent story...both of you are damn good....Props...

Originally Posted by Steeze

Sk'n callin me weak though i know he finna creep
Up on me, i do circles around you, rick bobby
I'll kick in the door but no i ain't johnny
If you're lookin for some realness then just call me
All this week spittin heat at sk'nDeep
He don't even recognize that his ****'s weak
I'm on my call of duty i been goin on a killstreak
Mouthin off ain't nothin to the kid bumpin outta philly
Yeah really may be silly but your spittin straight vanilla
I'm droppin bombs like japan, though you know i mean Godzilla
Typin up these raps on my laptop with windows vista
They sting like a virus that you wished it wouldve missed ya
Im ridin dirty with some blunts, thirty deep im goin nuts
Surely you see wassup that i surely don't give a ****
Sittin duck on attack waitin for ya to strike back
Swagger automatic cause i lay it down like that

Steeze young fellow you musta missed the memo,
You're pinnochio and skn be japedo, wise and mellow.
"Hello!" Your hella slow, try adjusting ur pillow??
You drop it like Hiroshima? Oh no, you ripple like jellow.
I'm the Nagasaki bomb, I do more disaster...
Face your master, and get alittle bit faster.
The way you craft your lines is like a nursery rhyme,
Mine?
Prolly said it too many times...but its devine
Ill see your Godzilla and raise you a landmine
I throw mo blows and im gaur-en-teed ta land mine.
Feelin tough? Full of luck? Cmom call my bluff
I create stuff that breaks stuff cuz you can't play rough

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Steeze young fellow you musta missed the memo,
You're pinnochio and skn be japedo, wise and mellow.
"Hello!" Your hella slow, try adjusting ur pillow??
You drop it like Hiroshima? Oh no, you ripple like jellow.
I'm the Nagasaki bomb, I do more disaster...
Face your master, and get alittle bit faster.
The way you craft your lines is like a nursery rhyme,
Mine?
Prolly said it too many times...but its devine
Ill see your Godzilla and raise you a landmine
I throw mo blows and im gaur-en-teed ta land mine.
Feelin tough? Full of luck? Cmom call my bluff
I create stuff that breaks stuff cuz you can't play rough

"landmine" / "land mine"? crass, trite an basic.
I'll 'disarm that' / diss 'arms' that bland writers play with.
you admitted I'm sickest so now I feel bad fam;
..ran through ya ghost like a powerpilled pacman.

as all of rap's a pantheon we're gods of modern cyphers.
if you're the "nakasaki bomb" I'm robert oppenheimer.
I wield science. a real rhymer, I feel strident.
anything "Mine"'ll yield diamonds.

Damn...ha ur wordplay is great

Originally Posted by _SBU

"landmine" / "land mine"? crass, trite an basic.
I'll 'disarm that' / diss 'arms' that bland writers play with.
you admitted I'm sickest so now I feel bad fam;
..ran through ya ghost like a powerpilled pacman.

as all of rap's a pantheon we're gods of modern cyphers.
if you're the "nakasaki bomb" I'm robert oppenheimer.
I wield science. a real rhymer, I feel strident.
anything "Mine"'ll yield diamonds.

Disarm me.. ill build back up...
/dis-army was built Ford tough.
You're sickest if /sick-is rough
You're whit-is..not "smooth" enough
Ill proove I'm tough, turn your back pac
This ghost got his color back, time ta snack!
Mr. Oppenheimer ill /open-fire on ur physics
Project manhatten got a pattent, get wit it.
Don't yield diamonds nor will Neil find this
You're skills too far behind to be where mine is

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Aight skn..what? Skn deep as a puddle,
Egging me on... yasee will get you into trouble
You barely break the skn with the nonsense you mumble
You talk about my upper lip, but over it you stumble

You're commiting slander on this page calling me out in a rage,
Open your eyes to your dismise, im Bruce banner ok?
Yea I talk some **** alright but if my hip ever ran away,
I'd send it to you with a poastcard saying "you need some backbone anyway"
Yea ill quote it, "impotent"? I'm zesty and I thought you'd note it
Others know it hell i show it, yea I boast it but so does n-o-s-"d"-i-c-k

I suppose this, you quit it, take your future script and aquit it.
Bump your tunes on high and Imagine you got the skill to rip it.
Get with it... you know you just dont got the **** to win it
I take your rhyme scheme and "whit" and play em like trinkets
Dink its....over for you
RIP'd this,
I did it like a blank disc and ripped it..get it?

I'm giving you advice, keep walking off the peer.
You talk out your rear and I'm about sick and tired you hear?
Loud and clear?? Tell me if I am skn deep,
You're weak, tell ur kids ima skn you in ur sleep

Nice one smooth..the boomerang is coming back....

Okay Dr. Banner you just stepped in the wrong puddle Bruce!
I don't need to be 300 pounds of cut muscle to out muscle you.
I know I've been eating away at your brain like amoeba.
Mind over matter, maybe it's best you lay off the cheeba.
Oh *hit!! Your hip just ran pass me faster than a cheetah.
Chasing your *ss cause it left, now it's deiced to leave ya.
For a bit, until you get your *hit straight, cause at this rate,
Your rip cage will separate next, exposing your inner frame
Just as I though *itch made. Or should I say Butter cup....
Your sick and tired?.. What? have you had enough?
Can't muster up enough Ketchup to cut his *ucking mustard up...
Suck in a cluster *uck Like Custard when the natives came and *ucked him up?
Playing with Trinkets? makes me wonder smooth, whats up with you...
You think your Hot Dawg? more like Chilly and Naw...I ain't speaking of the food.
Skin me in my sleep that's something a sissified punk would do...
Maybe you should battle steeze form now on.. cause Sk'n Deep is just to much for you...

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Disarm me.. ill build back up...
/dis-army was built Ford tough.
You're sickest if /sick-is rough
You're whit-is..not "smooth" enough
Ill proove I'm tough, turn your back pac
This ghost got his color back, time ta snack!
Mr. Oppenheimer ill /open-fire on ur physics
Project manhatten got a pattent, get wit it.
Don't yield diamonds nor will Neil find this
You're skills too far behind to be where mine is

you "built back up" but still lack structure.
..still bland bruv, ya sh*t's lacklustre.
your b-ait bit-ten lines ain't got the fundamentals;
"ghost got his colour back".. I'm on another level.

I admire ya persistance but it's time for some resistance;
you should tighten ya precision or admire wit and wisdom;
sit and listen.. sh*t- 'read' rather,
I'll joyride those "fords" like a theme park an' leave after.

Great lyrics, I could really feel the rhythm when I was say them to myself.