Sorry for taking a bit. Worked last couple days
Yo , SBU and shadoow
Think you know everything but I'm still asking where' rap go
Style that I "grew" ; minimal effort but you can't have all that , No!
Nothing bout ya mothafuc!as is new go back to where ya came from be'fo.
Ay you Mr.Rambo and Shadow
I'll give you that got some crazy rhymes
Still yo **** don't phase me cause I've seen hundred's of your kind
Both of you little bi!tches didn't wanna face me cause I got a maniac mind
Think you can spit it but of the latest all your **** together can't fu!k with one line!
This motha fuc!a says practices skills till you feel born with em'
I run this sh!t when I RAP IT and everyone I know gotta to adore it
When you rapping all of em whisperin' "Man this n!igga so horrible"
Stop with all dat' cause 30 sec's I'm yawnin ; Boredum! :[
But haha don't take this to offense
You can't flow **** and you "sluggin" no temple.
Yo shadoow when you can stop ed!ting I'll respect yo' sh!t
Freestyle is respected for real , Put you aside with all the rest yo' *** a b!tch!
SBU say's Yo , Stop forcing it man!
Fuc! you when yo **** nothing but boredum land :////
Tried ta fu!k with me now try thinking twice when ya can
You both rap egotistical but damn let's really see who's last to stand![]()
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Yea, I have crazy rhymes... if the boot fits wear it full..
this kid thinks his lazy lines can beat me? Hysterical.
He's got to be kidding ..rhymes words twice wickedly.
And listen, "..I like girls".. so.. why you tryna wink at me?
I've read what you said.. 'fake' spreads fast "sooo..."
Regain who you are - while your brain stem's intact yo.
You're a whole lotta nothing, with a whole lotta bluffs.. yeut..
And it seems you're shuffling through more 'trash' than dump trucks.
Dumb luck, you've started a stiff 'beef' with the master,
Numb n*ts scripts for weeks, I come so much faster..
This one is no rapper, he just loves fighting 'shaad'..
But when its done watch him stagger like he's been siphoning gas.Last edited by smoothtung; 01-18-2012 at 08:54 PM.
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spit at haters
call me mass murderer terrorist
im here to here to end this bullshit
scarface is here tommy guns ***** full clip
suck these bullet like how u suck on your *** clit
im going hard at u b*tches like a viagra ****
so u haters know ur f*cked like a trick in a porno flick
im here to battle any one of u douche bag and im choosing random
i aint no pu*sy so nothing can protect you hater no condom
where is the throne im here to take my kingdom
here to rule the block solomons wisdom
this just a preview how im fuc*ing you b*tches im not done yet pre cum -
Yo sincere134, take a seat... let me spit this:
sincere, oh sincerely I dearly love
how you think it's good to battle just by talkin guns and sayin f*ck.
yeah, your clearly stuck on level one
when you spit sh*t even deaf kids wanna buy ear plugs.
so I don't need no condom? no problem
I never wash my feet with my socks on.
and what's all this about "it's just a preview"? "pre-cum"?
umm... put your hands up if you think that's weird... YUP!
If you wanna talk movies? I know I'm the chieftain.
You're just an amateur director - I'm Tarantino, Quentin.
I pulp your fictions one by one by dissidence of diction
I'm a dog from the resevoir on a mission.
"here to rule the block solomons wisdom" um...
exactly which kind of sense you making?
I just can't figure it, maybe I'm missing it
Please explain to me your meaning, maybe I'm the idiot.
But I doubt that, 'cause based on the rest of the rap
Your just wack. Now let this be your life's f*cking soundtrack.
shaadow, you next.Last edited by CheesyBacon; 01-19-2012 at 02:26 AM.
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Shaadow - an imperfect imitation or copy.
A rough image caused by opaque objects. Got me?
An archetype of weakness in Jungian psychology,
You exhibit this regularly, I think you need therapy.
"rhymes words twice wickedly"?
wickedly my wicked words rhyme twice. twice.
see? I could have rhymed it thrice.
But I prefer concise, twice was suffice.
This be a little slice so nice,
Just enough that your enticed to reply. -
That was.. funny an' fly.. - but 'productions' is easy;
want me? I'd bleed you dry - don't give a f*ck who see's me.
You need me, my fire lines burn so steezy / sly,
"My fire lines.." well yea.. will 'burn' you to 'cheesy-fries'..
You're a 'reservoir dog'? Well I should drown this puppy,
respect me 'dawg' ..
How dare you think you're repertoire's above me..
You've disastrous word-play; Tarantino, Quentin..? Listen..
You're classic mishap - like a pair of Kilo's pending shipment..Last edited by smoothtung; 01-19-2012 at 08:45 AM.
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He's run out of steam - ..can't cook a punch
Over'ran' his mouth so here's a foot to munch..
I'm 'shaadow'.. - ..so always on the 'dark side' of light,
You're stacked lines are shallow even if rhymed 'thrice'.
I'm serving 'high and tight' so step back from my fire dawg..
The difference between us dying in fight.. you've higher odds..
You couldn't bring something tight if your were a vital communicant,
And you couldn't 'come clean' if using lysol for lubricant. -
You're obnoxious. All the lyrics I wrote there were spontaneous to the moment and there was no copying.
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Please step back.. - ..you can't see me?.. You dont want to.
You refuse to respect that what you see from me might haunt you.
You can't rap.. but 'tweak' fast.. Must be 'crack' pursuance ..like thongs dude..
I didn't steal lines, but if stealing is 'influence'.. we're all screwed.
I'd assault you,
..but you too tempt behind glass screens..
I'd maul you but I'm content - ..won't wreck the chaps dreams..
I can't tell if you're acting, no matter.. sir's a fun liar..
You came at me, but actually swerved into gun fire. -
Spam catcher in action
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I got more heart than bret not spiritually
but in my basement from the MC's i stab lyrically
lethal minded as i walk binded with the microphone cord
I do this for fun to you its a chore
watching you scream is my reward as you get torned
the only time im letting you get away is to leave you mentally scarred like a 5 year old doing kitty porn
but when you hear the horns you know scorn apporaches
microphone fibroses my prognosis is that ill survive more wars than roaches
cuz i get loose when i shove my **** up you cunts
your stunts are not cute trying to smoke *****s up like a blunt
on a mean manhunt like columbine but like them tips your lines are hollow
get a new rapper for your tounge to swallow
or get a new style for your mind to follow
rite now you aint **** thinking you are legit
mastered the art of mimickry and now you throwing fits
fvk all of that just put the mic down and just quitLast edited by killanatural; 01-19-2012 at 05:00 PM.
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Killanatural's still not actually 'killa'.. but confused a bit.
He's still a ..back-ta-school, half-as-cool.. math geek with a crucifix.
Lose the sh*t..
..It's guna take more violence to stop me..
An if you can't 'kill-naturally'.. well I tend to get raunchy.
I'm only dropping 3 bars to this 'hittin hard hustler'..
Though you know I got more 'bars' than 'linkin-log' structures.. -
He's "fly" and you say I'm easy?
Yo style on how ya rhyme don't please me
I'm gonna take you're flow right out your mouth
Let this "rap" forum know I'm the light to show where shadoow is about
Think you got mo' bars then "linkin' log structures?"
Damn bro you ain't so hard when I'm carryin' mo then Freakin' log truckers!
But once again told ya, Don't **** with OneLuv
Own ya in your own style you think you holdin' ; Tough luck -
MY shadow flashes past, you stand back. Gasp. Can't grasp what I say like I'm speaking Arawak.
Your wisecracks ain't all that, they fall flat. Your off track like a plane that's been hijacked.
Your soundtracks are so slack, they can't hack it, like a gambling addict losing at blackjack.
I'm a linebacker, you're a quarterback fumbling a bad snap then getting your *** sacked.
This is target practice. Come on man, think of something original.
Cause me a miracle. I want you to, I just don't think you got it in you.
You think I never heard that "cheesy-fries" sh*t before?
Only on every forum that I've ever been posting, like you gotta be joking.
That's the best sh*t you can come up with?
Your lack of effort is offensive, come on, try it again b*tch.Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
My Production's-outGrown-Home, your still living with your parents
But that's a better situation than these shaadowy vagrants.
You say his rhyme style is not the most pleasing,
He says you're easy cuz yo style'o rhyme's not appealing.
Believe it. I'm fly, you fall painfully shy of such heights
So kiss my *** and I will leave you with pinkeye.Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
This Cheezybacon guy still says I'm with my parents?
You so basic you ain't got the skill to speak with confidence : Straight arrogance
Ain't none of us afraid of any heights
In real life ; You'a guy who just bums ****!ing rides
Touch my mic ; Back !uck up before you can't ask why.
Kiss *** and get pinkeye? You stuck in 90's style and mine goes farther then the fuc!ing nile!
You ain't fly for **** when you rhymin' like a 9 year old white kid
Bet you a Buck40 5'9 b!tch who talk's abuncha bullsh!t so he can fit right in -
Shaadow says he's "serving high and tight", seems more like you both left high and dry.
I don't need to try, just spit sh*t off my dome to leave you stranded, hypnotized.
I'm not confined to just one style, like a pro ho who knows mo' than one way to make you smile.
All the while you desire that you 2too could run these miles and not be tired
I'm like the Great Wall of China, b*tches! F*ck the nile.
"Basic"? Says the guy forced to comment on races.
Racist! Naw, just kidding. But I am little scared your fiddling!
Talking bout "real life", "9 year old kids" and "bum rides".
Think twice before you post your wack rhymes next time.Last edited by CheesyBacon; 01-20-2012 at 03:34 AM.
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haha.
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ok, there you go.
Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -