Too much for smooth? You 2 must more prove...
Why you talk about my ***? You don't know that its rude?
tear my inner frame? ur caught up in inner-fame.
Ill eat you tho ur bitter mang, end up just a dinner stain.
My hip don't run but I'm hip son so.... fly?
You cheata! Never seen-a cheetah run by...
The only brain you eat is under the pant fly...
Damn Guy, don't hide your appetite for man Hyde.
Sbu I'm on a level you couldn't reach on ur tip toes
You hurled so the ride closed, you can catch it on pic pose
Leave after with a shirt that says I survived the disaster
Cuz I got sympathy for basterds that go faster than they can master

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Damn...ha ur wordplay is great

Thanks man. tbh I do feel on quite good form at the moment, always much rooms for improvement though.
Respect where it's due, I notice you've improved a lot. not that you were bad in the firstplace. good work ethic for sure, when I said "I admire your persistance" that's much realer than anything else I dropped in the battle bars.

Originally Posted by UnderGrown

Great lyrics, I could really feel the rhythm when I was say them to myself.

Thanks man, that's very kind of you to say so (if that includes my drops).
F*ck battlerap negativity, people are awesome.

Originally Posted by _SBU

Thanks man. tbh I do feel on quite good form at the moment, always much rooms for improvement though.
Respect where it's due, I notice you've improved a lot. not that you were bad in the firstplace. good work ethic for sure, when I said "I admire your persistance" that's much realer than anything else I dropped in the battle bars.

Oh for sure. I know battles are battles, a lot of tossing **** around. But thanks. I'm persitant cuz of you and skn honestly dawg. I battle to get better but I battle you two ta learn ****. Hah it helps

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Too much for smooth? You 2 must more prove...
Why you talk about my ***? You don't know that its rude?
tear my inner frame? ur caught up in inner-fame.
Ill eat you tho ur bitter mang, end up just a dinner stain.
My hip don't run but I'm hip son so.... fly?
You cheata! Never seen-a cheetah run by...
The only brain you eat is under the pant fly...
Damn Guy, don't hide your appetite for man Hyde.
Sbu I'm on a level you couldn't reach on ur tip toes
You hurled so the ride closed, you can catch it on pic pose
Leave after with a shirt that says I survived the disaster
Cuz I got sympathy for basterds that go faster than they can master

you're "on a level I couldn't reach on my tiptoes", an'..
..it's so low you're already kicked open.

I know those drops were "rude" but, ay..
I'd NEVER settle for a crude display. I'll bring it till you've 'rued' the day.

you're bland as the other talentless f*ckers
that brang an abundance of amateur structures,
my throwaway lines are like anthems amoung them.
so damned dark I could sanction the sun but..
sit and sell floodlights- f*ck night- my lines so bright you could read in a darkroom.
you're underdeveloped.. "pic pose"? pr*ck no.. I depict prose that's past view.

you're beefing vegan's "dinner stains"
'cos you don't spit you dribble mate.
yes I'm "sick".. you're not a 'fit' opponent. stop an' sit an' focus;
..nice guy, try to "Hyde" you've got a split-persona.

*uck SBU lol sick *hit hommie... to props...smooth nice comeback...I'll hit ya back latter...

[QU
OTE=_SBU;912784]you're "on a level I couldn't reach on my tiptoes", an'..
..it's so low you're already kicked open.

I know those drops were "rude" but, ay..
I'd NEVER settle for a crude display. I'll bring it till you've 'rued' the day.

you're bland as the other talentless f*ckers
that brang an abundance of amateur structures,
my throwaway lines are like anthems amoung them.
so damned dark I could sanction the sun but..
sit and sell floodlights- f*ck night- my lines so bright you could read in a darkroom.
you're underdeveloped.. "pic pose"? pr*ck no.. I depict prose that's past view.

you're beefing vegan's "dinner stains"
'cos you don't spit you dribble mate.
yes I'm "sick".. you're not a 'fit' opponent. stop an' sit an' focus;
..nice guy, try to "Hyde" you've got a split-persona.[/QUOTE]


hold on now, "talentless ****ers"?
"F**k battle rap negativity" (right? Ha)
You have no taste...ur palatless
I face ur hate Galantly.
Face the great faculty, take my assignments...grapple these;
Quit bein so tactical get past-the-whole ***-hole thing.
I'll hold ur anthems for ransom, they ring of random tantrums...
All I ask is handsome expansion on those rants son.
First your "dark" then your "bright"? Homie that don't seem right...
I'm right-fu-lly right-eou-sly smashing your damn flood light.
tung tied? Prolly so... your numb like alcoholic peroxide.
I'm raw hide, rock leather, flock in bad weather..
So top mine

****ed up the quote my bad.
...mine starts at "hold on now.."

Damn. I've been gone for 3 weeks and new talent already shows up ?

Originally Posted by _SBU

you're "on a level I couldn't reach on my tiptoes", an'..
..it's so low you're already kicked open.

I know those drops were "rude" but, ay..
I'd NEVER settle for a crude display. I'll bring it till you've 'rued' the day.

you're bland as the other talentless f*ckers
that brang an abundance of amateur structures,
my throwaway lines are like anthems amoung them.
so damned dark I could sanction the sun but..
sit and sell floodlights- f*ck night- my lines so bright you could read in a darkroom.
you're underdeveloped.. "pic pose"? pr*ck no.. I depict prose that's past view.

you're beefing vegan's "dinner stains"
'cos you don't spit you dribble mate.
yes I'm "sick".. you're not a 'fit' opponent. stop an' sit an' focus;
..nice guy, try to "Hyde" you've got a split-persona.

Originally Posted by smoothtung

hold on now, "talentless ****ers"?
"F**k battle rap negativity" (right? Ha)
You have no taste...ur palatless
I face ur hate Galantly.
Face the great faculty, take my assignments...grapple these;
Quit bein so tactical get past-the-whole ***-hole thing.
I'll hold ur anthems for ransom, they ring of random tantrums...
All I ask is handsome expansion on those rants son.
First your "dark" then your "bright"? Homie that don't seem right...
I'm right-fu-lly right-eou-sly smashing your damn flood light.
tung tied? Prolly so... your numb like alcoholic peroxide.
I'm raw hide, rock leather, flock in bad weather..
So top mine

My hateful raps are swagger, graceful "random tantrums",
play to capture flags an' raise ya battle standard.
you're too-weak but fought-knights, living in a fantasy realm,
My positive and "negative" potentials are like battery cells'.
I'd smack thee as well
if 'battery' 'sells'.
it's like he planned to pack metal but I already 'foil'ed him.
your "rawness hides" an you're to find I already boiled it.

But your captured...got it backwards,
Ur rap rapsured, manufacture a patch sir.
Your standards? Ha I'm faster, there's no style I can't master.
You're hateful, gastric basterd. Wouldn't accept ur scripts if I was bandmaster.
Ur a disaster I wouldn't even look at u if u were an aster.
Take your *****, ask her; "am I gettin fatter" u been served.
You got some nerve to call it "swagger", try bone fracture swerve
My weighted words cause actors to collapse and disperse.


This is just the knuckleball I don't think you want the curve. It hurts

Originally Posted by smoothtung

But your captured...got it backwards,
Ur rap rapsured, manufacture a patch sir.
Your standards? Ha I'm faster, there's no style I can't master.
You're hateful, gastric basterd. Wouldn't accept ur scripts if I was bandmaster.
Ur a disaster I wouldn't even look at u if u were an aster.
Take your *****, ask her; "am I gettin fatter" u been served.
You got some nerve to call it "swagger", try bone fracture swerve
My weighted words cause actors to collapse and disperse.

This is just the knuckleball I don't think you want the curve. It hurts

how the f*ck'd you manage it? ..you keep bringing blander "scripts".
"served"? I'll make snack from this, a punch-you-ate with "aster" risks.
" ***** "?
****.. and that's a flip.
why not pass? you can't deploy -my- talents.
I've got heart, and a cardiod mic pattern.
I'd never let a foe pen a better flow,
I'm further if the "curve" refers to exponential growth.

not exponential growth/ ex = potential yo
Mine? Substancial you know.
Catch me on y line high as it goes
Ill "pen" your "better flow" and put it on exhibit "foe"
If you "got heart" I'm St. Valentine with a passion overflow
You got skills, some thrills, but homie...hatred kills
You're so old school in that's sense I swear you sport a quill.
Tho still, I got love for ya, if I died you'd be in my will.
I'd leave a new school style and ability ta be tranquil.
Peice of love and peace and hot lines that emit steam
Maybe some green but I'm a feen, my money sense ain't keen.
But I do leave a chance to rediem what you have claimed,
To restrain from being a pain and acclaim a nicer name

"hatred"? face it, coz it's better than to seem indifferent.
this "quill" instills life like it's a pheonix pinion.
"Saint valentine" like you just love seeking martyrdom,
my massacres coulda took out Al's gang, no armaments.
too true dude you were right when you wrote "basterd" coz
..unoriginal kid think your style's so fatherless?
calling me "old school"? student's new to this.
call mine an advanced mind like I schooled the futurists.

I'm adapting to new actions, don't care bout ignominy. N'...
fashioning passionate reactants that speak of me-only-me
I'm packin majestical lyrics that'll perhaps tingle testicals
N' stackin perpetual spirit under(w)raps like mingling at festivals.
My rappin has been critiscized, obliterized, an underweighted
May-be yappin but I've showd-em-why I am now- gold-plated...
I've found traction in a new field, I'm gaining feel for the game
Skills mashin with incredible perserverance to progress mang
Find-me the day where I fall of and decay. to ur dismay...
I'm binding to my name so ya'll can say he made it his way

Originally Posted by smoothtung

I'm adapting to new actions, don't care bout ignominy. N'...
fashioning passionate reactants that speak of me-only-me
I'm packin majestical lyrics that'll perhaps tingle testicals
N' stackin perpetual spirit under(w)raps like mingling at festivals.
My rappin has been critiscized, obliterized, an underweighted
May-be yappin but I've showd-em-why I am now- gold-plated...
I've found traction in a new field, I'm gaining feel for the game
Skills mashin with incredible perserverance to progress mang
Find-me the day where I fall of and decay. to ur dismay...
I'm binding to my name so ya'll can say he made it his way

your schemes are old. re-cycled. please believe, rhymer,
you already lost "traction".. need to re-tire.
on the real.. you're "gold plated";
with tin insides, your soul's fakest.
you lose momentum.. "persevere" rapper.
I gain momentum 'per' 'severe' rapture.
thanks for the flips.. you're bland an' a b*tch, but I have to admit
you brought passionate script. but it's amateurish.
you didn't even try to Battle a bit or grab for a win.
on some oscar nominee speech steez; thought you were gonna give thanks to ya fish.

Dont try to impress. You're an oppressive mess
Im/pressed to adress...for the "best" you're underdressed.
I confess ur Scriptures painted pictures for my lingo
But-lets just say Mister you grew richer signs of van-goh.
You're conceitedly crazy and lunaticly arrogant
You're depleitingly hazy and epizooticaly aberrant.
I don't go for the win because I'm unreverantly focused,
My progression wont lesson yo if I can control it

Take that one to the bank. I'm progressin. This is jus a lesson

maybe it's true that Smooth's under-esteemed, an'..
I ain't "imp-rest", I'm a slumbering demon.
I know most folk don't like fantasy sh*t
but I go over heads on that Damocles tip.

your lazy lines are worthless goods.
I'm "hazy" like that purple kush.
you're quite nice. ish. can't rhyme like this
an' ain't seeing "Van go" like it's a driveby hit.

Ok "slumbering demon" call me done for the evening,
Its 1:17 'n I've heard enough treason.
You could go over my head like you said while I'm in bed
A-sleep-in' read what I have in store for you next