This was very helpfull....thanks karma.. I see what your saying now...
no just need to practice...lol

ahaha put it to use bruh

ok I have just edited the song. it is now ready to hear again. future edits may apply....
I have now added singing by my not so tallented voice...lol and have added some fillers in between couruses.
I also have redone the VS1 & Vs2. please tell me if it sounds better than before.


http://www.reverbnation.com/skndeep#!