Haiku

You'll make me blush now.

Love
jet whirlpool
endless

Never you mind, it doesn't show through the screen.

endless
beginningless
Beingness

hmm being again?

Beingness
My very core
is you

Mmh, I seem to 'be' a lot tonight. I'd drop the 'is', or possibly place it on the middle line... How do you start a poem with "is you"

is you
an issue
life?

...as always, the question mark can be dropped. Could make an effective first line though

Being is a very good state to be in.

Life?
eternal quest
meaning

My favourite.

meaning
you could be
mine

Exactly.

mine
-only mine-
you

you
saw into
us

us
two halves of
a whole

a whole
everything
in one

in one
folded bud
secret

Ah, that is a beauty. A true beauty.

secret
dances within
the truth

Is that my cue to leave?

The truth
obscure
Grey

By all means, do stay I suppose you're watching the Flintstones or something

grey
sensations
abound

Love
Costs
Most

Is that short enough? I forgot to turn the page . . .

Abound
Fully, nature,
Comfort me

Actually it's The Mentalist today. Slightly updating I guess. I would love to stay, but my dad tried out this farm lifestyle, converted, and now he's very persistent in trying to make everyone rise at dawn and sleep early.

abound
poppy fields
red

That's a nice 1-1-1, Frankie Short senryus are IMHO good for cryptic, multilayered messages, so maybe try to free yourself from "fitting a message" into your poem and go for the more abstract.

Night, Noor

red
comfort me
please

Please
Me well
Rain

Rain
On tin
Peace