Lyrics Review off-topic discussions

Damn!! Nuuu but I has green lolis!!! Hahaha! *jumps around n glomps robber*

Almost to 5,000 views. <3 Thank you to everyone who has given the times to read my thread , and time to learn.

*hugs homieeeeeee <3 * Yurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr WELCOME!!

Hahaha, you wierdos!! :P

Isn't it more likely that the entire rest of the universe is upside-down?

I believe that, O.o.... It's more likely to be

Help me What do you do when you're stuck, cos the one that you love, has pushed you away, and you can't deal with the pain...

:/ all I would do is- something you should never do.

Never mind, let's change the topic. So, I wrote a new song. It's called "Still Not Over You". Wait, that doesn't help! XD

I use smileys to mask the pain

Merry Christmas again!

That's the thing about being in love, you go through crazy "happy, sad, happy, sad" moments...it's fun...no it's not, it's depressing...it can be good...not really, I got no sleep last night because I was all worried...

No it doesn't help mi amigo :/ lol ^__^ me too I try to be happy and try to not make my friends worried! <3 ! Lol

Happy Halloween >;D !!

I know how you feel, chronic insomnia I'll think about him day and night I'll stay up till the morning light wondering if he might, if he thinks of me as just right...
being in love has some cons :/ I know exactly what you mean


Hm... Actually- I've had a love- but not like that. He wasn't a boyfriend, he wasn't a friend nether... He was more than that and I spent my whole life with him. He pushed me away a while ago.... Forgot about me and moved on with his life, but I still love him more than anything. I cry for him sometimes, he doesn't know I've written songs about him.

"I'd like to spend some more time,
Staring into your eyes.
To think I've spent my whole life around you.
To think of our little lies.
I'd like to spend some more time.
Saying I Love You.
Cuz who know tomorrow you just might go.
Who ever knew?"

I can't get over him.

Originally Posted by Katie13

But everyone's ignored Frankie!!! I apologise There are only three things you need to know:
1) We write lyrics.
2) We critique lyrics.
3) We're terminally insane. Take Shadow here for example... but, as they say "You're raving mad - but all the best people are" (I love that film!!)

Katie, thank you for remembering. It's not always easy to answer individual questions when the dialog is moving along so fast--pages at a time! I appreciate your response:

1) Write lyrics--Well, I do poetry. I guess if the poetry is lyrical enough it might count . . . Check.
2) Critique lyrics--Do members prefer encouragement? Or do you all like constructive criticism? (Kind of hard to take, though, I think.) Can do. . . . Check!
3) Terminally insane--Definitely! . . . . Check! CHECK!!

Do I qualify??!

Originally Posted by MoonRide42

Welcome Frankie! Don't believe anything you read or hear about me. Well yeah the good stuff, thats ok.

OK--just the good stuff!

Originally Posted by RobberBaron

Help me What do you do when you're stuck, cos the one that you love, has pushed you away, and you can't deal with the pain...

Dear RobberBaron, your words already sound like the opening lyrics (or the refrain) of a song. That's what you can do--write a song!! This might relieve your feelings (poetry does for me).

Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine

1) Write lyrics--Well, I do poetry. I guess if the poetry is lyrical enough it might count . . . Check.
2) Critique lyrics--Do members prefer encouragement? Or do you all like constructive criticism? (Kind of hard to take, though, I think.) Can do. . . . Check!
3) Terminally insane--Definitely! . . . . Check! CHECK!!

Do I qualify??!

Why yes you do *shakes frankie's hand* welcome to the Lyrics Review Forum glad your here! *dodges flying tea cup* you'll love it everyone's nice.

Moon is our wolfie here, he's very sweet and kind. You'll love to have him around he's a true friend, also MY big brother

Katie is our very kind and our awesome lyricist. You'll love to get to know her, she's the third girl here

Robber of course is our random little fellow that loves ninja carrots he's totally awesome.

Homie is our rapper and he's very sweet and kind.

Razor is my alter ego, watch out she likes throwing tea cups so watch the back of your head O.o...

Me of course, I am the second girl. *sets my top hat on* I'm just a random lyricist and clinically insane in my own world. I believe I'm the youngest, but that's just me idunno

Well that's just the few fellows that are most active on here. I can tell you so much about our crazy little family of insanes, but I think it'll be very fun finding out yourselves. welcome to our family and our world! Can't wait to see your work, hm?

Shadow, I think you just described everyone perfectly!! Frankie, welcome to the madhouse

Oh, and by the way...

Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine

Dear RobberBaron, your words already sound like the opening lyrics (or the refrain) of a song. That's what you can do--write a song!! This might relieve your feelings (poetry does for me).

Hate to buurst the bubble but they already are... Pixie Lott, isn't it?

I know, I know, I know, it's "Broken Arrow" by Pixie Lott!! Damn that took me a while Had to sing through the entire song!!!

Originally Posted by RobberBaron

What do you do when you're stuck, cos the one that you love, has pushed you away, and you can't deal with the pain...

And now you're trying to fix me, and what he did, and find the piece that I'm missing, but I still miss him, I miss him, I miss him...

It'll be okay, Robber

(I removed this k?)

By the way, I wrote a song with mild sex references; the song isn't about sex, but I just wanted to check I was allowed to post it. Any words that could be offensive are partially starred out. So yeah, am I allowed to post it? I don't want to get my account deleted.

Originally Posted by RobberBaron

Help me What do you do when you're stuck, cos the one that you love, has pushed you away, and you can't deal with the pain...

RB I feel this for you/with you more than I can say, and isn't it terrible when (maybe) two people can love each other more than life but there is pain or even some hate there too, but you still love ... each other? ... so much that it just hurts beyond imagination ... "It's funny how someone can break your heart but you still love them with all of the little pieces" ... is there a song in that? Yes I'm sure there is

But now I want to bury this comment in the clutter because sometimes it's not fair to keep bringing up old stuff and someone may see this, but just wanted to say this to you coz sometimes it just helps to know we're not alone? In this thing called "life" ... So moving right along now ...

Last night I came down with a head cold and felt really miserable, so I wasn't here, I was suffering in misery aaaall alone lol, but I still love all my sweet buds, and Shadoowww my precious-precocious-adorable lil sis I missed you!

Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine

2) Critique lyrics--Do members prefer encouragement? Or do you all like constructive criticism? (Kind of hard to take, though, I think.) Can do. . . . Check!

Just a simple reply on this, YES on both, encouragement for writers who seem to have talent or potential? and also genuine critique or maybe some specific help sometimes on making something better, improving mechanics, whatever.

Welcome to the Funny Farm!! ...... "They're coming to take me away, haha!!"

Originally Posted by ShadowLeeSharp

Moon is our wolfie here, he's very sweet and kind. You'll love to have him around he's a true friend, also MY big brother

Yes YOUR big brother but I also know I have to share coz after all u'r the baby of ALL ATL and we all wanna take care of you as our precious lil sis, don't we people?

Originally Posted by ShadowLeeSharp

Me of course, I am the second girl. *sets my top hat on* I'm just a random lyricist and clinically insane in my own world. I believe I'm the youngest, but that's just me idunno

Well we're all random and some of the rest of us are clinically insane too, and loving it!! and it's hard to say if u'r the youngest or not, but that's just a tiny detail that doesn't really matter. Except how it does matter ... AND I also have another little sister here (you know her Shadow) and I've been missing her lately too, and I worry :-/ ...

Well today I'm a tomato and a very ripe one, so pleeeease don't anybody squush me lol