Haiku

You're doing extremely well.

beyond thought
I ascend in the
timeless now

Moi? Et toi

timeless now
moves relentlessly
unfettered

(Unfortunately I need to take frequent breaks, coz of my relentlessly aching head )

Indeedst (BTW, 'moi' happens to mean 'hello' in Finnish )

unfettered
man races into
the abyss

Be better soon!

Moi then Nice M - and you're welcome.

The abyss
deep gaping black hole
swallows you

swallows, you
race from heart to heart
may I join?

(As always, punctuation can be changed, as I did.)

May I join
the clique you form? Be
popular?

popular
I may not be - but
yours I am

I kept trying to make it less innuendo sounding but it didnt work. Sorry guys.

Yours I am
do as you please
Take me all

Sounds very un-muslim to me :-/ Mine is the Mother Earth talking, before you lot get any funny ideas.

take me, all
rape what's left of me,
your Mother

Really? Should I censor it? It sounded pure in my mind.

your Mother

lol is that an insult or what?

Your mother
welcoming warmth, me?
rejection

Pure is as pure thinks. I trust you. Insult? It's Mother Earth giving up, letting humans have their way. I added a comma that may help.

rejection -
low clouds fill my sky
cold winds blow

Oh I like that!

Cold winds blow
hit easterly shores
no refuge

This thread is terribly distracting. I am trying to work on a masterpiece here, how about some peace of mind?

no refuge
cliffs surround my bay
no escape

Your wish is my command!

How's that for a poem. Actually, I think this is, instead, stimulating rather than suffocating, so bring 'em on. I'm stuck with Plato at the moment.

I'd hate to be the reason I cause you a writers block

No escape
memories pounding
relentless

Mmh... It's more trouble finding a form that fits the content. I'm looking for inspiration, I'll find something no doubt. I do feel this could be good, good enough so I won't publish it.

relentless
dance pulls me along
swirling tide

Hope you crack it - can I have a dedication?

Swirling tide
rising wave of peace
suffocate

Dont even ask

I doubt you'd want it.

suffocate
me with your silence
share me