Haiku

Originally Posted by amaryn

PS: This is a 5-8-5 folks, I hope it's alright with you

No it's not. Not alright at all

A lady's waiting
her call to empowerment
alights free

Alwrong, then

alights, free
from all his burdens
the dead man

referring to Viva:


again
a heartbeat
reborn

Originally Posted by amaryn

Doug,lol I nearly get worried about you - happen to remember this is a game, though a serious one


somebody help me
he ain't heavy ,he's my brother
BOTTLE OF COOL GIN




PS: This is a 5-8-5 folks, I hope it's alright with you

I'm serious!!

the dead man
revival of a smile
raindrop sound

Raindrop sound
Keeps playing drums on my roof
God's drum solo

God's drum solo
Hearts beat in rhythm
Giving life

Giving Life
A year's subscription costs eight dollars
Wonderful present

wonderful present
roses of my past in her hair
a scent of my future

a scent of my future
spring lurking round the corner
abandon waiting

abandon waiting
bliss biting her fingernails
all they need is you

All they need is you
Reviving true memories
Remembrance

Remembrance
Is the thing I want to do
I'd rather forget

I'd rather forget
emptiness staring at me
from behind a curtain

From behind a curtain
Voice, "I'm not a very bad man
"I am a bad wizard"

I am a bad wizard
Only in the eye of the
Beholder

Re:casting,I need courage to meet girls,but a dentist is always a Lion's first need.The better to chomp with.Roar!!!!!

I dont know what a Haiku/Senryu is anymore

Originally Posted by VivaPalestina

I dont know what a Haiku/Senryu is anymore

Wasn't it a Japanese tea ceremony, Viva?

Originally Posted by VivaPalestina

I dont know what a Haiku/Senryu is anymore

We're straying far indeed.

beholder
clouds do have different shapes
all the time