Haiku

Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine

On the street
And elsewhere fly footsteps
Scampering leaves

Very Clever,you old Wizard,you!

Scampering leaves
Blowing over the landscapes
Of my mind

the landscapes
of my mind are dense
damp jungle

what's happening here?

Slowly
hope restored
open

It's OK, Noor. The next person can pick up with "damp jungle," which, afterall, isn't a bad line to use!

Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine

It's OK, Noor. The next person can pick up with "damp jungle," which, afterall, isn't a bad line to use!

@Noor: "of my mind " is a genitiv and is a entity with "the landscapes of ....."
I thought it over a long time, but found this solution- though unquestionably "off the road" whilst also remembering I want to remain within the field of nature/plants.
This was the result.

@Frankie: "damp jungle" ?- may it be so!

Oooh I see amaryn took more than just the last line. Smart. I'm sorry I currently have no brain cells left. I guess that means another signature change. Any recommendations Ola?

How 'bout "Brain cell shortage, back in action after graduation"?

Originally Posted by OrchestraInside

How 'bout "Brain cell shortage, back in action after graduation"?

I like. Not sure if graduation will ever come around.

All the better

I
lost
dove
falls


II
dusk.
sighing
waves


III
lone
sparrow
cries

Poor Noor!

Damp jungle
Slithering things
Fungi

fungi
wrapped around the trunk
refuge

mom
look!
no brains!

dad
see!
I knew!

Refuge
Away from man
Safe

Safe
Haven calls
Where?

where?
show me
lost

Lost
multitude
thoughts

Drip, drip


from wet branches
one by one
winter days fall