Originally Posted by
_SBU
we used to chat and send each other tracks that we were working on..
verses swapped.. exchanging the feedback, training to reach that perfect drop.
I kept striving, finding polite ways to tell him this his wording's wrong..
and every time I raised my game the heavy envy hurt him lots.
my text's fresh, dont get vexed though..
I don't expose friends 'cept when ex friends pose..
I taught him lessons that improved Smoothtung.
he taught me a lesson that made me lose trust.
he bit my property, proper quality lines.. and apologised.
I let it slide though truely he deserved to be ostracized.
we're all good now but I mention it in texts for fun.
plus.. set to never ever let the kid forget it once.
this is just a conversation in rhyme form,
you think that we're down now, can never be quite sure.
ay.. this is all only peace Smooth..
it's only a little 'peace' ..it's a preview.
the type of rhymes you type are trite and quite commonplace.
whether bringing vicious lyrical skills or poetic flows I still dominate.
you're blinded by my shine yet you're drawn towards. a moth to flame.
I'm more than you can contemplate, you're more than I can tolerate.
you keep on coming with the same faded imagery like a poor man's porn stash.
you're not all that, you're all trash.. Hip'Hop'; 'Hipocrisy's Hopeless' in shorthand.
I'm worth two 2pacs.. you're worth a four pac of "coors cans".
you said ..a whole load of other utter rubbish. I ignored that.
your style's layed out like I've got your flaw-plan..
you're structures are ruptured; no safe place to fall back.
you're not hot. what.? "perspired" like a fire hydrant.
this is over top with "strong drops" like pile drivers.
he claims to take my lines as advice.. style biter.
since he thinks his mind's enlightened, his entire life's denial.
microtized an' thinking it's giant sized. why the guise?
try to rise from depriving sites, like tired eyes.
why try advancing your path more? you're harming the artform.
my shine's self empowered, my heart is a star core.
I'm sonning him, it's truely solar..
might die high like supernovas.
seems I'm needing new opponents.. seems he needs a new persona..
shrewd, change your name again like last time you eschewed exposure.
I've gone beyond common lyrics, it's monolithic. I threw 'Shaadow' like a huge lamp post.
you follow me about but you're not close fam though. damn bro, I banned those bland flows.
my "poetry" opens your closed mind. you know mine, it's no lie.
texts of yours are metaphors for 'nevermore' ..a 'Poe'try'.
you 'rave-n' rant. save the act, display the facts and make a rap.
you've 'lost the plot' like wondering whilst wandering with rake an' map.
I fly high like drake an' flag..
he's high, hee'l take flake an' drag.
cut the chat, just a fan so hit a 'break an' 'brap':
coz I'll cut this little piggie's 'r's an make a 'bacon' 'bap'.
your drop lacked flow ..like I gave a dam.
I mean you'll be leaving when I say 'you'll be making tracks'.
I'd list his sins but this place aint got the space for that.
his vocab is so tragic that there aint a name for that.
coz' you've got long words but contexts waste 'em.. 'ostentatious'?
if your short drops are quality not quantity make contents greater.
peace bruv'. come back at that yeah?