unaware
of their dangerous depth
he looks into her eyes
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He looks into her eyes
glittering onyx
treacherous fall
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treacherous fall,
when the flame goes out
I welcome you
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I welcome you
into the black abyss
of restless thoughts
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restless thoughts
settle
in the silence we share
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In the silence we share
invisible words are woven;
timeless webs of gold
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timeless webs of gold
strewn across
the skies above
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oppaaaa
The skies above
hide in velvet lapis cloak
whispered secrets
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whispered secrets
fly
from heart to heart
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From heart to heart
shot blindly
cupid's arrow
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Forces hearts apart
cracked shards of peace
listless wait -
listless wait
until the clouds part
revealing you
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Awwww, Viv, I will play with you. I just arrived home . . . But OI will be so sorry he missed you. I think he's had VivaP Withdrawals lately! I am glad to see you too!
Unaware
Hearts leap in breasts:
Butterflies
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Originally Posted by OrchestraInside
he looks into her eyes
in them, a gleam of cruelness
she's hunting on sunsetEven after all this time
The Sun never says to the Earth
« You owe me »
Look what happens with a love like that
It lights the whole sky
-حافظ -
she's hunting on sunset
a tigress looking for easy prey
won't lie down soon -
LOL what happened here?
He didnt miss me - I had to leave early as my head grew too heavy. I think he suffered from them too Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine
but his poems have flourished too. I shall take all the credit of course.
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Noor, I don't know! I was in-and-out of ATL so fast--I must have missed an entire page of posts! Oh, well! At least you know I was glad to see you . . . Originally Posted by VivaPalestina
LOL what happened here?
He didnt miss me - I had to leave early as my head grew too heavy. I think he suffered from them too but his poems have flourished too. I shall take all the credit of course.
And you can see how much OI missed you by the REAL outcome--your rapid-fire haiku(s)!!!
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That would explain your post - but I still wonder at what the others were thinking. I guess everyones page loaded to a certain post. Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine
Noor, I don't know! I was in-and-out of ATL so fast--I must have missed an entire page of posts! Oh, well! At least you know I was glad to see you . . .
And you can see how much OI missed you by the REAL outcome--your rapid-fire haiku(s)!!!
Haha I missed this thread too. So I'm going to be a pain and remind everyone that we're meant to be capturing images - typically of nature. How else am I meant to improve?
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No, it wasn't like that. I read OrchestraInside's haiku and it stayed in my mind while I was out, and inspired me this next haiku, like an afterthought. But when I came back there was a few (!) more haiku(s) on the thread... Originally Posted by VivaPalestina
sorry for this time rupture. ^^
Even after all this time
The Sun never says to the Earth
« You owe me »
Look what happens with a love like that
It lights the whole sky
-حافظ
