_sbu,
man, you are terrible, so I tear you to pieces
and tear a gate forcefully, then cruise a fixed like Jesus
you only leave "foes pounded" when there's "animal control"
you'd "pound foes/fours" only if they were wearing a blindfold
No "violence/violins"? Don't have to be ánàl/"piano"
Rap's not your "forte", but you can still "take notes"
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checked the forum, saw Pro posted, read it and thought "dam that was really good." Scrolled down and saw _S rebuttaled him, read it and thought "today was a perfect day".
@Tania, closing this forum would be a shame. Some of the lines that people like _S and others wrote are ridiculous masterpieces.
Word to "Backing Pigs" lol -
Man, you don't spit fire, you can't even make a spark
Originally Posted by 4lpha
Every simple line of rhyme I can easily take apart
Please stop tryin' and go home, for the sake of art
You couldn't take a minnow so what makes ya think you could take a shark?
You'll get devoured like a buffet bein' attacked by fat people
And I swear you must be mentally handicapped if ya think your rap's equal
So don't come back with a wack sequal
Coz you rap feeble
Like a toddler learning to speak
I believe in God but here there will be no turning the cheek
Go away and come back when you learn to compete
Coz I burn vermin so weak
And turn 'em over my knee, spank 'em like kids that need discipline
They talk with their goo goo gah gah raps but nobody be listenin'
And everybody will keep dissin' 'em
The marks aren't too high, but you'll keep missin' 'em -
Think I was trying man you must be joking
How long it take you to write that rap u must have been chokin
Stop trying man you will end up croaking
Your nothing but fake
I'm returning like Jason crawling out of a lake
N1gga your name is backinblack
My rhymes are about to attack
**** that gun like click-clack
Thinking your great ha your very stupid
Ain't got no girl in your life boi you need Cupid
Oh wait never mind your gay
Showing up at your friends house with a bouquet
Man I am great
While your rhymes I desecrate
Now I am just about finished
But your career is now diminished -
I KNOW fool that YOU WAS tryin' but ya raps just suck Originally Posted by 4lpha
N1gga you'd be lyin' if you said your rhymes weren't wack as fukk
And the only chokin' I do is chokin' on you so ya best just pack it up
And get the fukk outta here n1gga, cuz I've had enough
You aint bad or tough and ya vocabulary is severely lackin'
Your rhymes are kid like, everybody can hear me laughin'
Coz ya for sure caint spit right and I didn't know that kweers be rappin'
But here you are, thinkin' that you're hard or maybe ya just wanna be near the action
So you can derive some decent ego from ya secret hero vicariously
It's hilarous see, so everybody watch as I bury this creep
Who's measily defeat will be orchestrated too easily in my sleep to be declaring it's beef
Coz he's just there and he's weak
And I oughtta bust him square in his teeth for darin' to speak like he's on the same level as me
N1gga when I speak and bring heat to the street even the devil will flee
I graduated from the School of Hard Knocks, I got the rebel degree
So you can eat some hard cox if ya think you're better than me, coz n1gga you's just a speck of debrisLast edited by BackInBlack; 07-31-2015 at 02:04 PM. Reason: Because I'm a perfectionist.
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Aight yo
Coz ain't a word n1gga get your facts straight
Stop rapping dude you nothin but wack mate
Your a poet your not a rapper
Making these rhymes while you sittin on the crapper
What's that crap on your head looks like a Toupee
I get what you get in 10 weeks in 2 days
Dude your probably graduated outta Harvard
With your awful rhymes I am just harder
I'm done with this **** I'm takin this no more
Bout to slap this wh*re back to 1974
I'm lyrically certified
To go hurt-uh-guy
Threw the method of rap
My fire rhymes are what cause the Kinetic Theory Of Heat
While on the other hand you just got beat
This battle will never be over
But I'm feeling the luck like a four leaf clover
That the people in this f*ckin forum are sober
Claimin I'm a speck of debris nah im a boulder
After this battle I be slinging your dead body over my shoulder
Stop rapping cuz your awful
I could beat your white *** with a stick people would say it's lawful
Jackin off to pictures of Bruce Jenner
While your moms a f*cking heffer
You must be crazy like Hitler when he killed all those Jews
If you think you can step in my shoes
and be the man I am
Lookie how can this d!ck be a p*ssy!
He ain't nothin but a wussyLast edited by 4lpha; 08-01-2015 at 07:59 AM.
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Yo 4lpha
You're lyrics are a pollution
Not biting others is the solution
Don't think you're at all a rapper that's lyrical
Coz you're about to get whipped like Miracle
You bite lines and just change it a bit
Speck of debris? Nope, just a piece of sh1t
You only hurt a guy when you're sucking his d1ck
Then you just bite it hard like the way you spit
I don't tolerate line thieves bro read between the line
Even if your rhymes got taxed it won't be considered fined
You're in the back of the bathroom jacking off to wack dudes
In 2 days you're still only #2 coz your raps poo
Call black awful but your content is just disgraceful
Wipes white cream on his face to make it a facial
And you ain't living the life, you just listen to music
Mothafukka I have a brain it ain't hard to use it
Pose as a gangsta more and it'll get you killed
Your mom and pops working hard to make a shield
To hide you from that life but you're like "it chose me"
N1gga, no it didn't you just copying those G's
I'll end his mythic tail like Harry Potter and the Deathly Hollows
With hollow points, his four leaf clover is a half-scratched lotto -
Beefy
What is all this beefin' about/I'm doing research on battle rappin' and you dudes stood out/I'm thinkin' "this is just what I've been waiting for, like-minds to challenge me so I can hone my dope metaphors/Been writing since grade school/Around the same time James turned cool/Since the days of Scott Larock/Before yo mama was on crack rock/I'm kinda like one of your female siblings/Wondering why you on here talkin' 'bout tits and cum drippings/Remindin' me of marginally passable diss tracks of late/You know who I'm talkin' 'bout/Those cats Meek Mill and Drake?
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I got my facts straight Originally Posted by 4lpha
Why don't YOU get ya raps straight?
A few decent lines but overall they lack weight
But I'm sure in your mind they are just that great
And they would be, half way, if you were a third grader
So be quiet young alpha and I'll teach you a new word later
For now be a good student and go and work on your term paper
What will it take for you to learn hater?
For fux sake ya tried to rhyme Jenner with Heffer
Come back when ya get clever, you gotta enter with better
If not we'll get the tar ready, put you in the center with feathers
And send ya into the never
You use some of the lamest words in ya raps
See I listen to rap and so I'm not really into that
Either way I don't give a fuk coz this is just the internet
And I know fo sho that in the booth I'd fuk you up like an Endocet -
i be smoking 40 G's all in blunt i broke you so let your mama hold you, support you. you wont heal cause i scared you, that monk you taped in your trunk fooled you u just thought he wouldn't sneak out think again cause he out smarted you **** Originally Posted by David Michael Collier
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I guess I was wrong about the challenge part
These comebacks stink like cabbage farts
Use the head on your shoulders not the one packed into your saggin jeans
Read a freakin book or something, nah mean?
We rule the world and you know it
When it comes to verbal confrontations we always win, just admit it
"You don't know me" like Black Rob
I win this round hands down
Don't quit your day job
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Oh my gosh you can't be seriously telling me that you thought you were rapping Originally Posted by m_e_nash
I guess I was wrong about the challenge part
These comebacks stink like cabbage farts
Use the head on your shoulders not the one packed into your saggin jeans
Read a freakin book or something, nah mean?
We rule the world and you know it
When it comes to verbal confrontations we always win, just admit it
"You don't know me" like Black Rob
I win this round hands down
Don't quit your day job
You're bare talking sh1t like your mouth is constantly crapping
You got no girls so you're always fapping
But your belief that you'll pull is nothing but sappy
You know the saggy jeans you wanted to wear
It ain't fair
As a pair
You put them on but always leave a tear
I can't explain
But you'll never obtain
This understanding until you hear my name
And then you realise that I ain't tame
But I'll kill you straight of the track, spit fire and light you with a flame -
Originally Posted by m_e_nash
Forget about "Meek Mill and Drake"..
Your lines like they from Keats' quill or Blake's.
No I honestly hoped you'd go deeper..
Tried to end 4lpha but I thought 'oh..meagre'.
You've been "writing since" when? I was never afraid;
rocked the first mic Edison made, wrote since the first dirt was pressured to slate.
"Scott LaRock"? Take his name change and reverse it;
"Dope metaphors" so go swap the rock for sterling.
"Female siblings" ghostwrite your written tracks;
Please, I mean, you need help to assist-a rap.
I skipped the crap, it's fitting that you said the texts are "passable".
I flip texts I ain't even read, it's remarkable.
M E Nash..
Bet he loses every clash..
If you're ready catch the rhythm, and if M E Nash makes any rash decisions it's his epitaph's addition.
Tried to diss "diss tracks".. it's a very bad position..
Try to diss diss tracks and hope that it distrac's.
Just cut the bull'; I'm the Mithras of syntax. -
I'm back for battle raps to end a fight started
Comin in strong, you only half-hearted
Heartless, not even dearly departed
You write whack raps go back to startin
Done with amateurs here for pros
let go of your vow your words done broke
abolished into air, exorcised the spirit
Layin good tracks but your ears wont hear it
Fear it, because my instinct is killer
it's iller, bad like Jackson lookin in the mirror
Lines on the song what you havin for dinner?
Wanted an apology but I'm born a sinner
Winner, take a step back n wait
cant get up if there's no steps to take
Hesitate not when you begin to break
You're done with verbage, vermin on stakes.Last edited by Tyler6270; 08-17-2015 at 02:50 PM.
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Template.... I haven't been on in a while but challenge accepted
I read some pretty good barz from you guys and thought... "Y'all are pretty dope"
But yea, I'm back,
I returned smarter than a fifth grader,
Punk you in big danger,
Lightsaber,
Darkvader,
No lifesaver,
Hand around your throat,
Body hanging over a cliffhanger,
Y'all know I'm never nice, I'm built to kill.
I'm with the sh|t,
I started off sweet with you but who gives a sh|t,
I'll pop your b|tch *** for nothing,
I'm a hypocrite,
Walking thru your crib....
Automatic Shotgun with the extended clip,
T won't know I'm coming until the bullet hit.
Me and you we are much alike,
Only difference is if you cross the line imma split your sh|t,
You ready for this?
Cause when I start a war I plan to end it,
Me vs you... The only way to end this,
Not me vs your gvng (kik reference),
F\/ck it,
I'll bury you and those n|ggaz,
Got your fam crying,
Mourning stage,
Meet your moms at the club.....
Wait till she gets a lil tipsy......
Slip a lil sumn in her drink......
Wait for her to sip it....
She passes out,
I bring her home and start wilding in it,
Leave a note on the fridge that says....
"Cosby did it".
Y'all think he tough?
Well I'm not buying it,
I'm the best no denying it,
This shotgun will 'get on up' and knock the soul out him,
Gun so big it'll clean the streets....
Swifter mop,
Tec pointed at your top lip,
That's when all taking stops,
All mouth shots just cause you talk a lot,
Bullets all in your cranium like they finding a hiding spot,
Drag your body thru the parking lot,
Witnesses? No worries,
I got more clippers than a barber shop,
Slap to the face.....
Guaranteed he's dropping,
Palm at the side of his face like he eaves dropping.
Get your **** in order,
You can get stomped from 200 feets....
Restraining order.
F\/ck template,
I'll off that bastard,
Battling rapping + you= a mismate,
Art of killing I mastered,
He a n|gga that takes risk,
Killing him won't be easy,
But you called me out that's where your shine began and ceased kid,
He likes the rush?
But this ain't skydiving,
No one has ever survived this,
As soon as he takes off a pair-a-shoot (parachute)....
Assisted suicide.
What kinda death do you want?
Lets set scene,
Tecs squeeze,
It's not cyber bullying when I let them tecs-in (texting),
You the best?
-scrolls thru forum-
Where T?
You were anticipating my response...
Now what!?!?
Gonna devour me from inside out?
Flip my **** to make me freak out?
Not possible!
Imma make sure you die logically,
Fast and proper,
Bring out the chopper,
Ride up on T,
He's shocked when he sees me,
He's like "let peace be",
Please B,
No escaping this so in pieces I leave T,
You got burned fast,
As long as it's on me.... I'm reaching and stretching sh|t like Kenny's bars,
I came back with body bags for everyone,
But don't jump in that b|tch yet...
It has only just began,
Y'all wanna see a Template vs _SBU pt 2?
Neither do I,
Cause now that I'm done with T....
I'm killing_SBU too.
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Pardon any grammatical errors I posted this off my phone.
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reply to CrazyKydz
Well you wont come back when im through with you
Guess what I am even F’ing new
You smarter than a 5th grader and think you are darthvader?
Bet you cant cut paper even with a light saber.
Now I graduated singing the abc’s
Now im playing with them double D’s
Got *****es dropping to their knees
And all they do is please when they
Spredin and saying ohhh “thunk”
Because when I whip it out
They all pass out
Back to you CrazyKydz
The only crib you be walkin through
Is one with jizz
That’s right all over da walls
From me and your mizz
She could barely handle the burst from my balls
*****es don’t know when you are coming
But the whole f’in block knows
As soon as they see me they come a running,
You think me and you are much alike
But that’s like saying your white and im Mike
But you got 1 thing right
This is me vs. you
But it’s hardly a fight
You betta go run while your *** is still tight -
Got ya girl bent over nice and easy like I had your mom she was nice and sleazy/ She wasn't tight, but I had her all night so it was alright/ her a** was fat so I gave her the bat on the mat, in the back of the trap then she hopped on my lap for another fap then I hit it from the back clack clack, goes the sound of my sack on ya moms cl*t, but I got to admit she how to work a d*ck she roared, "oh lord!", cause I dive in that p*ssy as if off a diving board/ Now The Lord is in this sh*t, faith restored.
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You don't know me. You don't have to **** with me. I'm a mother******* girl, do you wanna get together maybe we, could be someone together. Just remembered I don't date *****, I'm as light as a feather. Your I'm taken by your dad, he's a gem. He invited me in. Don't worry I'll get the money off him tomorrow, who knew prostitues are actually men?
{DISCLAIMER: I know it's bad. It's my first time writing a rap. Btw it's not a lie, I am a girl and yeah}
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(The Lord)
SOOO! Do you got anything better on your mind then b*tches? Cuase your so desperate that you fap to girls you know you could never get so you act like snitches cuase you can't get over the fact that you can't produce nothin' more that sweat. Your all prob nerds I bet, in your own heads "Star Wars" flying f*ckin Jets! Sittin' in your room playing WOW with a box of Chex. Come on I'll beat you t'ill you bleed then break your necks. I got more muscles than in my arm that i can flex. Ow you wanna go to? HAHA you're next. I'd rather voice this to see you're face than text. You can't bring "Faith" i'll knock you and hang your corpse in my room like a wraith. I rap for a livin' you know, you don't belong here where else are you gonna go? Cause making your self look like a noob with rap is just simply puttin' on a show. Looking like a dumb*ss is just low. What else you gotta say i can do this all day. Let's go it's time to Play! -
(Kelsey)
Just practice girl, once you do that you'll turn noobs through a swirl. It dont matter if you're a girl. Drown them in the Nile, don't worry getting in the swing will take less than a while. be the judge and put them through a trial. Lock them up and forget the code on the dial.anybody can choke rather you're rich or broke. Put thier *ss on a tree "Oak".
