Haiku

Your world -
mine
to explore

To explore
curious noses
peek out

peek out
from the confines of
your dreams

Your dreams
Swift current of emotions
Don't drown

Perhaps this wasn't a popular line ("don't drown"). Will try for a better ending . . .

Don't drown
In the sea of humankind
Come alive!

I think Ola left Frankie

Ola? OI? . . . for good? Or just from this thread?

Looks like for good...

the waves recede,
the sand ready
for another's footprints.

another's footprints
reshaped sand
boredom made impossible

Maybe he just likes proving me wrong Frankie

Originally Posted by VivaPalestina

Maybe he just likes proving me wrong Frankie

of my weaknesses
this
is but one among a thousand

one among a thousand
tiny flowers
impressive entity

Impressive Entity:
Who Was, Is, Will Ever Be,
The One.

The One
Creator of mysteries
eternal puzzle

Eternal puzzle
Harvest, work, soldier, feed, and build:
Busy ants and Queen.

Queen of emotions
pastel coloured
a world reshaped

Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine

Eternal puzzle
Harvest, work, soldier, feed, and build:
Busy ants and Queen.

@Frankie: I love it, its rhythm fits perfectly its sense so the rendering is powerful

Originally Posted by Enoo

@Frankie: I love it, its rhythm fits perfectly its sense so the rendering is powerful

Enoo, thank you so much; your comment means a lot to me.

A world reshaped.
Long wood box in the earth.
A world, no You.