you're new-to-the-format.. but "rumour-of-war"-fam..
I'll trample that 'post' as if you-were-a-doormat.
I've got that "real rap" down to a fine art,
mad scientific, plotting "points" like a linegraph.
I'm about "crossing boundaries" like imports of good weed,
and messing with 'Borders' like I were a book thief.
you're lines are straight up, I'll be leaving them sideways.
"shells'll turn back" like the sea when the tides change.
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Lemme take a moment to address your statement like a secret agent.
You wrap up bodies, I bring down armies, the only way you can get past me is raising zombies.
I can feel the weakness in your bones and its sheepish. I'm laughing right now and I'm asking how.
How do you come up with this weak lyrical analysis, it's back boneless. One warning, be cautious of my darkness
because if you cross this you're gonna be houseless. -
you're still bringing student scripts.. it seems you need some tutelage..
who needs a "rumour of war" when there's proof of it?
it's matter-of-fact ish..
all your writing's collateral damage,
like your Wars are backwards..
I drop raW as standard.
"rumour of war"? wise up.
you aint frontline, your lines front. -
Magic fake just like the show you put on
Listen up so I can show you how its done
Brief show of you waving your tongue
Nothing to say not even good puns
My mind is my weapon and its mass destruction
Coming at you from every single direction
Taking you out one rap at a time, simple subtraction
Live hollowtips already done shot
Come in here acting like you up and hot
Done started aint no way to stop
Comin at you with the game, on top
Your skill compared to mine, only a fraction
only good thing you had was your ******* contraction.
Smoothtung:
No need to train when I run the game
Insane illusion of what your sayin
Lies devised and saliva sprayin
Mind confused diluted and bruised
Seems like what you sayin is overused
Tested positive with that HIV
Wrappin up bodies because that HPV
Spreadin disease with rhymes that appease
When you speak sounds like some weak *** sneeze
Destruction of yourself is what everyone sees
When dirt comes clean, you just a tease.
Also, Happy Thanksgiving guys. -
The rumor of war is my cousin, he died on the front lines you tell me how that's frontin.
You insult my name, but what is SBU? That's a name for a hater, homie get a clue.
I have mad respect for your rap and your flow, but I'm about to deal the deathblow.
This is the final stand of my rhyme and dude, this **** ain't even planned, homie you about to get screwd.
We all know that you started this grandstand, but dude, I'm taking command, so you might wanna put on your sweat band.
I spread my reputation like a virus, and this **** will NEVER be careless I'm gonna show up on your radar like a nuclear terrace,
I'm in your face like a mother ****in axis, you wanna get at this?
My freestyles can go on for miles and miles and I'm makin sure that it burns like Michael Jackson's hairsyles.
I just rocked this thread, and you should've dread that I'd be here one day to show you your place among the universe, the big space.
Now It's time to go eat some turkey, I'll catch you later homey, don't wait up because you might get antsy -
You "bring down armies"? Hardly.
Can't dis arm-me ..
Embark... or depart from.
'Dawg' you fit the "dark" part hardly.
You show no 'bite'..
but 'bark' boasts wholeheartedly.
Alarmingly,
This Part of me will rip your heart hardily.
Honestly... I have undrawn cards to be seen.
Bruv.... We've only just seen the start of me.Last edited by smoothtung; 11-25-2011 at 12:07 PM.
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looks like your trying to beat everyone thats online,
f*ck it man you can beat them and that would be fine,
but i got more skill than all of em combined,
you cant see the truth of a baligamist mind,
caught in the middle and your strugglin to find,
the words that you will try to beat me with you fallin behind,
yo 'Bruv' i got a question,
why is it that when you seen you baby daughter you got an erection?
correction, she was my daughter, your girl got pregnant when i gave her a physical inspection.
(ello ello folks nice to see another site where battle go on so i can improve my skills.) -
Bruv,
That was on some playin sh*t...
Phase ya?
I forsaken lyracist fakers...
Is it tough to convey fake sh*t?
Half - hearted , numb - whit.
'Thumb bit' - n' - stumbling over it...
You're delerious.. n' I'm 80's 'lakers' .
ish...
I'll take ya to the brink of "f*ck this".
Defeat is your savior.... Enough of this.
Your touched kid with careless touches.
'Rumors' I'm above this - I show war vets love.
It ain't about your cuz. bruv..
Just your 'substance'.Last edited by smoothtung; 11-25-2011 at 12:06 PM.
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f*ck bland rappers, y'all know I'm through with 'em.
your "virus" died to my auto-immune system.
I "go for miles" making 'tracks'. great with rap,
and "go for Miles" Davis jazz.
"rumour of war".. I've proven-the-force.
your only hope's in your delusional-thoughts.
"rumour-of-war", you ain't seeing mic booths-but-of-course..
you should 'drop your sh*t' in private- behind cubicle-doors.
"rumour-of-war".. your last part wasn't as crude-as-before.
be more like your cousin; stay true-to-a-cause.Last edited by _SBU; 11-25-2011 at 10:11 AM.
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Looks like you need a spellin check, my name is RUMOR kinda like your paycheck.
You ridin' like a buster, and homie, im here to break your neck, and you cant even muster up the words like an aztec.
I make this **** look easy, and my voice might be a little queasy, but when you come at me with your weak flows, that ****'s cheesy.
I'm standin up to a cause, cuz I'm a Navy SEAL, I've trained for BUD/s to make punks like you squeal.
So listen here Mr.SBU, my virus keeps spreadin and it's comin for you, it's see-through, dude... It's voodoo.
It's gonna mark you like a tattoo, and homie you're ado.
I suggest a vaccination, maybe a combination of herbs because this is your incarceration into the prison of my tribulation.
You can run you can sweat, but you wont be able to hide from the threat that is my rep, cuz my name is around this world kinda like the sun set. -
all of yall whack my flows leave u stuck like crack
have u spooked to battle me im da best file dat
my name J-BUD my hood call me dat
crazy flowin off da hat my mind off da map
molo yo *** i will tap lay yo head in my lap
614 im puttin on da map i make beats n my
big bro rap, to beat i reach back n slap
molo drop it low n bounce dat
i like yo flow but my flow betta
yo man get u wet but i can make u wetta
im done wit yall come see me when yall get betta -
You need to learn how to annunciate, I thinks it's time to punctuate your rap career if you can't even rate equally in the history books.
And it looks as if you need a clean down in the nooks of your brain cuz you sound insane.
Actin like you can rhyme, it's a crime, and it's on my time so that ends playtime, this flow is gonna make you mine.
Get off the thread, cuz it looks like you just joined, and on here this is all about bloodshed go back to bed or you can just tread softly
Because your disruptin my peace very largely. -
im done learning got a ged in school its cool
cause im rich n im strapped wit a tool
nina hit ya rib, dead throw ya body in da pool
neva get caught no i neva been a fool
just hop in da whip n ride
like everythang cool
rumor of war just a rumor
i kill for real like a tumor
get shot up like osama i be obama
i feel like gettin higha
B Lee is my brother
B LEE light da fire
pass it to rumor
dat be his last blunt
cause after dis beat
im goin on a man hunt
til i catch rumor slipin
up dat K n BANG
ova be da man hunt -
~nice drop. The british spelling is 'rumour' by the way, with the second 'u' in it.
I'm liked 'like' a similie..
'right' like calligraphy..
I've got all the proper elements; a true alchemist.
correcting my "spellin" G? I'll take "U" out of it.
that "prison" is ambition. contemplate it's worth;
all your 'bars' are bent, I've got a-way with words.
broke out, faced my guards... you're still swinging play-time bars.
I'll flip this "navy' 'seal" like I'm a great-'white' 'shark'.
you can't find the angles or manage to rap them well.
quite like a "seal" when you sit there and clap yourself.
you give the "navy" bad rep novice you're not it's spokesman.
you're not tight; I broke this "seal" and got him open.
you know some dope vocab but can't deploy it properly..
and can't take it back; I broke this "seal" and voided warranty.
I'm "ridin' like" a juggernaut, his motor's left damaged.
but this "seal" blows like broken head-gasket's.Last edited by _SBU; 11-26-2011 at 11:29 PM.
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your dumb*ss drops do no damage.
f*ck that, I'll even beat you in youre own langwidge.
Im ...gettin straight thugged ..an wreckin-"J-bud";
my punches smudge his ..genetic-makeup.
you .."betta" wake up. you frontin.
I'll sleep on ya *bleep* like Im packing a snooze button.
your rap's mindless.. now its 'bodied' too.
wanna get "wetta" till ya.. drowned in concrete-shoes.
"off da map" man you onto the satnav,
I'll take it places so far out they'd crash that.
I drop da bomb an 'Airforce' em
your worn out I'll 'Air Jordan'.
gettin 'kicked' now. true "dat", mate..
you spit out like chewed DAT tapes..
nah f*ck this thug sh*t. you didn't even form-yours-well.
your "big brother" so it's like I'm george-orwell.Last edited by _SBU; 11-26-2011 at 09:51 PM.
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either you're serious or parody.. perverse-humour..
you dont "kill for real, like" you're just the-word-"tumor".
of all the rappers that I've battled.. ever.-he's-weakest..
and that's for real, so you'd.. best-to-"B-LEE"ve-it.
the sh*t you're bringing in -more-than-embarrassing.
.."whip n ride"? like edwardian-carriages.
you're sh*t. type I'd never even bother to try trying my best for..
I'll .."whip' and ..'ride"; leave your b*tch with her flesh raw. -
damn i had a nice *** flow
****ed up n i lost it bro
so u win dis round but
ill be back tho
im comin wit my ***** n yo ***
my ***** give me head
yo *** give me mo
sbu aint **** molo got a betta flow
she probly ugly tho now im done
im still da best tho illest ***** u kno
got da crown n the throne facts yall already kno -
Rhyming with 'same' words ain't nothin special.
Your sailing against winds - I've a "tung" drivin vessel.
It is not a fail for mind and grammar to wrestle,
But the 'top' drop frail standards when dust settles...
Your "crown" wearing if sh*t talk 'wear's holes in your teeth.
And your "throne" 'Holmes' is at home next to your bathroom sink.
"Bro, so" it doesn't matter which round of which bout,
Your 'dis'd out cuz battered shouts are what you dish out..
Switch out and rearrange "same" plays in your feigned game.
Or get 'switched-out' like blown pane on mainframe.Last edited by smoothtung; 11-27-2011 at 06:38 AM.
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damn i admitted defeat
y smooththugg wanna still battle me
ur rhymes is garbage like family dolla products
di*k on ya mind when ya wake up
imma bout a dolla homie get ya cake up
imma bout a dolla homie get wett up
blue dwn red up any beat i blow up
yea i got the crown n the throne
u still recordin track on ur cell phone
ur life in my hands i squeeze 2 shot to ur dome
2 shots of whateva it be like a puzzle tryna put u back togetha
flow like a storm n u cant wether JBUD da best smooththug tell em
ur career is ova now i killed it im supa man bi**h not soulja boy tell em
im done wit smooththug let somebody else battle em -
...yes someone else battle me.
This travesty tragically beat himself.
ok be mad-at-me,
cuz I'm snappy an gladly mean as hell.
'J- bud'dy,
You're lacking specifics that critics see as doubt..
Wither or not you'll listen and fix it ill never figure out.
Why you try rapping? - your bruvs the emcee right?
You just write.
Or try...
putting up a weak fight.
Youre so f*cked, I'm fed up with dumb 'pups' with young bluffs..
Keep ya lungs shut - and "HANDS OFF KEYBOARD" ya 'numb nuts'
If I'm a puzzle I'm 'be-jeweld' - kids with 'no jewels' try.
I'm opposed to biting 'more than can chew' but you decide.
'Super man' if fly, come with more power than this,
I laugh cause you're coward - I 'dwight Howard' scripts.Last edited by smoothtung; 11-27-2011 at 09:17 AM.