Official Battle Thread.

who stole lil wayne lyrics?

You did Zarex.

?? I wrote this on the spot
What lines do I have that are lines he has? Dnt even listen to his ****

The only two lines influenced by **** I heard were the flow is positive, Nas said a line like it in Ether
And tru gs move in silence was something my friend used to say after a long sess
If u try to tell me anything else isn't my own **** then ur lunchin

"Real G's move in silent like lasagna" - Lil wayne 6 foot 7 foot.

As I just told u, got that from my friend
Dnt even listen to Wayne, not my type EVA
Ill just say **** straight off the top of my head here now to avoid usin rappers lines or anything
But for my rap, tips wud be awesome cuz I just started so I wanna know what I shud work on

im new to this and i would like to say u guys can rap.. way better then i will ever be

U gotta believe in urself Beast

Work on using more articulated structure , to much petty bullshit. Tell it how you see it , and live it. Meaning your life.

Originally Posted by HomeGrownProduction

Work on using more articulated structure , to much petty bullshit. Tell it how you see it , and live it. Meaning your life.

Has he rapped here before?

Beast,
Bring out the beast in you and just make it happen. If you need any help Please let me know. I'm always there to help out a fellow Brother.
Check out some of my stuff it you get a chance.

Peace Love Empathy,

Sk'nDeep

Just a couple of rhymes.

Don't try to cheat me with your dellusional tricks,
I know your lying and just trying to get a few kicks.
But it's not funny, I can't even fake it to laugh,
Your jobs are so bad, they wanna' make me friggin' barf!

But now I feel so good, wanna' lift my game greater,
But don't turn on your sweet side emulator.
You're not coming, the final words have already been stated,
And I feel better now that your becoming so hated!

Wait HGP, did u mean me? If so then ight, ill work on it

Yes , I was. :P But if you wanna see if I've rapped before


Goes like this , Emotional level's take over you can't fight this
Don't matter if me or you ****ing like it , Hah , laugh at me but you can bite it
Get the picture , You gotta capture the moment quicker
Don't be the next waka waka *****ing about his liquor
Don't try to mix simple and deverse , What did you think rap was worth
You think you gotta make **** complicated through every verse?
Come on man in this game you gonna hurt , I don't mean to be absurd
But haven't you already heard , This game can take a rough turn
Now maybe from me you got something to ****ing earn.

But i like makin complex rhymes :/


If I don't stamp it, its borin watchin 'em clamp it
And if I dumb it down, the gowns covered in ****
Cuz to me they gotta scratch and sniff to imagine the whiff
To stop misunderstanding so standings never shift

I could talk bout issues but followin close'd be tissues
Getting deep without the sleep just to weep may cause feuds
Among the ones who cracked the codes, familiar with the modes
I guess it'll balance out, experienced models know the pose

You got the rhymes to articulate to yourself, I think you're problem isn't knowing what to write about. Take whats effects you ...good , happy , sad , mad , average..anything and turn into what you do. Babbling is just old. But you got respect and I like it , and I respect it back.

Yea I'm still relatively new and I'm tryin to see how to construct stories but still get messages across. Hopefully it'll work

@ Skin Deep

U said it & I'mma let u get it, bxtch, u swallow what I spit
Embedded in this thread with a wish ta follow this chick
U mistake irrelevant for intelligent when I'm in my element
What I say is elegant, I'm excellent 'nd my rhyme is eminent

I'm the lyrical president, integral 'nd eloquent
I'm the principal, I represent, you're non existent
See I beat you without trying but u denyin' the truth
I don't even need to defy while u grindin' to lose

And I'm far from illiterate, kid, English is my third language
This is a deliberate twist, too distinguished fo' ya to manage
U from the United States yet you the one making spelling mistakes
Atleast I got an excuse mate, u should take a hell of a break

'Cuz u can't even handle a lady in the battle, it's crazy
Lately I'm mainly into challenge and u don't amaze me
It's Molotova on the daily while you're safely in the back
I vaguely remember, where u the one tryna attack ?

Back @ Ya, Molotova

Okay, She thinks she hurt me with that verse? Ha. I laugh at that sad attempt.
You need to stick to real estate cause you ain't selling your rap for ****.
It's pathetic, It took you nine days to come up with that Synthetic Flow?
Must have had conflict with your vocab on Rosetta Stone.
Just let it go,Talking about my mistakes? Take a good look in the mirror.
Wishing she could spit like Sk'n, this image couldn’t get any clearer.
The last I heard tryna's not a word, B****, read your whack verse.
Weak punches , You're better off hitting me with a packed purse.
It's absurd you ain't worth the words. You should have leaned how to rap first.
your on the daily? Yeah.. Maybe the centerfold of of playboy but don't try to play me.
Molotova get it though, Remember who your plastic *** is stepping to.
it's evident you lack the intelligence more than elephants do.
definite proof of evidence that you live in skewed element boo.
Who's the president you? Fact is you can't match this dispersal.
What did you expect, this is a battle rap b**** it's not supposed to be merciful.

Ight Who got the style , Boy don't wine about it worse then a child
Some said I was to hostile , Mother ****er I'm living all the while
No words and emotions can put me in denial , The bullshit they bring comes in the pile
I got word's made for the effecting , Physical and lyrical perfection
Critic's were made for the betting , To the game label me the exception
Fools made for the stepping , Haters made for the stressing
Sellout's made for the possessing , Ladies made for the mother ****ing affection
People wanna pick a side of what they think is right
I don't give a **** through my wife the mother ****ing mic
Ya'll kid's who just don't like , I can't change anything by the end of the night
But ever yet despite , I keep the pride and stress my might
Some say it's generic , words and level's I know your hear it
To the world don't fear it , To my own dream I can sense I'm near it
Say I'm just the same , Man I got a way of living to sustain
Don't matter to me or you if this is to plain , Guess you didn't do your ****ing homework to the game
I don't gotta brag about what I got , Ya'll fools need to stop
All you mother ****ers are the same tied in knot , I step on your pride worse then ****ing squatch.
You don't understand it , I couldn't tell you all I didn't plan it
I'm here to show you why I'm respected , Took my life and addressed it
Took pain and my being and compressed it , Everything I ever did I gotta ****ing stress it
***** or don't ***** , I got the world and how it be to admit
Everyone all around come with , This all ain't a diss
Maybe you miss understood how I live , I musta been through one ear and out the other like a ****ing trick , Or maybe all you mother ****ers are like disease sick , Spreading and we can't do anything about it , to me it's all the more I gotta ****ing rip.