LILAustys rap insane

chorus

i take a beat and loop
i take a beat and choop it
choop it whats that
but i think iv already said that
a don't know were my brains at
to much cocaine
cz a think im going insane

verse one
everywhere i go i don't know what im looking at
purple colours red colours what the hells that
i think i need help so call my personal doctor
no wait i think i ****ed his daughter
no wait i think it was his mother
fcuk it just don't even bother
cz he's huge he's a monster

chorus

i take a beat and loop
i take a beat and choop it
choop it whats that
but i think iv already said that
a don't know were my brains at
to much cocaine
cz a think im going insane

verse 2

you see my lyrics here i rhyme crazy
think il get a job reading to a rich blind lady
i get on the mic like a gorilla with no mannas
oh my god i cant think im going bananas
a rhyme over burps and farts like my uncle dan does
then have lunch with the stuff between my toes
then i go to San Diego zoo just to see cute fluffy pandas
them pandas a really cute ya know so i burnt one to ashes


chorus

i take a beat and loop
i take a beat and choop it
choop it whats that
but i think iv already said that
a don't know were my brains at
to much cocaine
cz a think im going insane


verse 3

When punks step up I be like hoo hoo hah
Hey nonny nonny doo doo dip doo daw
you got a problem you can fee fie faw
girls come close cz they like there meat raw
i think im cracking up now lets kiss the floor
unless you let me give ya girl it through the back door
and i wonder why i get a black eye in the first place
all the strange reasons like sayin to stallones kid shes a lil brace face

chorus

i take a beat and loop
i take a beat and choop it
choop it whtas that
but i think iv already said that
a don't know were my brains at
to much cocaine
cz a think im going insane

verse 4

iv always wanted to **** batman
or maybe superman
no defo spider man
someone with a big stick
iv got it mr fantastic
**** this i aint gay
cocaine is making me **** play
i like lady's in there tight leather
when they bounce there light as a feather
i would love to do this that and tether
but first av got to get to there mother
do you think she'd like my sexual thunder
let me think i wonder

chorus

i take a beat and loop
i take a beat and choop it
choop it whtas that
but i think iv already said that
a don't know were my brains at
to much cocaine
cz a think im going insane

i take a beat and loop it
i read it and made some mistakes so i re did it lmao



i take a beat and choop it
choop it whats that
but i think iv already said that
a don't know were my brains at
to much cocaine
cz a think im going insane

verse 2

you see my lyrics here i rhyme crazy
think il get a job reading to a rich blind lady
i get on the mic like a gorilla with no mannas
oh my god i cant think im going bananas
a rhyme over burps and farts like my uncle dan does
then have lunch with the stuff between my toes
then i go to San Diego zoo just to see cute fluffy pandas
them pandas a really cute ya know so i burnt one to ashes


chorus

i take a beat and loop it
i take a beat and choop it
choop it whats that
but i think iv already said that
a don't know were my brains at
to much cocaine
cz a think im going insane


verse 3

When punks step up I be like hoo hoo hah
Hey nonny nonny doo doo dip doo daw
you got a problem you can fee fie faw
girls come close cz they like there meat raw
i think im cracking up now lets kiss the floor
unless you let me give ya girl it through the back door
and i wonder why i get a black eye in the first place
all the strange reasons like sayin to stallones kid shes a lil brace face

chorus

i take a beat and loop it
i take a beat and choop it
choop it whats that
but i think iv already said that
a don't know were my brains at
to much cocaine
cz a think im going insane

verse 4

iv always wanted to fuk batman
or maybe superman
no defo spider man
someone with a big stick
iv got it mr fantastic
fuk this i aint gay
cocaine is making me dik play
i like lady's in there tight leather
when they bounce there light as a feather
i would love to do this that and tether
but first av got to get to there mother
do you think she'd like my sexual thunder
let me think i wonder

chorus

i take a beat and loop it
i take a beat and choop it
choop it whats that
but i think iv already said that
a don't know were my brains at
to much cocaine
cz a think im going insane

mad a mistake agian lmao **** it ya get the drift lol

It would be better if written with correct grammar.

Ok, I'm gonna be a bit critical here but offer some stuff to work on. At first thoughts I think it reminds me of a weak freestyle. You seem like you're rhyming for the hell of it and not naturally which good lyrics cone across as. To me, this is just pure blabber. Try and use metaphors in your writing, they allow you more possibilities for rhyming while staying within the same topic. Flow's ok but also try and work on content. Not too much of bigging yourself up and use a title and work your hook around that and the verses on the hook. Just try not to be too "I banged your mother" and stuff

its a rap thats insane its supposed to be like that lol

http://www.flocabulary.com/freestylerap.html

It is SO obvious you just got your rhymes from that site. That makes me look at you in a total different way, can't you even come up with lame shxt like this yourself ?

Yo Lil Austy I can't believe you still rap here.

only the choop it loop it a mean come on

Originally Posted by LILAusty

only the choop it loop it a mean come on

How about 'think il get a job reading to a rich blind lady' ?

yeah i liked it so i put tht in lmao dinit care nemore like haha