Wild West Jess. part 2

Thread: Wild West Jess. part 2

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    Doug Denslowe said:

    Cool Wild West Jess. part 2

    Wears Paris fashions
    When robbing banks
    So polite,on the way out
    Never forgot to say"Thanks"
    Passing men always tip
    Their hat in respect
    Winks from the Cowboys
    With whom she has slept

    There wasn't a lock or pocket
    She couldn't pick
    Even studied Magic
    Knew every trick
    Paid for information
    And the best alibis
    Left nothing to chance
    Was a master of disguise

    Only mistake was in
    Choosing her men
    Couldn't tell the difference
    Between love and pretend
    Never married or jailed
    Had to run free
    No man could tame her
    Take it from me

    Both brains and good looks
    Own personal style
    Wanted for Murder
    For her killer-smile
    No books will be written
    No movies to be seen
    Wild West Jess
    Legendary Outlaw Queen

    This is part 2 of this manuscript,hopefully you have read Wild West Jess.Thanks for reading.
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 05-04-2013 at 09:43 PM.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    When I first posted this,I couldn't put the entire song in one post.(don't ask me why,but I did finally get it done)As it says Part 2,I encourage you to read Wild West Jess,it's the whole song.Cheers!
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 05-04-2013 at 09:40 PM.
     
  3. rashid.martin123@gmail.co said:

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    This is really good....Keep it up!
     
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    Frankie Jasmine said:

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    What a great conclusion to a great song!! Doug your lyrics are such fun and adventure! What happened to songs like that? Or did they ever exist?--I can't remember. I know Harry Chapin was a great storyteller, but many of his songs were sad. Then there's John Prine--sometimes funny, sometimes sad, sometimes raunchy. Maybe Jimmy Buffett?

    But this style is defo Doug Denslowe. This is the kind of song that should be passed down through families to sing together . . . sitting around campfires, entertaining along with friends, sharing, caring, and having fun. You write classics!! This is the kind of song that EVERYONE should know and be able to sing along to wherever--home, a concert, a band-playing bar, the neighborhood . . . All I can say is SOMEBODY IS A FOOL FOR NOT PICKING UP ONE OF YOUR SONGS TO MAKE IT A HIT!

    My favorite verse:

    Only mistake was in
    Choosing her men
    Couldn't tell the difference
    Between love and pretend
    Never married or jailed
    Had to run free
    No man could tame her
    Take it from me




    Oh, and great ending!