Russian To English needed Serebro - Dyshi

Can anyone translate this song for me to english plz?
This song has a great sound that makes you feel in ocean or you may feel sumthing moving inside you. Highly recommended

Serebro - Dyshi



Ty
Iz moyey mechty
Sdelan iz vody
Tayesh po krayam
Ya
Taynu otdala
I tebya zvala
Skolko ya mogla

Ne molchi
Ne ostynet krov'
V ney moya lyubov'

Dyshi
So mnoy
Otrazhaya teni
My tantsuem pod vodoy
Dyshi
So mnoy
Mozhet byt' kogda-to
My uvidimsa s toboy
(2 times)

Net
Bol'she nichego
Krome odnogo
Vzdoha tvoyego
My
Uplyvyom tuda
Gde techot vsegda
Venami voda

Ne molchi
Ne ostynet krov'
V ney moya lyubov'

Dyshi
So mnoy
Otrazhaya teni
My tantsuem pod vodoy
Dyshi
So mnoy
Mozhet byt' kogda-to
My uvidimsa s toboy

Dyshi...

Dyshi...

Серебро - Дыши
Serebro - Breathe

Ты - из моей мечты
You - from my dreams
Сделан из воды, таешь по краям
Made of water,.......at the end
Я - тайну отдала
I - gave secrets
И тебя звала, сколько я могла
I called you, as much as I could

Не молчи, - не остынет кровь,
Do not speak - not to cool the blood,
В ней моя любовь...
My love is in it

Припев (2 раза):
Chorus (2 times):
Дыши со мной
Breathe with me
Отражая тени - мы танцуем под водой
Reflecting the shadows - we dance under the water
Дыши со мной
Breathe with me
Может быть, когда-то мы увидимся с тобой
It can be when we meet each other

Нет, больше ничего
No, nothing else
Кроме одного, вдоха твоего
In addition to one of your breath
Мы, уплывём туда
not sure here
Где течёт всегда венами вода
Where water flows always in the veins

Не молчи, - не остынет кровь,
Do not speak - not to cool the blood,
В ней моя любовь...
My love is in it

Припев (2 раза):
Chorus (2 times):
Дыши со мной
Breathe with me
Отражая тени - мы танцуем под водой
Reflecting the shadows - we dance under the water
Дыши со мной
Breathe with me
Может быть, когда-то мы увидимся с тобой
It can be when we meet each other

Дыши...
Breathe
Дыши...
Breathe

1. Quote:
"Мы, уплывём туда
not sure here "

It means: "We'll float to places"


2."Сделан из воды, таешь по краям"

It means:"Made of water, (and you are) melting at edges (like an ice)"


3. And here's the mistake:

"Не молчи, - не остынет кровь" means:
"Don't BE SILENT-the blood won't get cold (cool down)", not:
"Do not speak - not to cool the blood,"

"Мы, уплывём туда
-we will swim over there

and all others are true

I agree, that "float" may be not OK in this particular case. But "swim" isn't OK too.
Lolipop, arkadaşım, you think that romantic heroes of this song will move in the water "by hands" like swimmers in the pool? I think they will use something like boat or ship... So it's better to translate "УПЛЫВЁМ" as "we'll sail".
I also agree that "туда" literally means "over there", but "...туда,
где течёт всегда венами вода..." I would translate "...TO PLACES
where water flows always in the veins..."

So final version is:

Мы, уплывём туда
We"ll sail TO PLACES
Где течёт всегда венами вода
Where water flows always in the veins

Tamam mı?

Tamam kardes benim icin sorun deil tesekkurler information icin

Серебро - Дыши
Serebro - Breathe

Ты - из моей мечты
You - from my dreams
Сделан из воды, таешь по краям
(You) Made of water, melting at the ends
Я - тайну отдала
I - gave secrets
И тебя звала, сколько я могла
And I called you, as much as I could

Не молчи, - не остынет кровь,
Don't be silent - blood won't cool down,
В ней моя любовь...
My love is in it

Припев (2 раза):
Refrein (2 times):
Дыши со мной
Breathe with me
Отражая тени - мы танцуем под водой
Reflecting the shadows - we dance under the water
Дыши со мной
Breathe with me
Может быть, когда-то мы увидимся с тобой
Maybe someday we will see each other

Нет, больше ничего
No, there's nothing else
Кроме одного, вдоха твоего
Except of one breath of yours
Мы, уплывём туда
We will float there
Где течёт всегда венами вода
Where water flows always in the veins

Не молчи, - не остынет кровь,
Don't be silent - blood won't cool down,
В ней моя любовь...
My love is in it

Припев (2 раза):
Refrein (2 times):
Дыши со мной
Breathe with me
Отражая тени - мы танцуем под водой
Reflecting the shadows - we dance under the water
Дыши со мной
Breathe with me
Может быть, когда-то мы увидимся с тобой
Maybe someday we will see each other

Дыши...
Breathe
Дыши...
Breathe

Ty
Iz moyey mechty
Sdelan iz vody
Tayesh po krayam
Ya
Taynu otdala
I tebya zvala
Skolko ya mogla

<<
You
From my dream
Made from water
Melting at the edges
I
Gave you the secret
I was calling you
As long as I could
>>


Ne molchi
Ne ostynet krov'
V ney moya lyubov'

<<
Don't be silent
The blood will not cool down
My love is in it
>>

Dyshi
So mnoy
Otrazhaya teni
My tantsuem pod vodoy
Dyshi
So mnoy
Mozhet byt' kogda-to
My uvidimsa s toboy
(2 times)


<<
Breathe
With me
Casting shadows
We are dancing under water
Breathe
With me
Maybe someday
We will meet again
>>

Net
Bol'she nichego
Krome odnogo
Vzdoha tvoyego
My
Uplyvyom tuda
Gde techot vsegda
Venami voda


<<
There is nothing
Anymore
Except
Your breath
We
Will swim away
Where always is flowing
Water in the veins
>>

Ne molchi
Ne ostynet krov'
V ney moya lyubov'

<<
Don't be silent
The blood will not cool down
My love is in it
>>


Dyshi
So mnoy
Otrazhaya teni
My tantsuem pod vodoy
Dyshi
So mnoy
Mozhet byt' kogda-to
My uvidimsa s toboy

<<
Breathe
With me
Casting shadows
We are dancing under water
Breathe
With me
Maybe someday
We will meet again
>>

Dyshi...

<<Breathe>>

Check this out http://blog.digitalbank.org/2009/07/serebro.html

[1]
You
Out of my daydreams
Coming back it seems
And away you fade
I
Opened up to lies
Having no reply
Giving up my try

[Choir]
Talk to me
Your heart will never stop
For within my love

Begin
Breathing
And dancing in deep waters our shadows spin
Keeping
Breathing
We hope it never ends
But love's a fragile thing

[2]
No
There is nothing more
There's nothing more inside
Only your sweet sigh
We
Will swim away tonight
To the place we hide
Through the veins we glide

[Choir]
Talk to me
Your heart will never stop
For within my love

Begin
Breathing
And dancing in deep waters our shadows spin
Keeping
Breathing
We hope it never ends
But love's a fragile thing

Well, the translations above are more or less close to the Russian text, but the mood, the spirit has not been passed well. It got drowned in the words. Let me try:

You are in my dreams
Your image is indistinct, like you are made of water;
its borders are dissipating.
I gave out my secret,
I called for you, as long as I could

Talk to me- my blood won't cool down,
My love keeps it warm.

Refrein (2 times):

Breathe with me,
We are dancing under the water, reflecting the shadows.
Breathe with me,
Maybe, someday we will meet each other.

There is nothing else,
other than the breath of yours.
We will get carried to the place,
Where water always flows like blood in veins.

check this out: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qMPnf5nJC0c

Net
Bol'she nichevo
Krome odnovo
Vzdoha tvoyevo
My
Uplyvyom tuda
Gde techot vsegda
Venami voda

Originally Posted by Greenbeauty

Well, the translations above are more or less close to the Russian text, but the mood, the spirit has not been passed well. It got drowned in the words. Let me try:

You are in my dreams
Your image is indistinct, like you are made of water;
its borders are dissipating.
I gave out my secret,
I called for you, as long as I could

Talk to me- my blood won't cool down,
My love keeps it warm.

Refrein (2 times):

Breathe with me,
We are dancing under the water, reflecting the shadows.
Breathe with me,
Maybe, someday we will meet each other.

There is nothing else,
other than the breath of yours.
We will get carried to the place,
Where water always flows like blood in veins.

Hmm, yes and no.
Obviously, it's very hard to translate leaving the exact meaning untouched while still keeping the song singable.
Try to sing out your version - it's a tongue twister, really.

Originally Posted by Greenbeauty

Well, the translations above are more or less close to the Russian text, but the mood, the spirit has not been passed well. It got drowned in the words. Let me try:

You are in my dreams
Your image is indistinct, like you are made of water;
its borders are dissipating.
I gave out my secret,
I called for you, as long as I could

Talk to me- my blood won't cool down,
My love keeps it warm.

Refrein (2 times):

Breathe with me,
We are dancing under the water, reflecting the shadows.
Breathe with me,
Maybe, someday we will meet each other.

There is nothing else,
other than the breath of yours.
We will get carried to the place,
Where water always flows like blood in veins.

I can speak a bit of Russian but I am very new to listening to Russian songs. Russian is a very beautiful singing language - I had no idea. To understand to emotional content is a bit more difficult, of course. That has to be passed from heart to heart. One other person, mentioned that it is difficult to convey the intended emotions while keeping it singable. While I appreciate that, as soon as I know what the intended emotions are supposed to be, I memorize the song in the native language. Its great to sing it that way.
The other translators did a great job also. I think it took four different interpreatations for me to get close. You brought it all together.
Thank you sir for the essential ingredient.

Markgreg

And I thank everyone else who contributed as well.