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Originally Posted by DuceDaMicRipper

Cutting edge; lyrical skill saw; fine tuning head
re-defining led. Now this jabber jaw is dead
For what this jabber jaw said - he pleas to be fed
For what he sees in his head gets slept on just like bed's
Instead of learning from each thread, this guy's burning with re-venge
Many you don't understand what a coe'd is; were not coe'ds kid
you fall under rule of cy pres
cause the sh*it you say is foriegn like an out of state Simon says is

Simon says My rhymes ship you like valdez
re-venge i started this so it's at you're 'end
The 'sh1t' i say 'p1sses' you off
'By' this thread I'm 'ripping you off'

i kill and re-define the dead
You need some 'change' cuz you don't make any 'sense'
You're not 'sincere' I bring 'sin-to-you're-ears'
'DDMR' 'dumbsh1t d1psh1t a mere retard'

Originally Posted by smoothtung

No flips

You've got perseverance kid - an I like that.
I just like to sever rants, ha - cause I'm like that.

I'm cleverly enhanced - an too ready to fight back...
But I should be fatherly probably so, 'nice rap'.

But nah,
on the real though..
Your flow I'm like, sorta diggin'..
But there's more to writtens - (yea its a poor description)....

But your decisions are to listen an script til your crimson,
Or fall short on any beat you thought you've been ripping.

Go though,
And take the next step from basic.
Tho dont stray for fame its a waste. - (I'm impatient)
Right now you're at makeshift facelift or fake tit,
I'm building your fire to go higher than a spaceship..

I'm beaten smooth could you tell me how i get better? also i will look forward to our next battle

Yea no doubt you're getting better fairly quick.. u got potential. Uhh Haha like I tried to say in my response just write til ur face is red. Fer real tho write, listen to good lyrics, an keep doin what we're doin here.

Originally Posted by Deleterious

Simon says My rhymes ship you like valdez
re-venge i started this so it's at you're 'end
The 'sh1t' i say 'p1sses' you off
'By' this thread I'm 'ripping you off'

i kill and re-define the dead
You need some 'change' cuz you don't make any 'sense'
You're not 'sincere' I bring 'sin-to-you're-ears'
'DDMR' 'dumbsh1t d1psh1t a mere retard'

if you do bring "sin" it's 'sloth' from lazy-writtens.
put more time in. look on rhyming like breakbeat-rhythm.
you could've..
"re-defined-the-dead".. reaper-style-then raised it..
or re-defined-ya-trend for weaker-rhymes-but-kept basic.

you could've dropped that "D.D.M.R" then rewinded it.
..think back; .."hit caps" and 'ReMinDeD' him.

you could've put "Reven-ge" in;
e.g. -neveR reversed.. but 'rev-engine's.

anyone wanna battle thats not sbu or smooth lol

gone beyond superlative- I'd even leave the best-vanquished.
it's like my keyboard's possessed-damn-it..; when -I- hit 'Del' -his- text-vanished.
sorry fam- I'll try to be more tolerant
when rhymers seek aknowledgement
for lines that seem monotonous.
but try to be more confident.
why try to hide from potent-writers in an open-cypher?
my punches could help you to shine like I'm known-as-Midas.
next time- try. you could write a better-verse.
we won't keep feeding you advice if you never-learn.

Yo I'll battle you my dude. Come at me whenever dawg.

Originally Posted by Tre_fly

Yo I'll battle you my dude. Come at me whenever dawg.

No Fly.. I don't think Deleterious here is ready yet. He is currently going against Duce, which I think is a better choice for him.

Awww, come one man. I haven't battled in foooooorrrrrreeeeeevvvvvveeeeeerrrrrrr. haha. I'm not even good enough to come out of the first round of the rap tournament we had on here. haha. Its straight though, I feel you Who, I'm just f4ckin with ya. Your probably right.

LMAO!!! Same here.. Didn't come out of the first round either!! But I know your skill level exceeds Del's

Originally Posted by Deleterious

anyone wanna battle thats not sbu or smooth lol

yea...create the thread

Anyone ballsy enough ta battle me? I'm tryna get better too

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Anyone ballsy enough ta battle me? I'm tryna get better too

I'm down. set up a thead

My flows move like ghosts do,
and steps tread fresh ground like snow-shoes.
I know 'Who's flow's crude..
if you weren't so worthless I'd own you.
Tre and Del.. played themselves. they've posts due.
and when it's Deuce vs Smooth then they'll both lose.
if Nos' and Mack.. wander back, they'll still be below view.
you're all common, so offer more fodder to go through.

I leave tracks sore like potent missed shots.
An have cerebrals torn with spoken Swift thoughts.

Brief fact;
I store sick plots in my pocket.
You'd best stop it... -
I'm space shuttle flow the way I 'rock-it'.

Stuff a sock in it,
You've poor sight to say least.
If anyone's lost it you're 'top pick' - you've strayed chief.

I've a grave 'peak', yep. But yet to get to 'summit',
To 'sum'-it all up - I wont cheat, sh*t I'll 'run' it.

Yes. . . .Nos'tiks' returned to this thread,
To you Im a threat,
But before I get to shred on this thread,
Ill have you guys bred. . .Not nough' said.
I still have more ahead',
To embed. . .
You better make sure you heard all that was said

So heres to Mack', Its noticed that you never came back.
Your startin' to slack. . .
But not that you were anybetter 'jack'

Smooth you never replied in our 'battle'
You just came to this one, and started to babble
No reason for mindless prattle. . .

SBU your flows 'are' like ghosts. . . They're just fake
But, what's it gonna take, SorryB*tchU lost my sake. . .

Originally Posted by smoothtung

I leave tracks sore like potent missed shots.
An have cerebrals torn with spoken Swift thoughts.

Brief fact;
I store sick plots in my pocket.
You'd best stop it... -
I'm space shuttle flow the way I 'rock-it'.

Stuff a sock in it,
You've poor sight to say least.
If anyone's lost it you're 'top pick' - you've strayed chief.

I've a grave 'peak', yep. But yet to get to 'summit',
To 'sum'-it all up - I wont cheat, sh*t I'll 'run' it.

I'll stuff more than "a sock in" when you're trying to 'kick back'.
you're lazy and you'll pay for it; I'm bringing syn-tax.

..I'll "peak" so high I've a view of the future.
..I'll "sum it all up" like a supercomputer.
This pace is famed but I'm never a "cheater".
you 'misplaced the letters' that said I'm a 'teacher'?

he's vanquished and his language languished.
"space shuttle flow" though? the way you don't 'plan-it'.
he forced his rhymes. 'or-bit' mine.
if this is "poorest sight" yours is blind.
it's like you tried to war with knights-
the way I'll leave you mourning light.

My "grave peak" remains deep. I gain steam to raise heat and make these great leaps daily.
you hide at home and rhyme alone with highs and lows like breakbeats.

if it rhymes.. you drop it quick before you think the logic through.
your lost "plot"s got more holes than those "pockets" do.

Originally Posted by _Nostik_Go_Hard

Yes. . . .Nos'tiks' returned to this thread,
To you Im a threat,
But before I get to shred on this thread,
Ill have you guys bred. . .Not nough' said.
I still have more ahead',
To embed. . .
You better make sure you heard all that was said

So heres to Mack', Its noticed that you never came back.
Your startin' to slack. . .
But not that you were anybetter 'jack'

Smooth you never replied in our 'battle'
You just came to this one, and started to babble
No reason for mindless prattle. . .

SBU your flows 'are' like ghosts. . . They're just fake
But, what's it gonna take, SorryB*tchU lost my sake. . .

I've Got to give dues.. seems Nostik's improved, see
cutting him down is like Coppicing fruit trees.

seems you've learned some from all of my steez..
but I'll 'take' 'off-fence' if you're 'borderline' 'thief'.
ok I'm quite aloof ..but I rhyme the truth.
"more ahead"? you bite multis like hydras do.
I dragged your warm drops straight into hell
so if I've "lost your sake" you've forsaken yourself.

I've "lost your sake" and so have you. I've still got mine to arm me.
ninjas' be leaving you punchdrunk like you 'lost my saki'.
you've raised your game from waste to a weak standard.
you've "prattled" since back when shaking a 'pea-rattle'
your raps are wrong.. since you're the one to "babble"-on
I'll burn you fast as rasta's crops.

Originally Posted by _SBU

I'll stuff more than "a sock in" when you're trying to 'kick back'.
you're lazy and you'll pay for it; I'm bringing syn-tax.

..I'll "peak" so high I've a view of the future.
..I'll "sum it all up" like a supercomputer.
This pace is famed but I'm never a "cheater".
you 'misplaced the letters' that said I'm a 'teacher'?

he's vanquished and his language languished.
"space shuttle flow" though? the way you don't 'plan-it'.
he forced his rhymes. 'or-bit' mine.
if this is "poorest sight" yours is blind.
it's like you tried to war with knights-
the way I'll leave you mourning light.

My "grave peak" remains deep. I gain steam to raise heat and make these great leaps daily.
you hide at home and rhyme alone with highs and lows like breakbeats.

if it rhymes.. you drop it quick before you think the logic through.
your lost "plot"s got more holes than those "pockets" do.

'Syntax'? Sin taxed, you bring laughs like Sinbad.
You've been had,
your thin rap won't win lad - sink fast

Brink rad -
I stick to the craft like a true missionary.
You 'lick' fads and, in fact, spit sh*t like you've dysentery

Listen fairly,
I'll take this 'computer' an lose em.
Crash his hard-'drive' sooner - an carefully re'boot' em.

I stay so cold - I freeze 'steam' to brittle,
An 'steez' don't exist if it don't please just alittle.
...I bring 'steez' like I was seen pleasing by fiddle
...an you bring 'steez' like you were seen weaning a 'little'

I'm gone with the breeze after this piece that I widde
At least for the weak - I've seen too week, too little...


I cling to speech - as if it were a damn movie.
It moves me and my speeds reached - like an amped subi.

An I rise higher than futures - your hawk while I'm eagle
You've been a fine booster - but we 'cross-word's like Reagle's...

Originally Posted by smoothtung

'Syntax'? Sin taxed, you bring laughs like Sinbad.
You've been had,
your thin rap won't win lad - sink fast

Brink rad -
I stick to the craft like a true missionary.
You 'lick' fads and, in fact, spit sh*t like you've dysentery

Listen fairly,
I'll take this 'computer' an lose em.
Crash his hard-'drive' sooner - an carefully re'boot' em.

I stay so cold - I freeze 'steam' to brittle,
An 'steez' don't exist if it don't please just alittle.
...I bring 'steez' like I was seen pleasing by fiddle
...an you bring 'steez' like you were seen weaning a 'little'

I'm gone with the breeze after this piece that I widde
At least for the weak - I've seen too week, too little...


I cling to speech - as if it were a damn movie.
It moves me and my speeds reached - like an amped subi.

An I rise higher than futures - your hawk while I'm eagle
You've been a fine booster - but we 'cross-word's like Reagle...

your "speech is a damned movie"? it seems you need to read a bit.
you're the queen of the damned movie dying like Aaliyah did.
I should kick you off this rapforum of mine,
staggered like Bacchus with amphoras of wine.
you don't know rap's "future" or the history of it.
we "cross words", like your english teachers did.
"we cross-words" and I've got 'pseudo-ku'dos for you.
the wordplay's 'hangman'.. you rock a noose- your 'drops' are 'looped'.
or.. as you front like a pawn. this is 'chess' and I'm "regal".
or.. since you're basically sick, kid 'connect the dots' to measles.
we "cross-words"- crypt'ic.
the underground 'digs it'.
we "cross-words" and you cant match passion..
I'mma go ham since your game's more like 'back-gammon'..
this is rap. standard.
This ain't -"Sinbad"s 'seven seas'- thats backwards.
I -'see seven' 'bad'Sins'- and land 'em.
you're shine's faded out like paraffin lanterns.
your light died. in hindsight you used to be quite fly;
now you view 'Windows' like falling off a "high-rise".