the perfect girl

Need help coming up with a chorus but let me know what you think of the rest. The flow is still kinda off


Verse 1:

I was on my way home when I saw this girl one Evening,
Her eyes her hair everything about her had me Reeling,
And I didn’t even know her name,
but I was already thinkin about our future,
How when im wiv my friends as my girl I’d introduce her.
And though I was nervous I made sure I didnt let it affect me,
Went up and started chattin careful not to look threatening,
cause I knew first impressions would be crucial,
Asked her hey whats your name how you doin all the usual.
And after that day I just couldn’t think of another,
She was the type of girl I’d wanna take home to my mother,
cause she was beautiful but she’d never flaunt it,
Told her she was pretty but she never thought it,
She had a down to earth nature and I had to applaud it,
Perfect in almost every single way she deserves all the plaudits,
And If anyone said otherwise I’d jus ignore it,

Verse 2:

There was something about this girl that seemd so special,
That spendin each day with her became more and more essential,
And I werent one to judge but in every department,
She seemd to possess all the correct credentials,
so we started to spend all day hangin out in quiet venues,
Tell her about the stuff I like and ask about her views,
Talk about all our favourite TV shows and even about the topics in the news,
and exchange funny stories that’d draw a smile and amuse,
And now even when Im with loved ones I’d be feelin out of sorts,
Used to love the female attention I’d be getting in the tennis courts,
But now she was the only one dominating my mind and my thoughts,
So I took her to my apartment we both knew what was in store,
Even though we were scared at the same time we were sure,
And the sex was so good I didn’t realise we were both amateur,

Verse 3:

And after last night I werent feelin no remorse,
So I decided to tell my best friend and my most reliable source,
But what he was about tell me was gonna completely throw me off course,
Like christopher reeves the day he fell off his horse,
Except that my body remained intact,
but it was my mind that had become paralysed,
Cause as soon as I told him the good news,
He just stared at me looking somewhat bemused.
He said are you serious?
cause there's something about this girl you really need to Know,
And I dont wanna be bad or anythin but I think you should let her go.
I looked at him with a puzzled face and asked
How can you be sure? Is that so?
So he unlocked his phone and showed me a pic he'd been sent a week Ago,
And my heart sank as soon as I saw the photo
cause it was her in a see through bra lookin like she's ready to Blow.

The second verse is dodgy I admit and does not flow well so am still working on it

Again, you're good at telling stories, but you still don't play with your words. I've tried to rap some parts on a beat, and it's not working for me. If it's working for you, that's fine, but I think u need more wordplay in order to make it flow. Why won't u try it out ?