Thank you jeffs....BUT.....

With God make your peace
Confess to your priest
Cause you just unleashed an unstoppable beast
Ready to feast
On the lyrics, of the already deceased…
Sit back relax
While I murder you again with my battle axe
Then charge you tax
Just for your nursery rhymes and the substance it lacks…
As I dangle you by your ankles
Rip you apart by pulling you in two different angles
You get tangled…
As my words begin to straggle…
You lifeless
Like a visa card my rhymes are priceless, and…
Your just mad cause its on display
That you just got played…
AH…and by the way
Your wordplay…
Is weak, your like a geek
Standing in front of a mirror all week
As you spit, you lip sync
Thinking your all spiffy
Tryin’ to mimic fifty…
But you can’t get better when you lip sync to Brittney
And it’s alright dog, I know you wanna hit me
Cause you resent me…
For comin’ and shittin’ on your lawn…
And ripping down your kingdom made from YOUR TAMPONS
Cause when I spit, it’s majestic and ballistic
Lets get realistic
Your lines s*ck worse than a washed up limp biscuit

I could tear you up with my thoughts and a pencil
Blow you to bits like I’m a tomahawk missile
Then pop you’re bubble with my lyrical pistol
But I don’t mess with bullets and lead
I just use your words and all the stupid sh*t that you said
I hear the crowd sayin’…OFF WITH HIS HEAD
So, son you can’t touch me, I’m out of your range
Your just a b*tch who just had a sex change
No more, no less
This is a game of chess
My advise…give it a rest
Cause dog…you aren’t the best
Come to terms with that fate, it’s to late
Game over Motherf*cker…CHECKMATE

if d claff was up in this forum ud be dead by now

Don't make a thread calling him out when you're obviously no where near good enough to be doing so.

AH and just for sh*ts and giggles....here Molotovta


Yo, when you spit, your careless…
Your like a floppy thing of asparagus
You reek of arrogance
And I know you speak with a therapist
Like, “damn I can’t beat the Americans”
Your a fake a** *****
Make your mom s*ck my d*ck
While I’m on the john just taken a sh*t
She won’t quit
Til’ I tell her to swallow and then just sit…
Bustin’ nuts up in her hair strands
Then I stand up and, make her wipe my *** with her bare hands
Turn around slap you in the chin
Now you know how it is to have a sh*t eating grin
Father forgive me for I have sinned
I just murdered this b*tch again

And see its not critical that your dissin’
But it is critical that you listen
See , talent…the one thing that is critical is the one thing your missin’
Which means I just put your game in critical condition
Not to mention…
Your white…right?
So let those corn rolls out, you had those sh*ts rolled to tight
Your not black…or puerto rican
You need to shut the f*ck up when a full grown man is speakin’
Tryin’ to look like Fergie or one of the last of the Mohicans...
I can’t tell….
O’well
Your lines are soft, like a sing along song
your finished...like the gong show..... BONG!!!

wut u talkin bout lil tyler im complimenting d claff cuz hes obviously good an i culd run circles around u

Learn to ****ing type man, it's annoying. I was talking to Guns obviously since he was the thread starter...

I'm really wondering if I should reply with a rap or not ... I have out rapped you constantly, but u can't get enough of it, can you ? Problem is, if I'm not replying, you think you won, hahaa. Oh God, why am I even waisting my time here ?

You rhyme like a six year old kid spittin' shxt
No style, while I hit it, u should friggin' quit
U moan on & on about my mom, what u want ?
Me, I drop bombs, Don't you notice my taunts ?

U're like jokin' about cornROWS & Puerto-African flows
I'm as white as the coke up ur nose, but my tactic shows
You're the wannabe up in here, it looks deliberately
And you see, I seriously feel sorry for your illiteracy

For your info, I'm the most honest human being
And I promised I won't tip toe around your feelings
I should penetrate ur mind to generate ur rhymes
Demonstrate my style while u replicate my lines

Only thing that's critical is your lyrical dismissal
I sting like a thistle, kill like a ballistic missile
So if ur mission is to out rap me, better begin to practise
Whatever makes ya happy, I win again 'cuz I'm bombastic.


Who's the bxtch now ?

I know your hoping
That in my opening
Statements…that I get frazzled
Like I got dazzled
By your exposure…
But see I work with the upmost composure
I’m kosher
Like a soldier
I feed off your anger, til you do as I told ja’
I’ll mold ja’
With my influential trait
Cause you know your sh*t is only second rate
And why you spit about a six year old child
When you can’t even wrap your mind around my rap style
Like you in denial…
That, or your just a pedophile
See b*tch, f*ck eight…I’ve walked NINE miles
All smiles…
Eating up competition and spit their bones into piles
While…
You still on your knees cleanin’ my spunk off your momma’s tiles
You bombastic?
That’s fantastic…
To bad your flow is shaggalastic
And your gimmick is fake as plastic

Be honest, you think your honest?
Up in here being modest?
Then why lie to yourself
And everybody else
When you know you need to put your rhymes up on that shelve
Before you embarrass yourself
Your slippin’
Double dippin’
Even rippin’
Off words like ballistic missile
What, you didn’t like to my lyrical pistol?
Don’t worry I won’t blow the whistle
You in a pinch?
Musta been a cliché
But all in all… that still makes you my b*tch

Originally Posted by gunsofarsenal

I know your hoping
That in my opening
Statements…that I get frazzled
Like I got dazzled
By your exposure…
But see I work with the upmost composure
I’m kosher
Like a soldier
I feed off your anger, til you do as I told ja’
I’ll mold ja’
With my influential trait
Cause you know your sh*t is only second rate
And why you spit about a six year old child
When you can’t even wrap your mind around my rap style
Like you in denial…
That, or your just a pedophile
See b*tch, f*ck eight…I’ve walked NINE miles
All smiles…
Eating up competition and spit their bones into piles
While…
You still on your knees cleanin’ my spunk off your momma’s tiles
You bombastic?
That’s fantastic…
To bad your flow is shaggalastic
And your gimmick is fake as plastic

Be honest, you think your honest?
Up in here being modest?
Then why lie to yourself
And everybody else
When you know you need to put your rhymes up on that shelve
Before you embarrass yourself
Your slippin’
Double dippin’
Even rippin’
Off words like ballistic missile
What, you didn’t like to my lyrical pistol?
Don’t worry I won’t blow the whistle
You in a pinch?
Musta been a cliché
But all in all… that still makes you my b*tch

Seriously, learn to put your lyrics into bars.
Do you understand the concept of a beat and flow?

Yo, jeffs seriously dog that sh*ts getting old. You runnin' your mouth off to everyone and their cousin in how they s*ck and your all that. You may not say "I am the sh*t" but I see through you dog, you put others down to compensate for your short comings in something in your life. I understand this is a release and do whatever floats your boat dude if it makes you feel better about yourself. Frankly, I feel sorry for you in not having fun with all this and you getting your feathers ruffled when ANYONE trys to josh you or battle you.
You got power complex issues if you are saying this is your forum, like someone needs your permission to post LMFAO. Please son, you got mommy issues too huh got stuffed animals still chillin on your bed kid? Use to get bullied in school and now your going to grow your first hair and now since your voice cracked you think you can talk like a big boy by typing retarded sh*t that really no one cares about? As you can see ppl still post and rap and battle and everything having a fun time.....So seriously stop trying to run sh*t dog its getting old.

I'm hopin'
U'll be gropin'
Your own balls 'til u chokin'
U must be jokin'
Sayin' u're kosher
I'mma give you closure
Your chapter is over
PSSST, come a little closer
So I can bust my daddy's dxck in yo ear
Eat these nuts, shut up & disappear
31 years old & u still have no career
Actually it's time for a pap smear
U my lil' bxtch, I still own u
Lyrically bone you
Even let u moan too
See, lemme show u
How I still win when I don't take it serious
I spit that hot shxt and yours is just hideous
I'mma beat these streets
With your mom on my leash
Like maafxcka please
I put your flow to sleep
I send ur shxt to Bombay, the memories I'll keep
Give u Indian names 'G', how ya like Sukhdeep ?
See I'm just fxckin' with ya Guns
U said u wanted to have fun
So I thought I'd come
and give u & ur mum some

Originally Posted by Molotova

I'm hopin'
U'll be gropin'
Your own balls 'til u chokin'
U must be jokin'
Sayin' u're kosher
I'mma give you closure
Your chapter is over
PSSST, come a little closer
So I can bust my daddy's dxck in yo ear
Eat these nuts, shut up & disappear
31 years old & u still have no career
Actually it's time for a pap smear
U my lil' bxtch, I still own u
Lyrically bone you
Even let u moan too
See, lemme show u
How I still win when I don't take it serious
I spit that hot shxt and yours is just hideous
I'mma beat these streets
With your mom on my leash
Like maafxcka please
I put your flow to sleep
I send ur shxt to Bombay, the memories I'll keep
Give u Indian names 'G', how ya like Sukhdeep ?
See I'm just fxckin' with ya Guns
U said u wanted to have fun
So I thought I'd come
and give u & ur mum some

O’ no here we go……Marco….
Polo…
Your sh*t is in slow’mo
I’m stuck on auto, rippin’ up your rap flow
They say that I’m loco
You know who I am, even if you don’t know
I’m that big boot steppin’… on your big toe
Time for you to let go…
Your just that side show

Me? I’m the main attraction
Action Jackson…given you that satisfaction
That stuff that you crave
My name is Dave
And when I wave
I wave with my middle finger extended intended
For you to be offended
As I catch you with two rights and then a left
I spit that boom
That clears the room
And leaves your whole family deaf

Bad intentions…
Precise incisions…
Cuttin’ tendons
Trick you into believing in false religions
Like you just witnessed lyrical visions
And if you can’t stand the heat then get the f*ck out of the kitchen
I’m getting sick and tired of your f*ckin’ b*tchin’
Lord, I’m bored
Slap you in the face
Knock that taste… of jeffs… paste
Out of your gor
Then make you walk on all fours
slit your vocal cords
Then come back around and stab you in the throat with my… pork sword
I’m like that Audi R8
Rappin’ up against a four bang ford that’s 4 minutes to late

So b*tch please,
Freeze
Drop to yo’ knees
Hold up… Stop s*ckin’…I gotta sneeze
Ah sh*t, when you gag you look Chinese
What a tease
And when you seize……up
What the f*ck
Just tip me in my tip cup
Now that we’re done
Yes I’m guns, no puns
Gotta run…but thanks again for s*ckin’ on the big one
And ……..yeah …..sorry you gagged and bit your tongue
Tried to swallow and hacked up a lung
Then flung that cum to kingdom come
But b*tch you’re the one who came to get some

Originally Posted by gunsofarsenal

Yo, jeffs seriously dog that sh*ts getting old. You runnin' your mouth off to everyone and their cousin in how they s*ck and your all that. You may not say "I am the sh*t" but I see through you dog, you put others down to compensate for your short comings in something in your life. I understand this is a release and do whatever floats your boat dude if it makes you feel better about yourself. Frankly, I feel sorry for you in not having fun with all this and you getting your feathers ruffled when ANYONE trys to josh you or battle you.
You got power complex issues if you are saying this is your forum, like someone needs your permission to post LMFAO. Please son, you got mommy issues too huh got stuffed animals still chillin on your bed kid? Use to get bullied in school and now your going to grow your first hair and now since your voice cracked you think you can talk like a big boy by typing retarded sh*t that really no one cares about? As you can see ppl still post and rap and battle and everything having a fun time.....So seriously stop trying to run sh*t dog its getting old.

Are you serious?
I'm giving constructive criticism, you're the idiot that is incapable of using constructive criticism to your advantage.
I never said I was "all that"

Short comings? I don't see any short comings mate,
I got designer shades just to hide my face.
And I wear them around because I'm cooler than you.

I'm not trying to stop any one posting, I'm trying to make you see that your lyrics can be improved. Open your eyes moron.

Guys chill out haha. It's for a forum dudes. We come to chill here and just mess around right? No one here is coming here to just to make someone feel like **** or tell them how bad they are. We help each other out, and there isn't any point getting mad like this at one another because it's not helping us get better at all. Just take it out on rap battles, and who wins, wins. Leave it at that and try again later guys. No reason to keep getting angry lol.

The true problem with Gunsofarsenal is that he REALLY thinks he's the best on this forum, he won't recognize that his lyrics aren't all that. That's why he keeps on feeling offended, it's ridiculous for someone of that age to not understand it's constructive criticism. If you don't get people mad, they won't do their best to improve, that's all. Aaaah who gives a shxt ?

Originally Posted by Molotova

The true problem with Gunsofarsenal is that he REALLY thinks he's the best on this forum, he won't recognize that his lyrics aren't all that. That's why he keeps on feeling offended, it's ridiculous for someone of that age to not understand it's constructive criticism. If you don't get people mad, they won't do their best to improve, that's all. Aaaah who gives a shxt ?

Molotova, yo stop I've seriously have had enough of your so called "constructive criticism" for real you can mask it all you want in saying thats all your doing but come on .....little jabs at peoples raps or grammar like wording it....."thats sh*t man, you need to give up"..... is noooo way trying to help someone out. So cut the sh*t out and man up if not for the forum then for yourself yo. Because I have never once bashed anyone up in here except for you and jeffs....and thats not because of you guys rapping which is cool with me.....its the king and queen attitude I find retarded and the snide remarks which are not called for seriously. I am and have been up in here to have FUN, period. You and jeffs started with the bullsh*t tryin' to run sh*t and making remarks that are in no shape or form, "constructive criticism". I just jumped in and thought it was a free little battle type thing going on....its a battle yo ...you don't have to turn it into a WAR lol.
Again I am not here to or never have claimed I am the best by no means, Your putting words in my mouth and seriously you need to just worry about your own little raps and chill out and do your thing. its ok if all of us are ok at rapping theres plenty to go around no one has to be or IS the best. Lets just have fun and do this in the name of hip hop music and lyrics....squash the hate yo.....I am extended an olive branch out....its up to you dawg......in the words of our loving brother Rodney King......"can we all just get along"?

jeffs jeffs jeffs.....seriously dude using lyrics from a pop song? To attempt to school me or insault me because you believe your cooler than me? MATE? yeahhhhhhh thats cool LMFAO. You got me ahhhhhh d*mn yo hurt me bad I must say. I'll tell you what I will quit and pack it up now because I do think so highly of your opinions. lol..and you never once said sh*t about my lyrics...its been low blows just attempts to discredit me as a person yo. You and molo are good I never said your not. I have only said your not the king or queen up in here and there is a difference in that. Its hasn't been just me either, if you say something like "the wording needs work yo" THATS constuctive criticism NOT .....your commits like......."f*cking a waste" now HOW is that constructive? Come the F*ck on MATE don't piss on my leg and tell me its f*cking raining. You get your little jollies off in poppin' off at the mouth and talking smack about others raps. The real reason you don't like me... You have your little panties all up in a bunch because I didn't kiss you a** and thank you a hundred times or give you the respect that YOU think everyone up in here should give you, thats what this all boils down to. MORON!!!!!

Originally Posted by 020Jeffs

Are you serious?
I'm giving constructive criticism, you're the idiot that is incapable of using constructive criticism to your advantage.
I never said I was "all that"

Short comings? I don't see any short comings mate,
I got designer shades just to hide my face.
And I wear them around because I'm cooler than you.

I'm not trying to stop any one posting, I'm trying to make you see that your lyrics can be improved. Open your eyes moron.

Alright, not hating but this whole post just seemed very contradictory. If your calling him an idiot, and a moron that's not constructive criticism. Also you say you never said you were all that.... and then you quote a song about how your all that. I do think guns has some point of you having a power complex issue, that you can't let anyone be better than you because you want to feel like your the best at something in your life, but I haven't really read much of any of these posts. That's just the impression you sent off too me.