Alright, someone start us off. Since we have a rap section now, lets see what you got. But remember the 'Review' part of the name as well. Give some feedback, not "You suck *** bro" just point out the pluses and the minuses of their verses.
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Official Battle Thread.
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Start it off...
Just flick that switch and give me a reason,
Im not some trick ***** so dont ya be teasin,
Iv got more sick flows than a ***** in season,
Allergic to ***** mcs coz i cant stop sneezin,
Not susceptible to colds wiv flows so freezin,
My metaphorical blows got all my foes wheezin,
Take slow breaths & realise ya outta ya league,
I bestow deaths on mcs through battle fatigue,
Or just blow out ya sweed for lines so rubbish,
Ya feelin sluggish? Ya wont ever get published,
Rhymes do no damage? mine will split-ya-cabbage,
Im the true spitting image of a spitting-savage,
Most of you emcees aint even hitting-average....
JD -
Im the main man on the scene
Every rappers dream
Time to spit these bars
Rip the beat from seam to seam
I make the haters drool
Thats how i rule
Like a shark in a pool
Cus im swimming with fools
You and freinds
Watch your whole group try
But you dont come to watch me win
I come to watch you cry
No lie about my fineness
You cant deny it
The fact that im royal
So just call me your highness
Theres no getting by this
Physical destruction
Mowing down these rappers
Without any interruption
just thought id spit a few bars before the real pro's come ^_^ -
Well, I’mma have my first shot at a rap battle while the pro’s ain’t here as well
We don’t come to watch you win, you got that right
We come to watch you lose and for you to cry
‘Cos I’mma fry you to the sky
With the pressure I’ll apply
You gotta be kidding me, you never royal
‘Cos you see we wipe the floor with you
And it’s true: we even leave the poo
‘Cos the s**t’s too good for your face to spoil
Physical destruction? How ‘bout destroy your rap
As good at rapping as a fat person running
So shut your trap
As I still further go on the attack
Give it back, I don’t care
I’d like to see how your lyrics compare
And how they fare up to mine
Show me the goods, don’t waste my time
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Mess with this 'white' boy ya high like cocaine,
I spit flames like my grill is dowsed in propane,
Emcees slinging gat's but they aint got no aim,
Thinkin they got winning rap's but got no game,
False claims droppin rhymes under a false name,
Cant paint pictures wiv words say bye to fame,
Time to get real coz ya image is lame & cheesy
This rap shits easy but my mind thinks queasy,
I'm sick in the head but i'm ill to the feeling,
When this dog barks i got you cats-up-a-tree,
Flows like a tidal wave causing a catastrophe,
Emcees in this trade cant-hold-a-candle-to-me
Im staying above all on top like a damn canopy,
Id have ya tower's fallin callin 9/11 in a rush,
If only i had da powers to do damage like bush,
My mind moves fast ya emcees shouldnt pursue,
Brain's the definition of a porche 0-60 in 2.2
JD -
Man me gettin on this thread... for you boys its so sad
like da three of you on a journey just lost your comrade
i feel bad, not really.. i have very little emotion
simply turn hyde on btches when i drink the potion
but your girl likes my motion..by the way she told me
she left you a present at your bed side...jergens lotion
hopefully by this time u guys have a plan of attack
my lyrics lately have been givin heart problems
thats cardiac..fall to da floor dead is the common act
grab a stack of note books, I'll take on all 4 of them
cuz nobody is gonna get at me better on this forum -
I'm morning freshness, Awake'em like breakfast, Restless
I'm just trying to perfect my essence,
Your saying your the best at this rap ****,
You dont know what the definition of a best is??
Not saying I am but yet i try till I'm breathless,
Me and my computer are about to crash...
but i bet I walk from the wreckage,
I'm scarless while he wondering where his flesh is!
Your all like open book quizes, ****, I'm wonderin where the test is,
Runnin to my kitchen, guess yall comin for my lesson,
Cause this be the heat better come with aggression,
Rhymes like bullets i only blast for my protection,
Spill plasma in all directions my slug love will take ya breath away
Now take a gasp for affection,
They need to rest it i give'em 'mess' in my 'message',
Flowing like a great now my 'age' is in question,
Sleeping aint a option so I daze on perfection,
The rhymes turn me on so my pen got an erection,
Emcee's talkin tough i set'em right like correction,
Cause yall aint scoring let alone is you impressin,
Through all the tough talk all i see is *** in your impression... -
This is a battle board so whats with all the ***** when you swear... it ruins the drops!!
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hahah just spell it alil differently
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You can't even spit rhymes in simple sixteen bars
Definitely not a good rapper, yet alone a superstar
Sniper killin from afar rapped so long I have battle scars
Bomb you so hard after this your mouth will be ajar
Like a soldier bringin onslaught to this thread
Experienced fighter, fought till I was almost dead
Make you so mad twist your thoughts make ya see red
Usin lyrics not my fist, help your mind grow force fed
Start using rhythm, beat and accomplish a feat
Can't handle the heat ***** get out the oven
The teacher is me, student is you take a seat
In reality your about as cool as Mclovin
Won't hold me back my chain has broken loose
Death and pain on the way tie up your noose
Rhyme like dr.Seus and demented like pin head
Bomb ignited you lit my fuse, your over it's already said -
Im taken kings off the board faster than checkers.. i never fail-man!
Il make these Mc's stop "posting" like i murdered the "mail-man"...
Iv got so many "hot 16's" you'd think this was "child porn"...
A ghetto vet? No! tho il make mcs bite the dust,
Ever threat over my position then fight i must,
I never sweat over a collision i ignite and bust,
All in my sight get rushed i just might if pushed..
Slaughter ya in one coz my height ya cant touch,
My boa constrictor rhymes so tight they crush..
Balboa da victor wit punchlines right to da guts!
Call me noah 'coz i take'em out 2-by-2! its nuts...
Every bars a fist ya still wanna cook up ya beef?
Ya wanna spar wit this? then il f*ck-up ya teeth!
None can par wit this you'll be mock of da week..
Coz il knock you out on ya own block in da street,
Your all like "budgies" coz ya talk is so "cheeaap",
See... JD's not like most.... i dont spit to a beat,
No drums or heat just my words writ on a sheet,
Iv a pad full of rhyme, i call it stackin the ammo,
It comes the right time im like an attackin animal,
So f*ucking tough to remove like plaque an enamel...Last edited by JD101; 12-01-2010 at 11:20 AM.
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Just No.
Originally Posted by JD101
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?? whats up??
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It honestly lost me. Like I guess it bothers me that it isn't spaced out, I just find it harder to read when it's cluster ****ed. But I have a feeling the Hyphens were suppose to imply the stop for the beat, I think if you took those out and spaced it that it would be a better read. Like just after every four lines make a space, I didn't read it yet so I don't know how it is. The hyphens were bothering me haha. That's just my opinion though.
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Every track iv wrote over the last 10 years are the same, all 16 bars together for both verses in a track, im not going to explain multis but there the reason for - in between words
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Iv always wrote my verses like that, iv never seen anyone write a rap verse with a big ***** space every 4 bars it doesn't work for me, full 16!! and if its a full track its a 16 bar verse, 4-8 bar hook, then another 16 bar verse... Don't go to a real battle web-site if you can't read mine! they would eat you alive kid!
Work on getting off basic rhyme or as some would say "Up ya game" -
My game is upping. Go read my original posts. Your stuff is honestly just bad. If you haven't noticed the best battlers here have a space between their four bars. Jeffs and Molotova both do it. If you can beat Jeffs in a rap battle I may actually consider listening to your nonsense. Thanks.
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His hyphens were there to highlight that its all one word, so you see the rhyme better. But at the same time, you guys are arguing over a spacing between the lyrics... when you rap out loud it doesn't matter either way. But then JD says a real battle web site would eat us alive, giving the impression he comes from some hardcore place. My question is, what the **** determines a real battle web site? Its the same thing, people rapping against each other. But I think JD's version of rapping is the more 'ghetto' talk about yo momma and *****s kind, while we tend to do a more educated form.
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Well, prefer the more educated form anyway
I play off how they claim they're better than me and stuff and try not to big myself up. And I like the hyphens in there, it shows how the words should flow. And whether I space after 4 bars depends on how I write my verse. Writing like JD I would space but if my style wan not so regular, the earlier post, then I wouldn't.
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I think JD is actually good (most of the time), and the hyphens don't bother me, it's 16 bars, so it's aayt. And it's like Zachre says, when you rap it out loud, it doesn't matter anyway. I feel offended though, please define a real battle website if this ain't ?
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