Nobel Prize

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  1. Molotova's Avatar

    Molotova said:

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    This is something I wrote (to a friend) and I'm posting it to make sure y'all know I can do more than just battling and dissing people.


    U wear the veil and never fail to entail great details
    Never derail 'cuz good always prevails,
    Now allow me to rephrase my ways & amaze
    Turn cliches into nowadays, got wordplay to praise

    You, because I admire your aspire for something higher
    U inspire me & I require you receive anything you desire
    U're so humble that I stumble over my words and it hurts
    it occured that it has no worth if I assert I tried from birth

    Not to mention the good intentions, no evil interventions
    U got the comprehension to not question any Godly suspension
    Undergo your faith and still your path is always straight
    'Cuz whatever waits at the gate of death does not negociate

    Aware but not scared 'cuz you prepared for what is there
    And I swear when I compare us I declare myself unfair
    But here's an honest surprise, I surmise u'll like what I devised
    All rise as I hand you: My improvised nobel prize
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  2. Zachre's Avatar

    Zachre said:

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    Very nice Molo! You kept a constant flow and didn't diminish the meaning of your words. Kudos
  3. Jfam said:

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    Nice!!! That's a hell load of rhymes and stuff! If only i could flow so freely with that amounts of rhymes and stuff 'cos it'd make writing a whole lot easier Nice flow and i agree with Zachre completely
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    VivaPalestina said:

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    This is so good Mol! I will try working on a reply I promise nothing though
  5. Hardestpersonalive said:

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    The lyrics were genial and appreciative. At least somebody cares about their friends in this world. But if you ask me I give an 8.9/10
  6. Eyvn said:

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    I love your flow. You make the multis and not take anything away from the words themself. Definitely a lot of talent right there.
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    You're the Queen of Rap for sure Molotova,
    Dissin or kissin you can throw it all ovah
    Got a rhyme for all rhythms every time every place
    Bringin ATL to an even higher state of grace.

    Even I can write nice sometimes too

    Hugs dear M, I truly admire your talents.
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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