Revive...is it any good?

(Verse 1)
To all those who have loved and who have lost.
To missed opportunities and endless heartaches.
To the times we miss the most.

To the moments that we'll cherish.
To turning back time in your mind.
To never letting them slip away.

To feel like you can't go on anymore.
To time stopping and looking into their eyes.
To seeing them walk through the door.

This song is for you.

(Verse 2)
To all those who missed their second chance.
To sleepless nights thinking about what could've been.
To nightmares and blank stares starring the one you love.

To finding a way to get back what you miss.
To doing anything for just another moment alone.
To plans that never seemed to work out.

This song is for you.

(Chorus)
I know I haven't been around for so long.
But can you please forget the time gone?
I know I'm asking so much again.
But where have you been,
all my life?

I will revive you.

(Bridge/Pre-Chorus)
I can't,
go on.
I want,
you more.
I can't,
go on.
I need,
you now.

So show me who you are,
and tell me what you see.
I love you and you loved me.

We cared and laughed and shared.
And we had the best of times.
We counted our love in nickels and dimes.
But now we can't go on.

(Chorus)
I know I haven't been around for so long.
But can you please forget the time gone?
I know I'm asking so much again.
But where have you been,
all my life?

(Post-Chorus)
I won't
go on.
I need,
you now.
I won't,
go on.
I loved,
all along.

I will revive you.

I will revive you..

I will revive you...

I like this song. Nice message in it, flows nicely. Keep up the good work.

Originally Posted by LetThatFeverPlay

I like this song. Nice message in it, flows nicely. Keep up the good work.

Hey thanks for the reply, just what I was looking for. Check out my other ones.

Really good song. I felt kinda like it was speaking to me.

Originally Posted by LyricsAngel

Really good song. I felt kinda like it was speaking to me.

Thanks! That's what I wanted people to say. I tried to capture at least one feeling that everyone feels in their life, if not all of them. Thanks again.

i love it! the bridge fit in so gooood. Good job

Dittos on all comments, and I'm especially with Steve0 on the bridge. I think that really brings it home. And yeah the emotion, I felt it too. Very very nice.

These are good lyrics, they make the reader feel the story.

That is brilliant

Bravo, to this and all your posts! All 7 of my thumbs are up ^^