(Correcting translation request) Toni Qattan - A7lef Yameen

I try to translate this song... most likely fus7a arabic (ta9riban).... but still can't finnish my translation (I translate it later by later and find the meaning turn out weird) and do not understand the story about this song.... please someone explain me (the story about)....or maybe my translation's wrong....please correct me...

Toni Qattan - أحلف يمين
(I’m swear an oath)

بسنين وأيام العمر وأشواق أحر من الجمر
With many years and days’ ages, and the longing burning from the ember
أحلف يمين
I’m swear an oath
برموش غطاها السحر وخدود من لون الزهر
Mascara covered it magic and cheeks in bloom colour
وعيونك الحلوين
and your beautiful eyes
(Repeat)

Chorus:
أحلف يمين الله على وعد قطعته وياك
I’m swear an oath o God, on a promise I break it for you
الله عليك الله على احساسي حبيبي معاك
O God for you o god, with my feeling my love with you
(Repeat)

بالليل ساكن هالشعر والصوت نغمات وشعر
With the night place the poem and sounds, I tunned and composed
أحلى عذاب
most beautiful disaster*(??)
بدموع حبات الندى وضحكات تهرب بالمدى
Tears drop and laughs escaping from space
وشفافك العناب
and your clear ???(***??)
(Repeat)

Repeat Chorus

I have been trying to translate this song for a few months but what I founded seemed so weird ^^
I'm happy to have find somebody with me :P
This is what I founded dont laught at me ^^


بسنين وأيام العمر وأشواق أحر من الجمر
With the years & the days of life & the longing burning from the ember
أحلف يمين
I swear by God
برموش غطاها السحر وخدود من لون الزهر
The eyelashes covered the magic & the cheeks with bloom color
وعيونك الحلوين
& your beautiful eyes

أحلف يمين الله على وعد قطعته وياك
I’m swear by God, I'll break the promise it with you
الله عليك الله على احساسي حبيبي معاك
God be with you & with my feeling for you my love

بالليل ساكن هالشعر والصوت نغمات وشعر
Tonight there are poem & sounds, I I wrote a poem
أحلى عذاب
most beautiful pain
بدموع حبات الندى وضحكات تهرب بالمدى
With tears she loved the dew & escaped from the past with laught
وشفافك العناب
& your lips just like grapes ?!??

hahaha my translation makes no sense at all !! We need help :P

Originally Posted by Aliciaah

I have been trying to translate this song for a few months but what I founded seemed so weird ^^
I'm happy to have find somebody with me :P

Me too ... and SURE we BADly really need the explaination.... please2 somebody...

ya3tikon il3afye banat Just give me a sec let me hear the song

Originally Posted by VivaPalestina

ya3tikon il3afye banat Just give me a sec let me hear the song

shukran ya nour... you've lighten our hope.... zai syumu2a....

Great work Alicia, just a few tiny points

Originally Posted by Aliciaah

بسنين وأيام العمر وأشواق أحر من الجمر
With the years & the days of life & the longing burning from the ember

longings hotter than coals

Originally Posted by Aliciaah

أحلف يمين الله على وعد قطعته وياك
I’m swear by God, I'll break the promise it with you
الله عليك الله على احساسي حبيبي معاك
God be with you & with my feeling for you my love

I'll take an oath by God on the promise we made together

qata3to ma3ak means we cut together, he's not going to 'cut' the promise though

Originally Posted by Aliciaah

بالليل ساكن هالشعر والصوت نغمات وشعر
Tonight there are poem & sounds, I I wrote a poem
أحلى عذاب
most beautiful pain
بدموع حبات الندى وضحكات تهرب بالمدى
With tears she loved the dew & escaped from the past with laught
وشفافك العناب
& your lips just like grapes ?!??

In the night resides the poem, and the voice is a melody and poem
most beautiful pain
With dew tears and laughs that escape
and fullsome lips

Toni Qattan - أحلف يمين
(I'll take an oath)

بسنين وأيام العمر وأشواق أحر من الجمر
Many years and the days of life, and the longing hotter than coals
أحلف يمين
I'll take an oath
برموش غطاها السحر وخدود من لون الزهر
The eyelashes covered the magic and the cheeks with bloom color
وعيونك الحلوين
and your beautiful eyes

أحلف يمين الله على وعد قطعته وياك
I'll take an oath by God on the promise we made together
الله عليك الله على احساسي حبيبي معاك
God be with you and with my feeling for you my love

بالليل ساكن هالشعر والصوت نغمات وشعر
In the night resides the poem, and the voice is a melody and poem
أحلى عذاب
most beautiful pain
بدموع حبات الندى وضحكات تهرب بالمدى
With dew tears and laughs that escape
وشفافك العناب
and fullsome lips

yeslam ideki ya Noor !! Thank you so much <3.