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(Chorus)
He broke my heart,
Stole my pride,
Left me there,
There to die.
No fair-well,
Let’s be friends.
And who ever thought,
That this could be the end.
And who ever knew,
That two words could hurt this much,
This much, but I’m holding on.

When he looks at me,
Would he ever see,
How bad he hurt me.
The walking, good,
The talking, bad,
I never knew,
He was this sad.

How we argued, when we ever talked,
He ended it with a last walk.
We were working it out, so well,
But that look in his eye made me tell.
(Chorus)

All I say, is I’m sorry,
But baby.
I loved you.
You ripped my heart,
Didn’t put it back,
Left it there,
That’s a fact.
I’m doing to you,
What you did to me,
Walking away,
Don’t you see.

(Chorus)

There’s a boy here,
Telling me he loves me.
I’m going with him,
Not missing you, baby.

When he looks at me,
I see his heart,
Not at all ever tart.
His eyes shining brighter,
Than yours.
His voice so pure,
Unlike yours, to endure.
He has the light,
That shines so bright,
Giving me truth, love, and kindness.

He fixed my heart,
Gave me pride.
Stands right there,
‘Till we die.
No fair-well,
Not a peep,
Now I’m ready,
for the next leap.

But you,
Broke my heart,
Stole my pride,
Left me there,
There to die.
No fair-well,
Let’s be friends.
And who ever thought,
That this could be the end.
End.
End.
End.

Baby I loved you,
But when you left me standing there.
Rip in my heart,
A giant tear,
Formed along,
We don’t deserve the fate we got,
But this is, this is the end of my song.



My inspiration came from experience with friends, but in a deeper relationship point of view. PS I'm having a hard time deciding a name for the song, please help, Hope you liked it... :)

'My Heart' was all i can plunderfor a name :P