Banned my advances

This is a rap I wrote on request, it's for this guy that wants to rap about how he's in love with a girl that's already with someone.


Baby you're so fly, makes me wanna be the guy that makes you smile
My lady, you're so fine that I can't deny, I like your style
On my mind all the time and when I rhyme I try
To not write about my girl in every line, it's her eyes

She's got me hypnotized, I fantasize about the two of us
As I improvise, I realise that I must be fooling, 'cuz
She got a man so she can't give me a chance
And I understand, as she banned my advances

Maybe she'll see I'm everything she needs me to be
Baby, be real, only when you're near me you feel free
I'm your best friend and you pretend that's where it ends
Better think again, 'cuz I intend to be your man

Treat you like a treasure, be here just for your pleasure
Feed you my lecture, though my esprit u can't measure
Whatever, better get ready for the day you'll say:
'Let's get together, no mo' love letters from today'

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He's hittin' you and you're too pretty, it's a pitty boo
I get to u yet you're not permitted see it's shitty too
Show up at school all black and blue 'cuz he's a fool
I keep my cool and I get back to u, tell u I'm through

For all I know tomorrow he got you killed, so listen and sit still
Try to follow my sorrows, the dude is ill, bxtchin' about his will
While he doesn't care what you think, ya see he's already got everything
It isn't fair, what life brings, you should be the queen, yet he wants to be the king

If you were my highness, I'd overload you with kindness
The kind that's priceless, come closer, my love is timeless
Kiss you to sleep every night and hold u tight 'til you catch some z's
Keep u close all the time, treat you right so u see we match indeed

Breakfast in bed instead of knockin' you half dead,
Put cheese on ur bread instead of fxckin' up ya head
Just believe me 'cuz I'm fo' real, see u know how I feel
Be with me and I'll kneel in the first 3 weeks, it's a deal

This is really what I'm going through right now, but her boyfriend doesn't beat her or else I would kill him. Its a tough situation though, she is scared that breaking up with him might be a mistake because they've dated so long. Its why I wrote "The Risk" in the lyrics section

I've read 'The Risk' yesterday and I really liked it, but why did you post it in the lyrics section ? I think it's rappable.

It is, and I probably will rap it. I wasn't really looking at the sections, and plus I wasn't sure what I wanted it to be yet. So it was just lyrics!