This is my first time here and at writing something so please check it out

Wake up in the morning dribble on my face and di*k in my hand
try'n to relive the dream that the sandman command
drowsy and drained from the weekends
hyper-activity and festivities feeling effects of the dawns activity
nega-tively whats next to me?
300 pounds of beastly - obesity now in captivity
im in the nitty-gritty
meet be look'n like a twisty
she got venereal diseases
im feeling sh#tty reliving the night that brought me to this
monstrous bit*h of a hill billy

i must have had about 30 beers
5 shots of jager with tequila chasers
bourbon, gin and vodka alcoholics monster
martini slicer, perry pear cider
sambucca to scotch tingle in my crotch

thats all i got so far let me know what you think

I like this quite a bit actually, you should definitely continue it. The flow and the rhymes are good in my opinion and the content's good as well. One thing I noticed though: are you a dude or a girl 'cos you seem to be implying both in the lyrics. One moment you're with a d*ck in ur hand (unless it's ur own?) and then you're on about her? It might be obvious but I'm not sure. It's just something I noticed, you don't have to answer if you don't wanna but I'd just like to know

thanks ill keep working on it and im a dude haha the di*k in hand is my own im talking about... ill up date it when finished thanks for your commet