Just 'cuz I got bored ...

Ayo ATL
Wassup ?

A la bien cousin, la famille ...

Envoi le mic à Marseille on l'fait (à la bien)
Pour les mecs en bas des blocs on l'fait (à la bien)
Pour les frangins enfermés on l'fait (à la bien)
La famille, t'as compris ?

Ma jeunesse passe des nuits à se tuer à PES,
à grater des fesses sur msn ou myspace
Elle casse sa tirelire pour enrichir Konami
Elle consume plus d'herbe que les vaches de Kamini
Elle balade sans stress en TN ou en Converse,
Elle avance dans la vie sans avoir de GPS
Elle pert son calme quand Sarko ouvre la bouche,
Quand pour sauver le monde Bush enfile sa cape rouge
Elle est kahlouche, bougnoule ou gawri,
Elle rêve de vivre en cosmopolitanie
Elle a le monde comme voisin de palier,
Et ça s'entend dans sa manière de parler
Elle aime se saper, draguer, chambrer,
Se taper des barres de rire avec l'amitié
Elle gagne sa vie en nettoyant le Mac Do',
Et quand elle drible c'est la joga bonito

Well, there's that rhyme overdub coming into effect and I'm already loving it

thought id post one of my youtube audios for ppl to have a listen to - lol :P didnt think of using youtube!

made this ages ago... think 2 years ago actually its only short - lyrics are...

"An empty soul full of holes cold and void
lets analayze the boy - learn why hes destoryed
he employs such tactics of drastic action
emotional traffic on complecated traction
reactions slow but a dedicated liar
he instigates fires but they burn in control
still he learns slow but he's knowledge where it counts
taken many turns so horrid but an ounce
bounces him back even though still on the wrong track
long cracks expand how the hell he's stand it?
well through self control he's way off of the planet
yet its thanks to this that he knows survival
unfortantley the down side stays his rival
eyes full of tears not a girlfriend for years
no family or kids thats emotional fatality
approachable insanity just round the corner
down them shots danny damn how'd this happen?
should i spell it out well its the same old pretty much
its shitty but look how a childhood antic
got his brain all manic how the ****s he manage?
and even worse technically really he's not a victim
which begs the question - environment or choice?
regardless his mind remains hardly harmless
thankgod he aint heartless thanks to his mother
so close he came to that psychopath route
that truth he simply cant choose to loose
but bruised and blue i dunno about you
i still ****ing hate him after all that they did
still just a kid and yet look at what i done saw
with such eyes sore it was of my own occord
appualed? well you dunno the half of it..."

i never finished it!

Originally Posted by Jfam

Well, there's that rhyme overdub coming into effect and I'm already loving it

Yeah, you see I listen to you when you say something useful !

You RAWK!!!! YEAYYY!!!

Dannyday -liking that rap, very good nice flow and rhythm, though I'm feeling you holding back at points like when you say f*cking, that or are you bleeping out the word?

Molotova - glad to see I'm listened to but I get the felling you think I sometimes come out with a load of ramble? :P

Hahaa, you get the wrong feeling then.

Lol, good to know. Btw, I got the beats up on YouTube now

Oh, Je me presente Molotova (hey)
Undercover (hey)
Le micro chauffe (hey)
Appèle moi Miss over (hey)
Moi j'innove (hey)
Depuis Radio Nova (hey)
Sur un son qui groove (hey)
Qui va raser ta touff (hey)
Pourquoi tu l'ouvre? (hey)
Quoi? qu'est ce que tu m'prouve (hey)
Ta carriere je creve (hey)
Comme Anna Kournikova (hey)
Vas-y tu me couvre (hey)
Bracage sur un convoi (hey)
Mon flow dans ta gova (hey)
J'attend salaire à Sheva(hey)
Le son t'acheve (hey)
Danse comme un cheval
Ici pa de philosophe (hey)
Ze reff a trop de zeuff (hey)
Vas-y j'souffle (hey)
Ze reff n'est pa love (hey)
Bouge la tete des you-voi (hey)
Les bourgeois deviennent ouf (hey)
G8 de bouffe (hey)
Ca vient d'Aulnay sous bois (hey)
Pas de son pour les te - boi (hey)
Je parle pas la langue de bois (hey)
C'est Ruskova (hey)
Senegalo tamba (hey)
Ton style est trop bof (hey)
Moi hamdouleh ca va (hey)


Me me me me me, me me me me me, me me me me me - me me Molotova
E e e e e e, e e e e e e, e e e e e e, e e e Ella (x2)

Nice flow there, even though I couldn't understand it I don't get bored or anything lovin it.

Another point though, if you don't plan on writing a full rap song you could do a 64 bar thing or something, so there's something longer and sustained for us to hear and for you to test your skills

Oh, but this is not something I wrote myself ! I just posted it so y'all could check it, that's all. It's an existing song, I just changed the lyrics here and there. Thanks for the comment though, I'll post another one of my own songs later this week.

Ohhhhh... ThTs why it was good...
Lol :P just kidding. I wanna hear the next one now. Is it gonna be longer or just another single verse?

I think it's gonna be just another single verse. I get stuck when I have to write a chorus. I used to have a friend singing them for me, but now I have to do it by myself and I stopped trying

Awww... Well u could still try a 64 bar rap, cos then there's no chorus all a chorus has to do is be catchy anyway

Maybe you're right, I might give it a try ...

Well, saying that makes choruses sound easy. They're just like writing a good verse. Unless u mean the 64 bar thing?

I meant the chorus thing. You make it sound easy

Sorry, they are hard but you gotta flow really well. I'd like to see a full song from you anyhow