Numb

Thread: Numb

Tags: atheist, heavy, lyrics, numb, rock
  1. Z234 said:

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    Numb

    (Spoken Intro)
    When I was young,
    Things were always right,
    but as i grow up,
    I realize the lies.
    I see the fight,
    Taking place between my inner self
    and my outer life.
    The battle has begun and
    It makes me feel forever numb.

    (Singing)(chorus)
    I feel numb (numb)
    Resistant to your love (love)
    Rejecting lies from above (hey!)
    Pushing away the faith
    Running toward,
    my own created fate.

    (softer singing)
    It hit me
    Like a bullet hitting bone
    That I was better of alone.
    The only thing you ever made
    Is everything that is fake.

    (Bridge)

    To you I am...numb (numb!)
    Resistant to your love (love!)
    Rejecting lies from above (hey!)
    Pushing away the faith
    Running toward,
    my own created fate.

    I found out
    Freedom isn't in your book
    Look at all the lives you took.
    I don't believe anymore
    Why don't you come down and settle the score?!?

    (Epic Solo)

    I feel numb (numb!)
    Resistant to your love (love!)
    Rejecting lies from above (hey!)
    Pushing away the faith
    Running toward,
    my own created fate.

    I feel numb (numb!)
    Resistant to your love (love!)
    Rejecting lies from above (hey!)
    Pushing away the faith
    Running toward,
    my own created fate.

    (Spoken outro)
    My heart can beat without you
    Life goes on today as planned.
    I wont return to you,
    I'm happy among your so called damned.


    Heavy song that would go with the type of beat you would hear from like Rise Against or heavy Sum 41
     
  2. PointZero's Avatar

    PointZero said:

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    Well, it's definitely good, but maybe a bit more verses? Because it seems a little bare right now. Definitely good though!
     
  3. Nanashi's Avatar

    Nanashi said:

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    I look forward to more of your work. This is very good, I would say!
     
  4. MoonRide*r*'s Avatar

    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Yeah me too, I missed commenting on this before because I was in too big of a rush. Nanashi thanks for bumping it

    Great work, and I love to read lyrics that seem so well developed as a song.
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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  5. Z234 said:

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    Thank you to those who reviewed this, its very much appreciated! Check out my new song Daggers of Deceit that will be posted soon if you want to see more of my lyrics. Thanks again!